Reviewer: factorygirl88 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:14 PM · On: Chapter One - Letter
Thanks for making me cry in the middle of a cafe. It's a really good look. But seriously, looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: sisterplum (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 03:36 PM · On: Chapter Nine - Purging, Pashing and Pancakes
I keep checking back on this story to see an update - I hope you haven't abandoned it! It's a great story and I hope that you'll post again soon!
Reviewer: lizann (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 03:57 PM · On: Chapter Nine - Purging, Pashing and Pancakes
Please please please post the next chapter. I love this story
Reviewer: lizann (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 03:34 PM · On: Chapter Nine - Purging, Pashing and Pancakes
Please please please post the next chapter. I love this story
Reviewer: SOFisticated1 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter Eight - Dazzling Dan's Domain
That was a great chap! Glad this fic is taking off well. :) see you in the next chap.
Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 05:05 PM · On: Chapter Nine - Purging, Pashing and Pancakes
I hope ole Eddie boy has a damn good excuse as to why he's not dead, and just what is he doing following Bella?mmm? I think Lucy has some splaining to do......Deborahlicious
Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Chapter Nine - Purging, Pashing and Pancakes
Holy shit!
Please update soon. I really hope that is Edward. If it is, I don't know how its possible, but who cares! I hope its him :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 01:43 PM · On: Chapter Nine - Purging, Pashing and Pancakes
Great storyline so far.
Dan is an absolute sweetie pie but I knew deep down that Edward wasn't dead - please allow Bella to rail on Deadward somewhat before forgiving him etc. as most Bellas seem to :)
Nice one and keep it coming please.
Achilles
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Prologue
:-( I sad
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 07:26 PM · On: Chapter Nine - Purging, Pashing and Pancakes
Uhh WTF??? I am assuming that it is Edward since he said "shit" which would indicate he didn't expect to run into Bella. If it is Edward how is he alive? Where has he been and why would he put Bella and his family through his "death"?? Is he involved with someone else? OMG I can't wait until you update.
Reviewer: leonico (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter One - Letter
You made me cry! :( YOU are really talented. God i really don't don't what will happen to me if my fiance died .. well my fiance in the future of coursebut you're so talented. keep up the good work :)
Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter Eight - Dazzling Dan's Domain
Dan seems nice. Glad Bella seems to like him a lot.
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter Seven - The Residents of Room 103
I'm enjoying your story, can't wait for the next update :)
Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter Seven - The Residents of Room 103
I'm looking forward to more! ")
Author's Response: More will be coming your way Sunday! =) Hopefully...the chapter is proving to be a little more difficult to write than planned. But I have all day Saturday to work on it! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter Seven - The Residents of Room 103
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Chapter 8 will be up on Feb 28th for MTK's Reader Thank You day. =) There may even be a little ToY outtake that day too... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: zec (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter Seven - The Residents of Room 103
is it possible for you to post this story on fanfiction.
Author's Response: It already is! It's posted under my penname IvyandLime. =)
Reviewer: cassieleexo (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter Seven - The Residents of Room 103
yay! loved this bb! :)
and aww i <3 you too! :)
Author's Response: LOL. You'd already read it before I posted it...I still loved your Twitter excitement over it though! =p Thanks for upping my review count. *grins*
Miss you. We need to catch up properly. Soon. Next week should be much better with organising my time. =) XoXo
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter Seven - The Residents of Room 103
Good so far, I must admit I'm not one for Edward is dead fics, but you got me started.
Author's Response: Well I'm glad to hear you're sticking it out! Hopefully you'll be pleasantly surprised with where I'm taking this. =)
Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter Five - You Say Goodbye, I Follow Through
Ok, that chapter made me cry. What a well written chapter.
Author's Response: Gah. I'm sorry! Hope you had enough tissues! Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. =)
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter Six - Dreaming of a New Beginning
I am going nuts wondering what you have planned
Author's Response: LOL. Sorry, but you're probably going to going nuts a little longer...there are still quite a few chapters to go before the big climax, but I swear it'll be worth it! We're in Australia next chapter, which should be up by Wednesday-ish. We get to meet some new characters... =)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter Six - Dreaming of a New Beginning
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Shouldn't be too long! Chapter 7 is almost done. Just got to finish off the end and pop it off to my Beta! =) Should be up mid-week next week.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter Four - Unexpected Company
I'm just now reading, but I admit I'm having trouble getting through these first few chapters. It's really moving slow with so much detail it's hard to wade through. I hope you can pick up the pace in the story.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel that way. I'm not one to gloss over all the details just to get to the climax of the story. I felt that these first few chapters were necessary for the reader to delve into Bella's character and see just what she was feeling, what she was going through, and how she thinks her decision will impact her future. It's a very emotional time in her life. I know the chapters are long, and to be honest, I didn't actually expect it to extend through so many chapters. But I feel that they're all necessary. Things are changing in the next chapter, so we are moving on a bit in the story. Just don't expect the big climax anytime soon. Bella's still got some way to go yet in her self-discovery.
Thank you for your review, all the same! It's nice for an author to hear what their readers are thinking. I hope you do stick around to follow Bella's story. If not, thank you for reading what you have. =)
Reviewer: Biankis (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter Six - Dreaming of a New Beginning
i can't stop cryin!!! is there an edward in this story??? this is why i don't read this kind of sotries... they KILL me
Author's Response: Oh gosh...SORRY! *hides* I really didn't intend on making so many people cry with this fic! I swear... Thanks so much for reviewing! I promise, no more tears for a while now. If you do need tissues at any point, it shouldn't be because of me! The good times are coming. *grins*
Reviewer: desertmama2 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter Six - Dreaming of a New Beginning
Reviewer: EmmettsGirly (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter Three - Rocky Toffee Choco-Mocha
Damn! That cake sounds yummy!!! Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Next time I make the cake (yes, it's real!), I'll send you a virtual piece. =)
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