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Reviewer: grneyedhulagrl (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 6: Atonement
Yay! Like the ending and I can't wait to see what happens between Bella and Edward :)
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 6: Atonement
It will be interesting to see where you are taking these characters if you decide to finish.
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 6: Atonement
It will be interesting to see where you are taking these characters if you decide to finish.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 6: Atonement
Great place to end for a while....I hope not too long, I want to see how things turn out between the two of them! :)
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Bye for Good
Man that was just sad! I understand both sides, not being able to give and not getting what you need. It still hurts no matter what side you are on :(
Your story has me vested, I have to see it through to the end!
Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 6: Atonement
Ah this is getting good! I'm excited for more whenever you get to it.
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 6: Atonement
Oooh I love happy Jake and Bella. Yes, good place to pause. I'll looking forward to the update.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 6: Atonement
nice
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 6: Atonement
NOOOOOOOO..how just gonna stop right there??? OMG for how long???? Great chapter!!!! I have to definately give you that...leaving us on an upbeat note was awesome...just really how long is this hiatus going to be??? I am so glad Bella told Jake how she felt..I was about ready to drop kick him when he was like "you shouldn't have come" (say what now!!) but he came to his sense... very wise...LOL... I love this story.. I will attempt to be patient while waiting for an update and I will check out your other stories.. :)
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 5: Wounds
I am totally in love with your story.... That was totally unexpected of Edward to confess he has feelings for Bella after just the one kiss and knowing she just told him the other day about Jacob leaving.. poor timing..he should have waited...but I'm glad he didn't cuz that completely opened Bella's eyes to fight for Jacob..(awesome)...I can't wait to see what Jake has to say about her confession..... update soon :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 5: Wounds
i love this story.
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 5: Wounds
Wow! Edward get's the thanks, but no thanks?? That's a change up. I'm totally stoked to see what Jake has to say about Bella's confession. I hope he cares for her and doesn't pull an Edward from New Moon. Loving this fic!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, I was beginning to get discouraged.
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: Wounds
Thank Christ she's going to go talk to him. I'm interested to see where you are going with this. Thanks so much for updating!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 4: My Undoing
Oooh! I hate the thought of slicing flesh, especially with a razor blade. Two ways I fear dying-- being sliced to death and burning alive, the thought makes me cringe. However, I will say you did it well. I'll tell you it's hard to read when you have to keep hiding your eyes! Nice job!
Author's Response: I knew it would be a hard sell, but I'm not one to do the expected. Glad you could read it. :)
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 3: Bye for Good
Wow. Not much else to say but, well, wow. Does Bella not really love Jake? Seems much more interested in Edward to me.
Author's Response: It's Bella, she goes back and forth!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 3: Bye for Good
OMG! Hurtful and mean all the way around! So the chips are down, things must be going to get better??? Still very powerful writing, I almost cried when Jake told her :-( keep it rolling, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!!
Reviewer: emzlovesmidi (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 1: Head First Fearless
omg i love it
haha i love "packed up my clothes and a cactus" almost as much as i love jacob haha
Author's Response: Ahh thank you so much!!!!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 2: A Good Dose of Karma
OOOoooh building. It's miserable to think you've found the one, feel in second place and then add the guilt of someone wonderful giving you the time of day. Impossible circumstances--all the makings for angst. I'm a little worried that Edward will be a bad guy, a psycho killer or something, hurt Bella and then Jake will have to track him down. Of course Jake will constantly reassure Bella he still loves her, but she will be damaged and think less of herself. I'm a die hard Jake fan, but a bad Edward scares me. Eeek!
Author's Response: Although I favor Jake, I could never make Edward a bad guy! :)
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: Head First Fearless
Ok, read it as a one shot and looking forward to more. I love you are continuing the story. I know there has to be angst to make the story, but I hope it can have a happy JxB ending. You rock, rock, rock.....
Penny :-)
Author's Response: Thank you Penny! You're the best.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 1: Head First Fearless
absolutely lovely
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