Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
Whoa... major brainin mojo going on here. I'm glad B&E got through some issues and she's lettign him in ... so they can start over. I can see why he'd be upset about the Jasper thing... I woudl be too... but then I'm not as laid back as Bella about the universe. LOL
Can't wait of the next chapter!
Author's Response: They are starting to work their shit out ... which is good cause Michelle and I thought they would be stuck as emotards for the rest of high school!! Bella will be good for our uptight Edward .... just sit back and watch the universe unfold.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
Another wonderful chapter. I just love this story and its nice for Bella to be the one cockblocking. So many stories have Edward putting a hold on the relationship so the shift in dynamics is a nice take. Can't wait for an update and to find out how everyone is going to take Edward falling all over Bella because I have a feeling her won't be able to stay away from her at school tomorrow. We shall see so until next time have a fanatastic time writing the next chapter.
Author's Response: Bella is a strong woman ... still has hormones ... but is a strong chick nonetheless! I think you'll find some reactions mighty interesting in chappy 12!!!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
Sweet - happy that they seem to be ironing stuff out at least a bit. Nicely written and I'm also loving Emmett (as usual).
The fluffy/slightly lemony bit (like lemon sherberts - sweet & sour!) was perfect - pretty much to the level it should be (even if they have both gone all the way before). Takes me right back to my later teenage years.
More soon please
Achilles x
Author's Response: Edward is starting to realize that he just can't be Doucheward for the rest of his life. And B is standing her ground.
We just finished chapter 12 and should have that up sooooooooon. =D
Reviewer: Lahlah (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
This story makes my day. Most entertaining fanfic I think I've ever read. You guys are all levels of awesome.
Author's Response: You are gunna make our heads grow all big and explode! Michelle and I are glad that you are enjoying the fic!! Hope you stick with us =D
Reviewer: goddessofbirth (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
Gods, I can't express how much I love this story! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: You are in luck! We just finished 12 and after a little fixy fixy here and there, we will get it up for your reading pleasure!
Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
Oh, am lovin' this Bella of yours!
Author's Response: Hahha! We dig her too. She's a pretty crazy woman =D
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
Love your story. Bella is awesome. I love her talk with Emmet. They rock!
Author's Response: Em and Bella were awesome! No holding back for her!! Thanks for reading and we hope you stick with us =D
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
Ilove Bella's vocab - but sometimes need a Bella to English dictionary. I also like how Edward is picking up some of it.
Author's Response: Our Bella does have a unique way of expressing herself, and they both rub off on each other. Maybe Michelle and I will come up with a Bells-a-bub to English dictionary :)
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Chapter Five: Shin-digs and Treachery
Great chapter. Poor Jasper. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Jazz did get the shitty end of the stick, poor thing. But here's to Bella who will try and make him feel better.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:56 AM · On: Chapter Four: Invites and Moldy Peaches
Great chapter. Love Bella! Looking forward to the party. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Ahhhh yes, the party of interesting happenings!!! Travel along young grasshoppah!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Chapter Three: Shaggy and the Scoobes
Great chapter. Glad Edward and Bella have met. Love the characters. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for continuing to read!! We get super stoked knowing peeps like the story and characters :D
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Chapter Two: Myrtle and Orange
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the lurve!!! More is on its way!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter One: Blow Jobs and Hearses
Great I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Oh young grasshoppah! You are just on the first steps of the craziness that is Shags and Bells-a-bub. Sit back and enjoy :)
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter Ten: Art will Bring them Together
Bleeeeeh!! Cliffangers are fucking aweful. Really love, love, love this story soso hard. You have no idea. You guyses are fucking geniuses {sp?}
Please update sooon!!
Author's Response: You are in luck today .... next chapter is in the queue! Ready for some hot Fuzz actions?! (We're not ... just had to throw that out there) Keep reading and we'll keep writing :D
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter Nine: Asshats Swallowing their Pride
Haven't read this story in a while. But, oh no!! I really hope Edward is wrong and Bella calls him back or something. Or the next day at school, he kisses her in front of EVERYONE.... yeah that would be fuckawesometastic
Author's Response: What would a teenage story be without some injected angst?!?! Kissing? At school? Boys have cooties don't cha know :P
Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter One: Blow Jobs and Hearses
Back from three weeks in Thailand, a nice tan to show off against the snow here and two new chapters about my favorite peeps. It is a good day :-) Love your "no-bullshit" Esme who can set her son straight and embaress him, all at once. If this doesn´t go well she might have to take the photo back ;-)
Author's Response: I think we all need a little Esme in our lives!!
Thailand ... Michelle and I are jealous!!!!! Hope you had a wicked awesome time there =)
Reviewer: nickyblueeyes913 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter Ten: Art will Bring them Together
awesome story. I like stoner bella. different from the other fanfics I've read but really good. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for sending us some lurve!! We enjoy our stoner Bella and live vicariously through her .... cause .. uh .. drugs are bad! Next chapter is in the queue so you shouldn't have long to wait now!! Hope you keep enjoying our little tale :D
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter Nine: Asshats Swallowing their Pride
I fucking love Esme, she's one hell of a mother.
I love Jasper too, but for other reasons.
=D
Alice.x
Author's Response: Michelle and I <3 Esme .. In fact, we want Esme to be our mom too (but adopted .. so we can have Edward without all the grossness).
=D
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter Ten: Art will Bring them Together
Had I been paying attention I would have noticed a second chapter when I read last time. Perhaps it's the myrtle.
Okay. Edward seems to have made a little progress with Bella in this chapter. She is quite taken with him and I hope he finds the grand gesture that will work for her. I did laugh at how Mike and Tyler seemed to notice her too and by that I mean they did not refer to her as a freak when they said it. It was a rather damned if you do damned if you don't situation because either way would have resulted in Edward being p/o'd.
Looking forward to the homework assignment and how great it will be.
Sandra
Author's Response: The Myrtle gets everyone!!
Bella likes Edward quite a bit, but she is an all out there kinda girl. There are no half measures, and until Edward is man enough to accept that and allow the expression of that .... nothing can happen between the two.
Chapter 11 is with the betas ... soooon!!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter Nine: Asshats Swallowing their Pride
Oh man he has painted himself into a corner this time. But hey I do love Esme. Her words rand so true. But how do you convince a high school kid that popularity is highly over rated. And these kid he calls friends are nasty shits every one. I'm hoping that when he goes to school again he seeks Bella out then asks to sit with her at her lunch table.
And Bella. Well I do hope she is having a good time with Jacob but I also hope it stays platonic and Jake is respectful of that.
In any event I love this story.
Sandra
Author's Response: Something tells me that Jake just doesn't do it for her like Edward does, and hopefully we will see Edward grow a set and ditch his douchebag friends.
Thanks for sticking with us!
Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter Nine: Asshats Swallowing their Pride
oh my carlisle! esme is amazing! i'd love to have her as like my cool aunt or something!
well done and keep up the awesome work!
<3 stephanie =) x
Author's Response: Thanks!!! Michelle and I want Esme as our mom .. seriously. She rocks!!!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Chapter Ten: Art will Bring them Together
Can't wait until the next update... it's soooo Stargirl. :)
Author's Response: Well you are in luck! Chapter 11 is almost finished =D Thanks for reading and leavin' us some lurve!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter Four: Invites and Moldy Peaches
I love the characters in here. Totally groovin' and fresh!
Author's Response: Ahahah .. Thanks!!! We are glad you are diggin' them. Michelle and I always giggle as we write E and B - they are our bright spot during the day =D
Reviewer: Elise Nicole (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter Ten: Art will Bring them Together
This story is really amazing; I love the world you have created here
Author's Response: Thanks!!!! Michelle and I love creating our little universe and we are really glad to hear that others love it too :D
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter Ten: Art will Bring them Together
I loved Bela insinuating that Edward is riff-raff.
Author's Response: Well ... as B said, not everyone can be in on gummy, orange and chocolatey goodness!! Where would we be??!?!?
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