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Reviewer: TheColdDamsel (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 18: A Moment
More details please :p
Reviewer: TheColdDamsel (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 10: Becoming One
Its good, its just it reads more like it was written for a screen play, than a novel "/ wish there were more to it
Reviewer: TheColdDamsel (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Forgiveness
Short chapters :(
Reviewer: TheColdDamsel (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Talks
Good writing, but more dialogue / details please!
Reviewer: TheColdDamsel (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 4: Pain
Brilliant work!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2011 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 2: Surprising Arrivals
So...they just show back up and expect her to just be all ok and lovey dovey? I like this, and I hope that if Bella gets back with them that she just issue a little verbal smackdown before she does...
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 18: A Moment
it would be nice to have more, but the story is really good, and u shouldn't overdo it!!
i love the memory losing plot!!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2011 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1: Visions
Well, let's just say that you have a smashing beginning! No pun intended, honestly. This has drawn me in and I just want to say that Edward is acting like a petulant child..."You promised!"...I am SO curious to see what happens next!
Reviewer: firerose (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Visions
is this story on fanfiction.net? I really love this story.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Being Human
“You wanted me to be human….” I said as a pained look crossed his face and I continued. “Well... watch me.”
I LOVE this line!
Reviewer: Rhian0000 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 3: Being Human
I think the vampires and werewolf must be on a go slow if Bella can beat them lol. So sad for her. Nothing to live for and wanting the abyss. she has people who love her.
Reviewer: Rhian0000 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 2: Surprising Arrivals
Oh oh not the reconciliation Edward would have been hoping for. So mcuh pain for poor Bella.
Reviewer: Rhian0000 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1: Visions
Very intriguing. If very sad. C'mon Edward she needs you!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 18: A Moment
Yummy lemony goodness!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 18: A Moment
oh dear
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 12
whatttt ?????????????????????????????????????????? oh yeah amnesia ., geeez poor Bella everything's happening to her, what the hell, how about give her a chance lol sorry well going to the next chapter .
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 10: Becoming One
mmmm well right now, i have no words to write ,,...just feelings , to feel . this was erotico, and hot and awsome and i love it.... well going to the next chapter .....xx
Reviewer: inge80 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 3: Being Human
Oh my god... she jumped... Did she really want to die or just to forget for a second... well, forget is probably the wrong word... just not feeling...
I really can't imagine what she's feeling though. almost all of us lost their first love at one point in their life... If I look back to my first love, we just didn't work anymore so it was good.. I have no idea what it feels like to lose your first love they way Bella did and on top of that lose her whole family... I'm so lucky that I still have both my parents and sister... the only loss I ever experienced where the loss of my grandparents and to be honest, it was good they died. Better than to suffer even more than they already did. they were ready to leave this place...
God I feel so sorry for Bella... you have me crying here.. tnx ;)
Inge
Reviewer: inge80 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 2: Surprising Arrivals
I so understand how she feels and how she is shielding herself. what's remarkable though is the fact that Edward couldn't 'read' Bella, how she always managed to surprise him... And Jake who reads everything she's saying just by looking her in the eyes...
wonder how this will story will go on :)
inge
Reviewer: inge80 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Visions
Oh my god... what happened for her to lose all of the people she loves?!? I just started reading your story and after the first chapter it feels like I have an iron fist around my heart... I'm so sorry for Bella!
I don't understand Edward though. Yes, he promissed to leave her alone but not to go back home now... after seeing Alice's vision. Hell, I would even want to support my ex-boyfriend if he lost his whole family...
I stop blabbering and go on with the next chapter...
Inge :)
Reviewer: way2old4this (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 18: A Moment
Yay!! I was so happy to see this updated, I love it! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Being Human
so short , the chapters are to short , lol sorry , but i want some more ....
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 1: Visions
wow this is dark and tragic, but 3 months , not to long , and all died ??? how ???and is she going to take Edward back ??? or is Edward going back to Bella ???mm i like this first chapter .
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 2: Surprising Arrivals
I really liked protective Jacob!
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1: Visions
Interesting start. Edward is being such a jerk! Really, even after everyone Bella knows/loves is dead, he still doesn't want to go back to her? I hope he comes to his senses soon.
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