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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 24
OW-OW!!
Great job :D And I'm officially caught up on the story. Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 24
Oh thank you I couldnt wait anymore!!!So happy for them
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Reviewer: Elle_BR (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 24
hmmm...hot and sweet! Love it ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 23
I totally owe you reviews for chapters 20 thru this one, my internet crapped out today, so I'm at my mom's using her computer so I could finish reading. I'm dying for your next update, see you then! I'll get those reviews to you as soon as I can use my computer again. :)
Author's Response: No worries! I'm glad you enjoyed them! :)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 19
I just knew the stairs that they both share and I'm sure the balcony later, would come in handy. How cute that they both woke up early and Bella just happened to be outside on the steps as Edward was heading to the grocery, and Bella just had to share her coffee with him, how sweet...He brought her coffee on the way home too, how thoughtful...I love the idea of Edward cooking, not sure why, it's just cool...I laughed at each of their reactions to spending time together again, if I were Bella I would have been squeeling like a thirteen year old again too...bye the way just what teenage vampire love story was Bella reading? hmmm =) Bella must have looked really pretty for Edward to stand there in the doorway just looking her up and down...I'll bet they could be wearing a paper bag and they'd each think the other looked great! lol Can't wait to see what treasures they find while unpacking the rest of Bellas boxes...
Author's Response: Hehehe There is some good stuff coming up. ;)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh my gawd, that was the most romantic date ever! Your wonderful story is filling my romantic heart so full I fear it will burst soon...Edward is such a gentleman...They were so cute the way they were touching each other so sweetly...I feel a little ashamed of myself for thinking about the lingerie so soon, shame on me! As much as Bella is attracted to Edward there is no way she would ever fall into bed with him this soon, and as much as Edward wants Bella he would never push things too far too fast, he respects her way too much, besides they have only known each other for what, a week? The note he wrote her was just beyond romantic...I think he is the best fictional man in the world (don't hate me but I kind of have a crush on fictional Jasper, and Emmett would make the best fictional brother) so now you know, I'm officially crazy! =) I had a random thought about Bellas clothes,I wonder what all Alice took and if any of it got replaced, just being curious, I always wonder about the weirdest stuff :) I forgot to say that I thought Bellas dress sounded really pretty, and Edward was I'm sure gorgeous (what is it about the color red on that man? You know who I'm talking about) *winkwink* Oh, and it was beyond sweet and caring how Edward held Bella while she cried and talked about Renee and Phil...I can't remember what else I said, my computer decided to freeze up as I hit submit...
Author's Response: Hehehe Thanks. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the date & everything!
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 17
Ya, that definitely would have been awkward if Alice had stormed in just a bit too soon, especially while Edward was still in the shower, I'm sure Alice might have heard him... *Cough* Edward is so romantic, flowers again and I can't wait to find out if red and yellow daffodils have any special meaning like the yellow roses and white calla lilies did and it is too sweet that he's nervous...Bellas dress sounds really pretty, still wonder if Alice talked her into any sexy lingerie ;) and Edward sounds handsome (of course) what is it about red on that man (you know who I mean) *winkwink* I'm really looking forward to their date, and I can't wait until Bella reads the note Edward wrote her, I'm dying here...Will have to read really fast =)
Author's Response: LOL I'm glad you're so excited! :)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 16
I love how the girls tease Edward about Bella, he makes it too easy for them when he can't even hide his feelings for her over the phone...He must not have had a girlfriend for a long time or his last relationship ended badly or something, which reminds me, I know it's coming but I can't wait to find out about James.
*Grins* Poor Bella she won't know what hit her! I can't believe Alice and Rose are going to snoop in Bellas closet! Well, maybe I can see Alice doing it! I can't wait to see what kind of outfit they will try to convince her to buy...I wonder if there will be any lingerie involved ;) knowing Alice there might be...Edward is so sweet telling A/R to take it easy on Bella with the shopping and such, he's already pretty protective isn't he? *swoon* I could sure go for a mani/pedi, you? :) Looking forward to the date! =)
Author's Response: Hehehe Thanks. I love writing the relationship between Edward & the rest of the Cullens, and between Alice/Rose and Bella. :)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 15
Look how he just walked in and started taking care of her like it was the most natural thing to do! Well I'd be floating back to the couch too after that sweet make out session. How sweet and tender was that? And Bellas already thinking that their first time shouldn't be on a day she'd spent most of depressed about Angela and Ben leaving...First time? Boy is she confident or what? LOL I know, it's kinda obvious they have a connection...I'm still totally loving the slow build up, it's actually not just sweet and romantic, but kind of erotic somehow...
Author's Response: LOL Thank you! I'm glad you're emjoying the slow build-up. It does get there, I promise. The latest chapters are getting pretty steamy...
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 14
Grinning like a fool right now! Edward sliding into the booth to sit beside her, then asks her if it was alright, then Bella putting a finger on his lips and saying " Don't move, your're perfect where you are" Edward sitting there in a stupor with a grin on his face made me laugh, and I found it bold of him to hold her hand at the table and when they walked back to their shops, so sweet. I don't think he likes her at all. haha Poor Bella she's feeling the loss of her friends, she made herself sick over it all. Wine on an empty stomach is not such a good idea. I'm glad she called Edward, I hope he can make her feel better...I'm not getting carried away, I just know how sweet, caring, and kind he is, so I'm sure he'll try to help her deal with the fact that Angela and Ben left today...I'll get carried away later though ;)
Author's Response: LOL Nope, they don't like each other at all. :D haha
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 13
I literally had tears in my eyes as Bella did as she read the note from Edward, so unbelievably sweet he was in sending her those flowers and that note and the sincerity behind it was too much for my romantic heart to take (in a good way though.) I swear, Edward and his family are generous to a fault, that gift card was over the top! How many people would really do something that wonderful for people they had just met? It shows how much Edward cares about Bella on so many levels already, and how much his family does too. JMO He's so sweet, fictional or not I want one of those please! lol ;) I just went back to read the note again, so sweet. *sigh*
Author's Response: Hehehe Thank you. ;) Yes, he's definitely my fictional boyfriend! *grin*
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 12
Bittersweet and happy at the same time...It's not like they won't ever see each other again, but they won't be roomies anymore, so, ya kind of sad
Author's Response: Thank you! Definitely bittersweet. But not the last time we'll see or hear about Angie & Ben!
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
Loved it! What a great family! It was so cool that Edwards family got along so well with Bella, Angela, and Ben. How nice was it that Edwards family helped so much with the move, especially the girls with the linens and such, how unbelievably nice of them! Oh, and I almost forgot the flowers, so sweet and thoughtful! I'm glad that Bella won't feel the loss of Angela so strongly because she'll have Alice and Rose, and let's not forget her new neighbor... ;) I'm such a sucker for sweet gestures and romance, so I loved it when Edward kissed Bellas cheek, though we know that's not really what he had in mind... =) I forgot to mention how sad I felt for Bella because of what happened to her mom and Phil, damn drunk drivers =(
I can't wait to find out what happened with Bellas relationship with James when they were in college, and I wonder if Edward has any old relationship skeletons in his closet, just a ramdom thought...
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :) You'll definitely find out what the deal is with James!
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 10
Way too much to much to say! I'll just say that I loved this chapter...I'm so glad everyone got along and it was so cool that Charlie knew the Cullens...Now my mind is starting to wander, Edward and Bella sharing the stairs leading up to their apartments and a balcony, what else are they going to be sharing? Hmmmm ;)
Author's Response: Eventually. ;)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 9
You know what I find really great in your story, is how nice, polite, and helpful everyone is. It would be a great world if everybodys friends and family were that great. I love how playful and fun the Cullen family is, they are awesome...loved Edward with the dogs, it showed another really sweet part of his personality...the part you put in about the Yorkies made me really pissed because I know that shit goes on all the time and it makes me so mad that people can be that cruel to defenseless animals...sorry, not trying to be all negative...I'm so loving your story, I can't read fast enough to get to the next chapters...Oh, I had a thought, I can't wait to see what Bellas dad thinks of Edward and what his family will think of Bella, I bet Edwards family will think she's great...we shall see...;) And, I wonder what she'll think of all of the Cullen family showing up to offer to help her move her stuff in, should be interesting ;)
Author's Response: heh Thanks. :) Yeah, the Yorkies thing came from my mom & aunt. They volunteered at a shelter when a bunch of Yorkies were rescued from a horrible environment like that. My mom has 2 of them, my aunt 1 and my grandparents 1. hehe So...
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 8
First, that dream was pretty hot, too bad the phone woke Bella up before it got really good...I was a little worried when Ben went to talk to Edward, but relieved when it wasn't what I thought it would be, so sweet of Ben to look out for Bella...How friggin sweet was Edward to paint the sign on Bellas window, not to mention the trim he painted earlier when she had fallen off the ladder...And who doesn't love to shop at Macy's? Love it! :D
Author's Response: hehehe I know, right? I've had dreams that end that way. It sucks!
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 7
All I could do throughout this whole chapter was giggle, I'm probably too old to giggle so much ( or not ) but I'm a sucker for a cute story. :)
Author's Response: LOL Thank you! :D
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 6
They finally meet, and what a way to do it! I was grinning just thinking about her falling and him catching her...can't wait to read each of their pov's after that, and the coffee shop ;)
You are so right about the damp air, especially in Port Angeles, it rains there so much, I'm glad I live farther east, the air is much dryer in my part of Washington, but like you said it's fiction. I don't know why I just told you that, like you'd care LOL I tend to ramble, sorry.
Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you liked this chapter! ;)
Reviewer: sacaco (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 23
oooh! when are you going to post again! i need to read more!
:)
the pressure is just because i love the story! haha.
Author's Response: Hehehe Thanks! Gimme til like this coming weekend. :)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 5
More shopping, yay! Jasper and Alice lemon, nice ;) I haven't really found any good Jasper and Alice stories, so it's nice to have them make an appearance in yours! Can't wait to read the next chapter. It will have to wait until later though, I'm going right now to see Eclipse again! :D
Author's Response: Eclipse rocked! :D I have a J/A one-shot (human, tho), too, if you're interested. I'm glad you're enjoying it still!
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hot Bod's Auto? I love that name! :D I tried to picture the furniture that Bella had picked out and it sounds really cool, her apartment will look awesome! I wonder who died and left her with what sounds to be some kind of inheritance, hmmm. Let's get on with the shopping! Oh, another thought, I wonder if Edward will offer to help Bella with moving any of her furniture in? ;)
Author's Response: Hehehe You'll see, I promise! And if you'd like to see pictures, I have them! ;)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
Yay, shopping! I love to shop, can't wait to see what kind of treasures they'll find! I kind of laughed when Angela suggested Bella get a king sized bed, maybe she'll wish later on that she did. That was random, I not sure why I brought it up! LOL
Author's Response: LOL Thanks. I thought it was kind of sad why Bella didn't want to get one! lol
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 11
Sorry I know I don't leave very many word reviews, but I really love the story and can't wait for Bella to be totally moved into her apartment!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 2
I can just tell this is my kind of story, even when I saw it and added it to my favorites I just knew! I love that you've kept Alice and Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie together, and hopefully soon we'll see our Edward and Bella together as well! I love Emmett he's so damn funny, love feisty Rose and of course I love, love, love Alice, she's so much fun! Can't wait for Jasper to make an appearance as well. I know I'm way ahead of myself on this, but I wonder who Bellas date to Ben and Angelas wedding will be. Sorry, I cant' help myself! :D After Ben and Angela move to Seattle I'm sure Bella will not be feeling so sad and alone for too long. ;)
Author's Response: Hehehe I'm glad you like it so far! ;)
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi! I love it so far, I love lemon drops, lemon-aid, or big ole juicy lemons, but I also like a story. It's nice to have a gradual build up. Can't wait to read on! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. It's definitely going to be a gradual build up! heh I'm glad you liked chapter 1. :)
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