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Reviewer: twilightfandom660 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2016 05:34 PM · On: Flesh

Dammit it ended at the good part.

 

Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 05:21 AM · On: Flesh

i want to read their adventures in Hawaii!!

plez...love it!!

Reviewer: riotgirl2005 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Flesh

i really like this story..i hope you write more soon!

Reviewer: emilyrose (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Flesh

interesting i have to see what happens next

Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Flesh

Awesome! Please update!

Reviewer: lcnel (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Sudden Change

I like your story, I like that Edward didn't hesitate this time to save Bella forever.  

Oh, Eclipse, the movie, I've been 8 times so far!   Did I say I love it?  Yes!!!

Jacob, ug. 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Silly Soul Stuff

You did the lovin' stuff very good.  Very good indeed!

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Flesh

Hell, I loved the movie so much I wanted to dry hump it!  Except for the Jacob parts, of course.  That lil bastard can rot.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Silly Soul Stuff

This was incredible beautiful

 

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Flesh

I went to a triple feature, twilight @ 7, NM @ 9:30 and eclipse @ 12. I was crazy and the theater also had a ton of midnight shows. I loved it!  it was so much better than the other two twilight was rushed and made Edward look like a prick, NM was too Jacob centric and the fight in volterra was stupid and wrong. However, eclipse, thought it had it problems they were minor, the movie was SO good. the trailer did not do it justice I will be seeing it again.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Flesh

I went to a triple feature, twilight @ 7, NM @ 9:30 and eclipse @ 12. I was crazy and the theater also had a ton of midnight shows. I loved it!  it was so much better than the other two twilight was rushed and made Edward look like a prick, NM was too Jacob centric and the fight in volterra was stupid and wrong. However, eclipse, thought it had it problems they were minor, the movie was SO good. the trailer did not do it justice I will be seeing it again.

Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Flesh

Yeah...a little to the left and Jacob would've fallen off the cliff.

 

Man Jasper was hot and hilarious...I would say better than new moon...

 

anyway.I am currently in London so I may not get to review as much but I chose your update to read on the computer as it is a favourite of mine..

 

so bella is going to kill Victoria?? hmmm 

 

looking forward to reading the next chapter

Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Flesh

Great chapter, and yes I hate the Jacob character in movies.

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Splitting

Totally gross but you made the premise believeable!  I'm ewww-ing and Hot Damn-ing at the same time, girlie.

Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Flesh

Love it! Please update. And can you please have Bella take a look in a mirror? :D

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Flesh

great story!!!!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Flesh

Ooooh... *cue duh duh dunnnnn music*

So Bella's going to kill Victoria...interesting plot twist :) Can't wait to hear more about their little place in Hawaii. Rose's reaction to seeing Bella cracked me up - though she did get quite defensive in the end.

 

Reviewer: kkmomo3 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Flesh

Chapter was great-loved the reunion with Alice and Rose-WOW didn't see that one!

Went to the midnight premier also-LOVED IT!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Flesh

the film isn't out in the UK yet, i can't wait to see it!  Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Flesh

Awesome story - so glad I found it!

As for the movie, good points: the CGI effects were better, the B/E B/J kisses were good, the background stories of Rosalie and Jasper were value added, the one-liners were funny and plentiful, the actors' performances appeared deeper/smoother, etc. But oddly enough, I liked New Moon better, even if it wasn't my favorite book - the score and the visual imagery did it for me.

Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Flesh

i loved it too.  i went to the midnight show in oak ridge, tennessee.  and yes i've wanted to push jacob off a cliff long before now.  and i'm 57 years old!  what?  edward's 110, so that makes me a spring chicken!  i'm loving your story too, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Flesh

Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Flesh

I would suffer through the burn for Edward...sigh

Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Flesh

havnt seen it yet as i live in scotland but i have my tickets for the preveiw on the 3rd cant wait lol had them since last month lol xxx btw i love this story xxx

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Flesh

I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next!!

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