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Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:37 PM · On: The Lion and The Lamb
Great chapter
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:33 PM · On: The Lion and The Lamb
i really love this story... i can't wait for esme and carlisle to meet lily... update soon!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Decisions
the pixie is meddling again !
Update pretty please
Reviewer: Lunetta (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Decisions
Update! P L E A S E !
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Decisions
awwwwww bless soo amazeing but did i reall expect anything less!? lol ur story is soo beautifully written!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Decisions
I cant wait for next week. This is good. I wonder what theothers will say ! I think it will be so exciting and fun! :)
Reviewer: jaguarsolaris (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Decisions
love it. will be interested in seeing more.
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Decisions
Omg. I LOVE lilly! especially cuz my soon to be husband has green eyes and i have dark hair and im praying if we ever have a girl she will come out like that and Lilly is the name I have picked out for our future child. Update soon. GREAT story!
Reviewer: genesis26 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Decisions
Awesome Story so far!!!
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Decisions
YAY!! they are going to LA!!! can't wait to see the familys reaction!
Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Decisions
I love this story! So who are the songs by? And will you be updating soon :) ?
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Decisions
This story is really good, but a little rough. For instance this chapter you said Lily was born just after 5 months, but then Rosalie came to see Bella at 6 months pregnant. There's some inconsistency and the dialogue and story are moving a little too fast at times. Do you have a beta? Do you want one? I'd be happy to help - you can send me a message on here or respond to this review and I can contact you. Either way I'll keep track of this story - I want to see where you're going with the story line.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:02 PM · On: What Was I Thinking?
man I wish I could cuss in my classroom.... :) It'd be a lot easier to keep their attention!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Change
holy crap...reading this conversation between Bella and Alice was like trying to decipher the ramblings of my ADHD students! It's like they were on speed or something - the jumping around was distracting, but it definitely moved the story right along!
Reviewer: Crista Irene (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Decisions
So we're headed to L.A.! Can't wait!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Decisions
i can't wait for everyone to meet lily! but i hope she is ok!
Reviewer: booknerd (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:28 AM · On: What Was I Thinking?
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 08:12 PM · On: What Was I Thinking?
Great chapter
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Change
Great chapter
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:38 PM · On: The Pain of the Past
Grreat start.
Reviewer: pamloves (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 06:27 PM · On: The Pain of the Past
i love it but we need to have an edward to appear sooner than later.
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 05:23 PM · On: What Was I Thinking?
OMG, I love this story. Favorite NOW.
Xo, G.
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 04:36 PM · On: What Was I Thinking?
I think there is too much swearing in Bella's class. If I were you I would tone it down... it kinda ruins the whole school feel. Lilly is adorable. Alice is a little too much, I would tone her down a bit too.
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 04:06 PM · On: The Pain of the Past
When I first saw the summary... I was a little sketchy about reading it because no offense, it sounds interesting, but people who write stories similr to this generally suck at writing. HOWEVER, I can gladly say that is not true! Which that may have sounded like an insult, but really it was supposed to be a compliment. If we are being truthful it was the banner that sucked me in ;)
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 03:44 PM · On: What Was I Thinking?
loved the reaction her students had!
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