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Reviewer: clcgurl101 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2011 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
It was...
CEDRIC DIGGORY!
Reviewer: greeneyedgirl618 (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great chapter, but it seemed to me that the dialogue was a little fast, and we got introduced to the VS part too soon. But I understand that you want to get to that part, so it's no biggie. I like this idea so far... it gives a new POV to the naughty librarian thing.
Reviewer: everso (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
mmm when will you be updating??
Reviewer: skitts (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love this so far!
Reviewer: cookiemonster (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
mm, I think I know who rescued her, but want to know for sure! keep going, it's a great story!
Reviewer: vivi4567 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 2
i like this story.....i really hope you continue writing it!!
Reviewer: brightandshiny (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
Yay It's Edward.
I so happy Bella got the contract.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wonderful start to a new unique story line. Alice and her lovely visions and feelings setting a positive note to the interview for Bella. Bella being totally amazed at being picked. Being able to call one of Alice's idols by her first name Jennifer. Boy will Alice be jealous? You bet. Then coming downstairs on a cloud and totally out of the real world. Stepping off the curb only to hear a taxi cab horn and yelling for her to get out of the street. To her dazed condition words weren't registering to her, she froze staring into space, and then she felt warm arms around her waist lifting her onto the sidewalk and out of danger. Oh boy a hero, are there really such individuals now a days. Our hero is handsome, tall, nice bod, and messy bronze colored hair--can only be one man Edward Cullen. Our favorite male lead character. Once he asked if she was okay then second, she faints in his arms. Looking forward to the continuance of the story as to her photo shoot for Victoria Secrets and to the budding acquaintance and possibily friendship/love interest of Edward.
Reviewer: Jane_Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
any chance of the next chapter being posted soon?
Reviewer: cindyxcinderella (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 2
even though the Cindy in this story is a bitch, i'm still pretty happy that my name is in this story (: lol
great story! looking forward to the upcoming chapters!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well done!
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
let me guess edward was the rescurer!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
Good start! I am really liking this. Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 2
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Reviewer: rubytuesday (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 2
Ooh intrigued ;)
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Ruby
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 2
Good job! I am glad things worked for Bella, and I can't wait for her to get to know EDWARD, her rescuer!!
Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
FINALLY!
AN UPDATE!
I loved it :)
And no I can't guess who the rescuer was.. maybe you should update this SOON so I can't find out, lol.
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 2
awsome story so far love that edward saved her!!!!! how soon until you next update??!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 2
I love it. Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
love the start of this!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: littlesecrets (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story extremely! Can't wait for more. Loving Bella's clumsiness, and Alice's 'feelings'. Wonder who this mysterious handsome stranger could be? ;) <3
Reviewer: wendyms (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
more more more..can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: HeartStopsBeating (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
please update this, im very interested to know where this goes!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
wow ! a modellibriarian :))
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great lines!! ---> Alice bounced up and down, looking more and more like a black-haired Tinker Bell. "Pull a Mike, and let's get out of here."
Good start! I look forward to your updates.
I am reading Vampire Goddess too. Let's see that Edward POV!!
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