Reviewer: onxyrose (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2014 11:45 AM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
I'm reviewing hoping that you will write again I loved it
Reviewer: kaitlynapril22 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2013 03:02 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
Update please!!!!!
Reviewer: onephoenix (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
Aww come on?! Why is it that all the Bella/Jasper stories seem to be finished before anything gets good? It's a great story so far though, I enjoyed it very much! Keep it going.
Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
I like this story so far, I look forward to more
Reviewer: sully53 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
More More!!!
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
Great chapter. Bella and Jasper are so sweet together. :)
I am glad they have each other.
Keep up the great work
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 07:14 PM · On: The Fight
I am enjoying this. :)
I can't believe Jasper turned her.
Thanks for writing a J/B Story. I love them
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 07:10 PM · On: The Vision
Great chapter, :)
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Jasper
Great start to the story. Look forward to more. :)
Reviewer: mmeyer323 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
Great job so far, I am kinda enjoying the Jasper/Bella story. I look forward to see where you take this and if they do come back or not. I will be waiting for an update and look forward to reading it. I am enjoying that the chapters are a little shorter than most, gives a person plenty of time to read but come back to it if need be......if that makes any sense.
Keep it up.
Reviewer: chylex28 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
i really love the story so far. i wish your chapters would b a bit longer or you'd post more often, but i guess its good for keepin us hooked. keep up the good job tho, cant wait to see how this continues...
Reviewer: CullenLovingMom (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
I love BXJ stories. I can't wait for the build.
Reviewer: mickeygirl24 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
I'm liking this so far. It a different concept with her not remembering, but it keeps you wondering when she does remember what's going to happen.
Good job. Ready for the next chapter.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
Hmm, is Jazz starting to fall for our Bella? It's certainly possible... and you have indicated it's a Team Jasper story... But what happens if Alice and Edward aren't actually dead?... Hang on, isn't that the point of this story?
Anyway, loved it! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
Sounds interesting! can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Guiness Book of World Records
awww......that's sweet.......I like Jasper
Reviewer: mrscarlisecullen (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:08 AM · On: The Fight
i look forward to reading more, ive added you story into my favs..
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it! :-)
Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:44 AM · On: The Fight
kinda short but I liked it keep going!!! Also try to put whose POV it took me a min to figure it out...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! All of the first chapters are in Jaspers POV, so I didn't put it. It changes later and after that I started putting it. :-)
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 09:23 PM · On: The Fight
Far out! I so wasn't expecting Jasper to be the one to turn Bella here! Although, I've always thought that if it came right down to it, he cared enough about Bella to be able to do it without killing her (whether as a lover or just a brother).
I have been reading this, but I don't always review. I'm always on the lookout for good Jasper/Bella fics, and this is turning into a good one. It will be Jasper/Bella, won't it?...
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love a good Jasper/Bella fic as well. And this is definitely a Jasper/Bella fic. I appreciate it!
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:35 PM · On: The Fight
OMG!!!.......what happened??.......will it still be a Bella and Edward story??........can't wait to read more
Author's Response: No, this is a Jasper/Bella story. :-)
Thanks for the review though!
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:02 AM · On: The Fight
Nice start!
Author's Response: Thanks! :-)
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:57 AM · On: The Vision
OMG!!!!!...........
Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:41 AM · On: The Vision
Update soon!!!
Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Jasper
Looking forward to reading more!!
Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Jasper
Looking forward to reading more!!
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