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Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Laura:
I love what you did with his bloodlust for her, changing from a curse to a calming effect....that was a lovely move. His torment during her dream was exquisite; I love how you give life to the thoughts we all know E struggles with. Then, when he actually gave in and went for it, his self talk was as awesome as it was hot. Their mutual thrill with the experience was so intense and wonderful. And hot. Did I fail to mention hot?!! And to end it all with them having sex without having sex, my goodness, woman, that was sheer genius. I'm pretty sure my panties exploded during that one. I keep thinking you cannot make this story hotter or more enticing, but damn, you outdo yourself every time!! Just remember, I signed up for the site so that I could review your story, so I will continue to give you my loves and kissies every chappie that you roll out. Yummy! :)
Reviewer: MrsCullen1987 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OH MY GOD! I am so not sure whether I can even find words to express what I think and feel about your whole story. I read all day long and I am sooo damn fucking "dazzled"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Do you know the statement "Sex is only good, when your neighbours smoke a cig afterwards" ? Well, I smoked a lot while reading ;)
Not even in my dreams I could have imagined what you brought to life - sooo intense, so real, so damn hot, soo without any taboos, so passionate and so full of love...
The development of your story is the most perfect thing I`ve ever read - I am really really deadly amazed and deeply moved. You kept perfect balance between the "naughty" stuff, a great story around it and of course the extraordinary love between Bella and Edward.
It is really such a precious piece of work, I can not thank you enough for every single word!!!!!! And I can`t wait to their wedding night ;)
After reading all of this, I know that sex with my boyfriend or anybody else could probably never be sooo damn fucking awesome as sex between Bella and Edward - sad but true, I think ;) So, instead of "Thank you Steph, now I`ll never find a man": "Thank you Laura, now I will never have such great sex" ;)
Really thanks a lot again for sharing your fantasies with us and finally relieve all the tension Mrs. Meyer has created over the years.
Can`t wait to read more!!! Lots of love and all best wishes from Germany,
a freaking dazzled and now slightly frustrated woman
PS: Maybe you could think about some more synonyms for the frequently a little often used adjective "exquisite" - just a thought.. :) :)
Author's Response: Okay, hangs head...you definitely called it right on the use of exquisite. But damn if it doesn't work for Edward. I'll try...
This was an awesome review--so glad you are enjoying! And, don't feel too bad if you never have sex like this...my mind thinks this shit up and I'M not having sex like this either. So go figure!
Reviewer: unicornaddict (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
What a good man Edward is! Well done on another fab chapter!
Reviewer: lily11211978 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
that was great please update soon.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
ok you are a god! this is absolutely the sexiest thing i've read. you have an amazing gift. thanks so much for sharing your talent with everyone.
PS your writing gave me some ideas that my bf loved. so thanks from him too.
Reviewer: Biter (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
you are AMZING of how you write!
your fan forever Sandy
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I'm a new reader and as much as I want to leave reviews for every chapter, I didn't because I just wanted to know what happened next! And the next, and the next...
This is amazing in epic proportions. I. LOVE. IT. Every single chapter. When I first looked at the list I was astounded by it. How on earth is she going to pull it all off? In weeks too, no less! But somehow, you managed to make them all flow beautifully together, with no stutter, no weird breaks or anything and they just lead to each other nicely. And best of all? They're believable. And they don't take away the essence of SM's story - not much anyway. The only thing I can think of is the tattoo. *grin*
So, kudos to you for writing such a phenomenal fic. You got me sitting right at the edge of my seat, wondering what will come next (ha, COME!) since everything is just so unpredictable.
Massive love for you, Laura Cullen. *mimes a heart with fingers*
Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That was so sweet... The idea of the concert, Bellas lullabye and all of that really touched me. It would have been the perfect evening for their first time. But I guess you wanna stay close to the original story so we'll have to wait till wedding night... which doesn't exactly make sense to me after all of that really more nasty stuff they've been already doing so far... ;-)) But never mind, I really enjoy reading your story! Update soon, please!!!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Can this get any better???? I THINK NOT!
You write this story like ain't nobody's business -- totally hot, tender, with tons of palpable tension.....just the BEST OF THE BEST. This is more than just a list, it encompasses all that two people who are absolutely enthralled with each other would want and then some. The vamp stuff just adds the forbidden fruit factor as well as the resolve to do things by the rules.
You got this thing going on like a nuclear missile nearing impact -- can't wait!
Reviewer: Aspen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Smokin' freaking hot. I love number 10.
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
whoa!!! is the end of the story? where's the next? when is the next chapter? just finished reading all 17 chapters and it is so freaking hot!!
can't wait for more. =)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That was spectacular! THe symphony is so in character it isn't even funny! It was my favorite part of the story so far (and I've been glue to my sceen since I founf it!)! Thanks for the quick update. Made my day!
Reviewer: tabs (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
damn it! you are a creative genious!!! i think youre my favourite person in the world right now! :)
Reviewer: tabs (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
you are a great writer and that has nothing to do with what you are writing... although that is great too! :)
Reviewer: ISparkleOnMyOwn (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Just so you know, I hit my head as I fell on the floor laughing, reading this!
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OH
MY
GOD!!!
That was simply EFFIN amazing. I keep saying this, I know, but DAMN IT! That was the BEST chapter yet. When you read something like that and you have to pause to go shower.. yeah.. it's good. DAMN good!
Keep them comin (and I mean chapters, not just bella and Edward..lol)
Awesome awesome awesome!!!
Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Fucking Amazing! Speachless! Can't wait til they consumate their marriage! Looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: Weredragon (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Unfortunatley that was so erotic my brain is mostly mush but I'll try to make this coherent. The Victoria Symphony Slash was a fantasic part of the story and I loved it. Edward's confidence was magic. Bella's sexy, feisty, assertive behavior was excellent. And Oh. My. teh Hot! was just...Gah...
I think that's the best I can do. But you did fantastic!
-H
Reviewer: andrewXonXfire (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Oh my god.
That. Almost convinced me to go straight.
Not wild about the oral, but that's just me and has nothing to do with your mad awesome pr0n skillz as a writer. XD
Please update sooooon. :3
xoxo.andrew.
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
wow what a hot chapter I love this story I can not wait 2 see what the nect chapter has to bring
Reviewer: mrsjjjcullen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
all i can say is WOW ... OMG it was soooooooooooo worth the wait ... this whole chapter from beginning to end WAS AMAZING!!
my goodness girl you have talent!! WOW WOW!!
i can't wait till the next chapter :)
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Holy cow, Laura. I didn't think #12 could be topped -- and then they went out on the balcony...*THUD* This story has slain me. You, woman, are the best!
Reviewer: Winelovers (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Wow! I love it!! I can't wait for your updates and am always on the edge of my seat begging for more and you certainly don't disappoint!
Reviewer: Alexis-Jane (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I needed a long shower after that one! Great Job!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
2699 reviews? You need 2700!
I've read this chapter a couple times now. What a beautiful, sexy love story.
Things you don't own: Twilight. Things you own: every single one of your fans. We're hanging on every word!
Author's Response: Wow, now you #2700 too! You rock!
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