ooohhh Eddie!!

I'll just say I like your theories better lol. I always pondered at Jasper's ability to affect Bella, so I certainly like this  explanation of everything. Alice's blockage is mind boggling as well. Everything makes so much more sense in your world. You should have just written the books. Snort ;)

Snort. Sneaky, sneaky Bella.

I like how you've worked your own lil sidelines into the original Twilight plot with the whole having to stay back and mindreading thing. Very facinating. Of course it gives so much to the depth of their relationship, and of course to the fact that they're going at it like energizer bunnies every chapter is a plus, not that I'm a perv or anything...

Oh wow. I love this set up. Certainly something I've never seen before. You've got me hooked chica.

Brilliant story! I loved all of it! :D

Wonderfully written story, I enjoyed every minute of it. :)

Im so sad that its over - i loved your story - cant wait to read another one of yours

This was such a wonderful story... I'm kind of sad that it is completed. 

I thought the change in their interaction w/the Volturi (from the original) was good--though it seems Alice got them out of there in the nick of time. :) I also loved the idea of them experiencing Europe together and all the happiness that followed the drama w/the wolves. Edward's island gift was so great and I can just see them spending many romantic years there together. The fact that he brought the cottage there--well he is the PERFECT man, isn't he?! 

Such a nice, warm, loving happy ending. Does a heart good. <3 I'll probably read it thru many more times... I've already re-read some chapters too many times... I think my favorite are the first two chaps and then the chapter when Bella has her graveyard run in w/Jacob and Edward comes back in a panic. I loved that chapter because it really was a great example of the depth and indestructibility of their connection together and Edward's unwavering love for her. And, it seemed like it was the first time that Bella really got it. I also loved that she didn't let her relationship w/Jacob get in the way. She put Edward and her bond first.

I think the thing I loved most about this story was that once E/B were together, they were TOGETHER. Thick or thin--and neither one was drowning in insecurity and ready to leave the other. Yes, they faced drama (**ugh** Jacob) and danger, but they were always committed to each other above all else. I'd say that was the strength of the story for me. 

The return of Emoward, I hope Bella can knock some sense into him. He has to learn that he can't blame himself for everything bad that happens (, even if Bella could also need some coaching in this field).

Nice chapter!

lovely! and I'm glad they are all safe!

that was still pretty intense there for Edward at least :)

I can see the Denali's eventually reconciling to a certain extent with the Cullens, though things may never quite be the same...

Looking forward to the epi - i'd say it's kind of happy-tears-bawling maybe to get all the way through writing your story :)

I don't trust the wolves.  I think it's too easy.  part of me thinks Jasper, the military guy, is right, destroy the enemy.  The part of me that values friendship above all else, regrets that jacob and bella will lose their friendship, and i can't believe I'm saying that. However it goes, I don't trust the wolves and don't think it's over yet.