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Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Holy Fuck!!!!   I am at a loss for words at the moment.  This was sooooooooooo freakin good. 

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Well I just loved it!  I'm hoping you can continue this story :)

 

That last picture - provided us all with inspiration :)

Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

God, that was an amazing chapter!! I love the playfulness between them. I hope we will be seeing some items from Edward's list:).

Oh, and thanks for the shirtless pic-I NEVER get tired of that....

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I really love when Edward desperately wants Bella to wake up so they can have sex again. He was hilarious. The honeymoon sex at the house was great. It was also funny seeing Bella debate about the Cowgirl fantasy. Who would have thought that they would have gotten so many list items crossed off in the eighteen days of the honeymoon? 

Reviewer: Eiko007 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control

This it's soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo great!!! i've never read something like this before!!! it's so amazing!!! it's just a masterpiece!!! There’s no doubt of it!!! I just couldn’t stop myself from telling you that you’re the best!!! Really “The list” it’s the BEST!!! Well… just keep going xD i’ll keep reading xD good luck and congratulations for this amazing history xD… byebye.


PD: The thing with the candle was the best of all xD byebye

Reviewer: elfis (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Haha! So cool, can't w8 till she's a vampire :P

Reviewer: Slim2None (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Hurray!!!  Best Isle Esme ever! Thank you, thank you, thank you for giving them the honeymoon they (and we) deserved.   I'm going to have to reread that a few more times so I can enjoy all the sexy, amazing details.  The notebook entry at the end was very touching.  You rock, Laura!

Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

WONDERFUL!!!!It gets better and better with each chapter. Look forward to more.

 

 

 

Reviewer: xjennjennx (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

*jaw drops*

Awesome chapter - and that picture of Rob Pattinson, uh..  YUM!!

Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I WAS SO EXCITED WHEN I NOTICED THE NEW CHAPTER HAD BEEN POSTED, AND WHAT A CHAPTER!!!  IT'S LIKE RECEIVING AN UNEXPECTED GIFT.  YOU REALLY MADE MY DAY.  THANKS.  I'M REALLY NEW TO THIS WEB SITE AND THE WHOLE TWILIGHT WORLD, BUT I'M REALLY ENJOYING ALL OF IT.  MY HUSBAND IS TOO!! HAHA

Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

oh man! SUCH a good chapter! and that last picture of Rob was the whipped cream & cherry on top!

Reviewer: booboo_kitty (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

*bows to the Queen O' Smutt*

No words Laura babes, simply no words.

*again with the bowing because I can't think of words*

Reviewer: BelleDuJour (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

After that honeymoon, I need a shower!  Darn fine writing there, Laura.  Glad you're feeling better!  I did like the pictures at the end - that island place and bedroom are so beautiful!  Your comment on the very last picture made me laugh out loud.

Reviewer: ambermay89 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

I just love this story! I can't get enough!

Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Damn baby!! The sweet erotic love-making from the wedding chaper just gave way to the hotter than hell screwing!! I am having a really hard time typing this review because I can still see not nearly naked enough Rob on the screen and that little sexy tuft of hair just above the button of his pants is killing me.

Oh, sorry, review, right. I absolutely love your story, I've told you several times before. It is a rarity to mix such steamy scenes with such tender moments and humor. Well done, my dear, well done.

I hope the list didn't signify the end of the story. I am begging, literally on my knees, for the Edward in leather to be crossed off.

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

OMG each chapter keeps getting better and better.

Reviewer: everintruiged (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Oh dear god, that was extremely hot.  Whoa.  Definitely very, erm, satisfied!

Glad you're feeling better, and hopefully, we can get to the Edward Sundae soon?  Preferably in EPOV?  I just find lemons and teasing so much hotter that way. 

Lovely story, completely and totally addicted.  It helps that Edward's shirtless too.

Connie

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

mmmm!!!!

Reviewer: Michs95 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Wow, it is hot in here or is it just me?!!  I loved this chapter!!  It's about time Edward got his fantasy.  I can see where the picture of him inspired you, it would inspire me too (if I could get the thoughts onto paper!).  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

that chapter in Edward's words was "FUCKING GLORIOUS!"

Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

You know I had an articulate review all lined up for you, full praise for your ability to just keep getting better and better, loving the return of playful bella and edward, and just being sooo far ahead of any other fanfic its terrifying....  But then you posted that last pic and wow... just wow...

Reviewer: BeCullen1 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

that was so f*ckin hot.  Great job.  Well worth the wait.  And oh my Rob.

Reviewer: Bouqui (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Oh yeah that was so good :) You continue to amaze me ! I loved it, thanks sooo much.

Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

wow great chapter!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I hope you do a Edward list!

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