Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I
Oh that was so sweet and romantic, the most perfect ending to a beautiful story. Edward taking her to all the places that have been important to them, that was so fabulous. Even the elevator, lol! But it is an important place for them, where they really met for the first time.
Thank you for this story, I'ven enjoyed it immensely from the first chapter on. Looking forward to reading more from you.
You forgot to tell us what Bella gave Edward for Christmas!!! A short epilogue, pleeeeeaaase??
Author's Response: It will be coming shortly! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: laurenaked (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I
Awww :) If only there was a man like that out there for real!! Great ending. Looking forward to reading more of your writing :)
-Lauren
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I
AH very sweet chapter. Even Edward's proposal was very sweet and thought out. I am glad Bella said yes. Hopefully you have a few more chapters to add so I will be waiting. Update soon. =)
Reviewer: penguinopus (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 17- Just you and I
But you never told us what Bella got Edward?
Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Loved it!!! Is was so sweet and heartwarming. A true love story.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
What an emotional chapter with Alice giving birth to little Jackson Edward then Renee's letter. I loved Bella seeing Edward holding his nephew and wanting that with him.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 15- Grand Gestures
What a romantic reunion. Great chapter.
Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
This is such an incredibly sweet story. I want an Edward Cullen kinda boyfriend now! :)
Reviewer: ColiCullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Ahhh Jackson Edward! That might just make it on my list of future baby names. I love your story! I hope we get a married and pregnant Edward and Bella!!
On another note, I had a boyfriend who was diagnosed with bi polar disorder. It is a terrible disease...
Reviewer: the_other_cullen_girl (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
that is sooo cute with the baby!!! but sooo sad with renee!!! As always ur brillient!!!
Reviewer: bryantjess (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
you rock my literary socks right off!
just thought you should know...
Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 14- Going home and letting go
Aw, this chapter brought tears to my eyes. Thank goodness he was there. You're right; your Edward is flawless!
Reviewer: MrsKeel (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
more more more is all i can say. neeeeeed more, pretty please, pretty pretty pretty please
Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 2- It's getting hot in here!
Ah, Edward. Ever the gentleman. Love the story so far!
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Hey! Sorry for the late review. I just got back from my vacation, and am trying to catch up on Twilighted LOL. Anyhoo...
Aww...Jackson Edward--I love the name! It's perfect. And I'm so glad that Bella and her mom were able to work things out. It sucks that Renee left all those years ago, but she needed help. I understand.
Great job! I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Wow. That chapter touched a bit close to home. My younger sister is bi-polar and suffers greatly because of it. I'd say more, but I have to go pull myself back together.
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
"I love you, Edward, and I can't wait for all the happiness that I witnessed tonight to be ours."
Edward inhaled deeply as if he were breathing me in. It was the most intimate connection we had ever had in a non-sexual moment; it was about all-consuming love.
"I love you too, Bella. That will be us someday." He kissed my forehead and we drifted off to sleep."
Very, very sweet. Very nice job.
The bi-polar thing does make perfect sense with Renee. It helps Bella move toward forgiving, and helping her to be more open and less fearful.
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Bella_De_Luna11 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
aww that was so cute
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
WOW! What a great chapter!! I can't believe Renee has bi-polar!! What a great twist! I'm so glad that she gave Bella that letter and I'm sure it will help Bella heal! Can't wait to read more! Great writing!
Reviewer: mslupin (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
Oh no, a cliffhanger! What is she wrong about... More Please!
Reviewer: EJ Santry (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
It seems that so many of us aren't able to reach resolution with the demons of our youth until our twenties, if we are lucky. I feel sorry for those who never find closure with the pain of the past. I am happy that Renee was able to explain to Bella, and that Bella is starting to heal emotionally.
Reviewer: guardedwithanangel (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
The emotions in this chapter were spot on. And you're right - I was just like Bella and I practically hated Renee for abandoning her. But the reason behind everything was perfect - I never thought of it like that. But it makes so much sense. And it completely hits home with me. No one in my family personally has Bipolar Disorder, but my best friend's little brother does. He's an amazing boy, and I've witnessed first hand the transformation he's undergone. It took years, but he's finally getting the help he needs, and he's just this amazing young person now. Even from the outside, I can see it. My friend told me that they had to go through so much as a family... but now they're all the stronger for it.
So you get major kudos for nailing the emotions in this story. :]
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Honestly, I worried about stepping on toe with this one, but the response has been positive. It is funny, but this chapter is the only one that I have cried when I was writing it. I don't have any personal experience, but I am aware of the pain that this situation can cause.
Thanks so much for letting me know that I did okay! It means a lot.
Melissa
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
I loved this chapter. The baby's here! I loved the E/B moment in the hospital.
I loved all the Bella/Renee moments too.
Can't wait to read soon. Please update soon.
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
That was so sweet, i'm glad it wasn't overdone and i'm really glad that it didn't really have much drama. I'm also really glad that Edward is so understading and learning to forgive Renee like Bella. This was a really nice chapter. Update soon!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 16- A Mended Heart
I'm glad Bella has some closure. And Bella and Edward will be the best auntie and uncle!
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