do u watch 'Friends'?!?

OMG I am just completely blown away by your wonderful wording! You choose such pretty descriptions, and I am completely in love with your Edward (I'm Team Jacob by the way ^^) Of course, I'd rather see Bella with Jacob, hehe but Edward here is awesome. Love it!!

what a great short story

well, i must say, the lemon was one of the best i read here!

Well the whole story was a big ball of emotions, extreme lows to extreme highs.  I like that you included the acknowledgment that they knew they needed to really talk, but that physically they REALLY needed to reconnect with each other.  I think that is probably more real life, as the chemical reaction would push the reunion, and the emotional and intellectual would take over afterwards.  Good resolution!

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I would have to agree with you about keeping it short, I think it was a wise idea. Keeping it short and simple gives it so much depth and character. I think if you get a chance to write a sequel (even just one chapter) on how things develop that would be great, but if you don't it works to because it allows the reader the ability to make there own assumptions. I will have to read your other story as you are a great writer.

 it was nice.. I felt it did not fullfill its potential. It was good but not extraordinary as the rest of the story promised to be. The emotions were well portrayed but not as well as in previous chapers. The reason for her withdrawal was not enough for the reader to understand all of edwards suffering. For she had been cruel, and ruthless, it does not explain enough.  I still think you are a very accomplished writer and look forward to reading angsty stories you might have.

please, please, please...update!

PLEASE TELL ME YOU HAVEN'T ABANDONDED THIS LOVELY STORY.....! PLEASE CARRY ON!

i keep waiting  for an update, trying not to pry and nag...but i can't anymore. this is great story-i usually wait for at least 3 or 4 chapters to come up before i start adoring the story to see how it'll evolve...but with this one, there's just no way to stop me.

angst; rejected edward....vow...and mysterious bella...the twists-everything is original, and what is more important, perfectly written!

plese....an update?? :)

PLEASE TELL ME YOU DID NOT GIVE UP THIS STORY  2-6 CHAPTHER UP DATE PLEASE GIVE ME FIX =)  =(

I think I've not gotten across how much I truly love this story. This is the best written twilight story ( with a plot, not only smut) I've seen. I use to only read Harry Potter, and the fics are just better than twilight's. I didn't really liked the twilight saga that much, I just thought it'd be interesting to read fanfics about it. And this is one of-if not- the best I've read, and I've gone over the top tens and most reviewed and such. But this story makes my heart beat speed up, it makes me literally sad. I am miserable when Edward's miserable. Your Edward has so much depth and humanity than the original character had. Your Bella is so much stronger and confident than the original characters. Your characters are much more believable and their emotions are much stronger than the original characters. You write emotions very vividly and you have a gift for that. This story has so much promise, I just wanted to say that. 

Noooooo!!!  That was so, so, sad...

I need an update soon - please...   I was looking for an update for your other story and found this one..

I wish I could make you a banner but I'm not that technologically inclined.. UGH..