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Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

I'm gonna make a guess before I hit the next button.......Rosalie???????

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, no! I hope Jacob was lying.....Ugh!

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

Awww....don't blush, it was fine!

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 5

So, I had a major blonde moment the first time they played 'the box game' (wich is really hard by the way) I was like, why is she 't' and Edwards 'p' but now I get it! Lol.

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love the whole Myspace thing. Lol.

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

Haha! Visions of Edward strolling out of the room in a BLOUSE are replying in my mind. rotflol

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

Whoa! I love Lover Unbound! That one was my favorite out of the series! And teh whole stealing the lemonaid lid was very Midnight Sun loved it!

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, I've always secretly wanted to be on jury duty, I've just never gotten the chance yet, sadly.
I'm going to live vicariously through your story. :)

Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 10

this is agreat story! I like a confident bella!

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

Good story. I like the angst. It's good to explore different things in writing and get out of our comfort zones. Nice job.

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 10

ooh great chapter...the angst between them is smoking.

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 10

AHA! karma is a bitch! i think we all knew jacob wouldnt get away with that...great story!

Reviewer: Elizabeth (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 10

as much as i want bella and edward together, i hope bella doesnt let edward get away with going all nutso on her. i love the story, cant wait for more

Reviewer: Lipsmacked (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2008 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

I can't help but think Bella was a whore. WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT?!?!

Reviewer: Goo82 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story, please update faster. I love the angst and you do it very well.
UPDATE NOW! lol

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 10

Yes!!! I hope this means he is going to forgive her!!

Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh, nice chapter! I can't help but smile even when Edward's being an ass, is that bad? LOL I can't wait to hear Bella's explaination for what happened, when she tells Edward things aren't always as they seem.
Anyway, loving this story and can't wait for more! :)
~Cat~

Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2008 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 10

Nice chapter, I’m glad that under it all, Bella basically is a good girl. I can't wait to see Edward try to dig his way out of this. Great job on the angst by the way.

Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 10

Well hell. That was WAY too short. LOL But at least he knows the truth now. Kiss up time...Great update!

Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 9

ACK! This is killing me. I just don't know what to think anymore. I love what Alice told him so I think that maybe Bella OK. I think Jake just screwed everything up GRRR!!

Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

It's Alice isn't it? I hope it is since she knows Bella so well. I'm really hoping that Jacob is just a jealous jerk ex-fiance and what he said was a lie. After this chapter, I'm hoping that everything I thought about what Bella was doing is wrong. I just don't think I can handle poor sad Edward. The way Bella reacted makes me think that maybe I was wrong, but what the hell do I know? I keep changing my opinion after every chapter.

Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 7

I knew she was up to no good. I can't believe she would do that to poor Edward. He was totally falling for her. I hope she starts to see how great he is and how she totally screwed herself over on that one. I hope Edward doesn't give in to her and I kinda hope he's about to tell Carlisle what kind of person she really is.

Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 6

ok, she called him E again and she knows he's Edward Cullen. Does she know that he is Carlisle's son? First she's dating the son of her last employer and now she's getting in with the son of her current employer. Was Emmett right? What kind of game is she playing? I really hope she's not using Edward to get to the top.

Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

I like it so far. Why did she call him E? Does she know who he is?

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2008 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 9

i just got to read this and i am so loving it!! cant wait for the next update!

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