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Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
well this edward is different but i like it....also i am surprised she didnt mention feeling how cold he was ha ha
Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 21
I LOVE THAT BELLA THREW EDWARDS EMO ASS THRU A CHAIR..... THAT WAS SOME FUNNY SHIT.. SHE GOT HIS ATTENTION.. THAT WAS THE POINT! AND I THINK SHE KNOWS THE WOLVES ARE COMING, SOONER THEN LATER, AND SHE WANTS TO BE PREPARED. I AGREE WITH JASPER, I THINK SOMETHING IS GOING TO HAPPEN AND SHE WILL ALL OF A SUDDEN BE ABLE TO INCLUDE ALL OF HER FAMILY IN HER SHIELD. SHE IS SLOWING GETTING IT!
Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 20
I'M STILL LOVING IT! JUST WONDERING HOW JAKE AND THE WOLVES ARE GOING TO COME BACK IN THIS... BUT VERY GLAD BELLA IS FIGURING OUT HER SHIELD AND THEY ARE ENJOYING EACH OTHER
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Epilogue
Loved it, glad they found their happy ending. ;)
Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
i think edward is going to be furious.. but i know bella will just put him in his place!
Reviewer: Envy5 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 8
I agree completely with how you've written Jasper and Alice's abilities. Emotion and mood both scream mental situation to me. I'm also loving how Edward can read her as well as others. That adds a great element to their relationship. I'm loving your story!
Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 9
i am absolutly loving your story! i like this STRONG bella. she stood her ground with rosalie, and isn't going to take shit from emmett either!
Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 2
lovin it
Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
very, very interesting, can't wait to see what these two crazy kids have in store
Reviewer: preciousfairymom80 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Epilogue
Awesome job. I liked how you handled the wolf problem without making Jacob the bad guy and killing him. (sam I could deal with) Thanks for putting your story out there for others to read. Great job.
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 10
That was a super exciting Chapter. I love it when the girls kick ass w/out the guys :)
I meant to tell u this last night while I was reading but I ended up falling asleep. At one point Edward and Bella were talking about Rosalie and how personalites during human lives transfer into vampire personalities. I think Edward was saying that because Rosalie endured such a tragedy before she died that some of that crept into her undead personality..I have never thought about that before! I had a section highlighted that I thought was super interested and wanted to paste it over here but I've lost it between then and now but thats pretty much the idea of it..lol.
Have I told u I am loving this story?
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 10
Yeah! All power to the women! Really awesome chapter! I think Jake´s reaction was exactly as anticipated. He´s still a young wolf and has problems to control his temper.
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 7
Yes, I really like this story. I love how Bella strifes for equality between them and that both of them discuss the change seriously and like adults.
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 5
Both, especially Bella, are more mature in your story and I definitely like it. You make them more real and that´s very good for their characterisation.
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
I´m perfectly fine with many lemons and not so much angst. LOL!
Although I think their first sex came a bit early. Not that don´t like it, I´m just not sure it´s really IC for both of them.
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
Im sure this is really lame but if TN had a 'like' button similar to facebook I would be clicking it right now :)
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ohhh!! I am super excited to read this story. I don't have much time for fanfics since school started back up this fall so this is the first I've read in several weeks. Hoping to get through it in the next day or two and I am really excited!!
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Epilogue
no offense to SM but that was up there with Breaking Dawn!!!!! that was soooo fuckin good OMFG i cried, i laughed, i gasped eveything it was fan-fuckin-tastic really great!!!!
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 24
jacob is such a fuckin doughe bag and sam's gay ass
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 10
im am sooo TEAM CULLEN CHICKS !!!!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Epilogue
ok, I stayed up all night to finish this! I loved it!!
Reviewer: sharkkisser (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Epilogue
Kate,
Thank you for the lovley story. This is the first time I have ever written a review but your story was awesome and I had to let you know. It was funny, exciting and romantic. Thank you for sharing your talent for storytelling with those of us who just cannot get enough of Bella and Edward. I am just sorry that the story ended ( I am sitting here at work just bawling!)
Love,
Franci (mediumred1@yahoo.com)
Reviewer: Lulu M (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Epilogue
My reviews became slower as I kept reading. Sorry about that. I was lost in the story. Excellent journey. My heart aches for the lost friendship between vampire and wolf, but I'm still swooning over this relationship you've built for Edward and Bella. Congratulations on finishing, and good luck with future endeavors!
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 5
HOLY SHIT!!!!!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Epilogue
beautiful
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