Excellent chapter you could feel the energy. More please soon.

OMG!!  I can't beleive you ended it in a cliffy!!!!!  Please update soon!!!!

YESSSSSS!!! :) I mean, I'm sorry that Bella's upset and emotional but FINALLY, she's truly admitting to herself how much she cares about Edward. Of course now, we need him to try and track down where she's gone and why she's so upset!

That was truly a special thing that Bella organised for Edward...in fact it's something I could totally imagine someone like Rob IRL loving to pieces. Just pure, accoustic, back-to-basic music :)

Great chapter! I hope Edward doesn't get the wrong idea if he comes out of the mens room and Bella isn't back. I wish they'd talk to each other about how they feel.

Aww that was so sweet! I love the playfulness that went on in this chapter.

What a perfect night for Edward. I am surprised that Bella didn't call Angela and Ben to join them at Laurant's.

I can't wait to find out what Alice said to Edward about a relationship with a girl from Australia.

Holy Crow! Excellent chapter, seriously. I want more now! You out did yourself with this one. The tension between the two of them is suffocating. Can't wait till you update, I'm dying to find out what happens next. ;)

OH MY GOD!!! Okay, I KNOW he has his reasons for not getting involved with people he works with, but he could break his own rules just this once, right? AAAAHHHH! I think this was probably the sweetest thing anyone's done for him in a long time, if not ever. I'm sure it felt so good for him to be up there, just playing. I wish she hadn't freaked out though. I don't want her to get somewhere she shouldn't be and he can't get to her. Or worse yet, he gets there, but they get accosted by the paps. That would suck. Anyway, AMAZING CHAPTER!!!

~Rachel

I had to duck into the ladies loo at work to finish reading this chapter. I am such a hopeless smuck when it comes to a great story. As always Miss BB another great chapter. I had a thought! You could get Edward to sing the one hit wonder from the on hit wonder himself, Mr Mark Holden, ' wanna make you my lady' with a blues rift feel. LOL. Actually a Jim keyes or Russell Morris song would be great. Straight outta the 70's.

Author's Response:

Kazbar!!!!

Thank you for religiously reviewing my story. I was laughing my ass off at your witty responses to each chapter. I thought I was the only one that sneaks into the ladies loo at work (with my iPhone)  to read stories that I simply can’t put down, so the fact that you consider Episode as worthy of a loo break made my day!

 

If you can remember the blog you saw Episode on, I would love to know.

 

 

I think you deserve a reward, so PM me on my fanfiction profile (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2130512/BoydBlog) and I’ll send you a sneaky-peak of the next chapter…I have a feeling you won’t be disappointed…

 

Luv, your new bestie, BB XX

 

Please don't make it too slow a burn. I don't think that my heart could take it. Have to say I argree with you, Ben and Jerry's shits all over Blue Ribbon although Sara Lee is not far behind. Angela needs to spill the beans onEdwRd and he needs toxics in bugger the pact he has with himself. Otherwise this relationship will go no where. I don't want that to happen. I await with anticipantion as towhere this is going. How many chapters do you think it will be??

 

Edward was already sitting at my booth, menu in hand, Heineken on the table.

 

Mmmm even more breathtaking than the view. Fuck, just breathe.

 I so feel for Bella. If I had to look at Edward / Rob I too would have to remind myself to breathe. Imagine trying to maintain a friendship when all you want to do is lay beside him naked and stroke the snail trail......mmmmm..... Aahhhh! Sorry lost concentration there for a moment......mmmmmmmm .......ooohhhoooohhhhhh and again. Edward needs to come clean with Bella and tell her how much he cares. Bella neeeds to flirt more and take the lead. Excellent chapter.

Hahaha my first drinking session was passionpop as well and the spin the bottle game!!! You must have been there. My first kiss was in grade 4 a boy called Ian. But my first real pash kiss was playing spin the bottle after attending my fist blue light disco. A boy called Lee. It was magnificent, soft, wet, warm with a hint of tongue. I have never forgotten it. We kissed for hours, days and weeks. No one has ever lived up to him since not even my husband of 22 years. That's not to say my husband is not a good kisser but just like Bella and Edward there was a spark between that boy Lee and I. I often wonder what would have happen if we took it further??? I regress, so what is this premonition that Alice spoke of 6 years ago???