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Reviewer: Notebookgirl72 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Way to spend Jen! I still think that's much too little in comparison to what Nick actually owes in recompense but I trust that will come later!
I'm actually glad that Rob isn't there to meet Jen, I do love me some good suspense! Besides, its all about the anticipation! You haven't failed to deliver the goods so far so I have complete faith in you! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks... Yes...shopping is just step 1 in "SCREW WITH NICK THE PRICK! there will be more to come...
I'm glad you aren't upset with the lack of Rob... I got plans for Jen and the meeting of the PATTI clan!
And I will try my best to deliver the freshest goods for their reunion! hehehehe
thanks my dear!
next chapter will be up soon! (maybe this weekend...)
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: Sakkosekk (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Update soon !
I love you !
Author's Response: I love you more!
thanks so much my dear!
will update again soon!
steph
Reviewer: jjdtuck04 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We're so close!!!! So excited for them to reunite:)
Can't wait to see what Rob does/says to Nick!!!!
Author's Response: YAY!!! I know right?!
Next chapter my dear...there will be Rob! yay!
heehee we'll have to wait and see about Rob/Nick.... got do some reuniting first (smirk)!
thanks for the review and rating my dear!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: Notebookgirl72 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York
I'm so excited for Jen, what a lucky girl! Who could resist a spa and a no holds barred shopping excursion with a personnal shopper... in New York! Its a girls dream come true... well, at least one of them not involving Rob (le sigh!).
Loved this chapter, the phone flirting was so adorable, heartfelt and sooo hot!
Thanks for the RPOV outtake, so delicious!
Author's Response: yeah the shopping - It's going to be awesome!
so glad you liked the phone banter! i couldn't keep Rob out of the picture!
and you are very welcome for the RPOV! THANK YOU for reviewing!
thank you!
steph
Reviewer: wendywhiner (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Wow....that was a fun shopping spree.....can't wait for the reunion!!!
Author's Response: Phew! I am so glad you liked it... I personally would have broken out in hives and run screaming... but it was a BLAST to research and go "virtually" shoppping!
more soon! Rob WILL be in the next chapter, promise!
steph
Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
AAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHH!!!! You're just pure EVIL LOLOLOLOL!!!
You CANNOT LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT *shakes fist*
Another fantastic update :)
Author's Response: heeeheehe! *does little evil witchy dance* I know! I am evil! on so many levels!
I promise another update soon, although ya'll are catching up to me! (must write faster! must write faster!)
thanks my dear! glad you liked it!
steph
Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
I love Jen letting herself getting pampered for once. She deserves it after all Nick put her through!
Tracy was hilarious, but a sweetheart.
La Perla, the Office, Beautiful Bastard, the garter belt .... all kinds of naughty thoughts entered my mind!Don't they have La Perla in London? I'm sure Rob wouldn't mind to recreate that scene!
I loved Jen's inner anxiousness about take-off, I was right there with her! Take off, please take off! Phewww!
Rob, sweet Rob, he's been through so much too that he still can't relax and trust everything is fine. If he doesn't get a hold of her right away, he'll go into a full-on panic attack.
And sitting there in the airport terminal with a raging hard-on all day, poor guy!
I'm glad Jen decided to open up to Rob about her feelings, but still feel she should have waited to tell him about his phone until London. I don't think Rob feeling guilty a bit longer is worse then him seething and working himself into a rage the whole flight because he still doesn't know the whole story but now knows there's someone else to blame!
Why was Rob not there? Did his plane get grounded after all or was he held up by the paparazzi?
At least papa Pattz came to get her, that's sweet. I'm sure Jen will be all kinds of nervous if she has to meet Rob's parents by herself. I can see her stuttering and tripping already!
Can't wait to see how their reunion will go and how they embarrass themselves by not being able to keep their hands off eachother in public. Also curious about the media reaction to the relationship, she will be scrutinized!
Author's Response: So Glad you liked it!
AND OMG! WOMAN! now i need to check to see if there's a La Perla in LONDON!!!!!*panting with anticipation!*hahahaha
Yeah... the Nick issue is definitely unresolved and definitely will put a damper on Rob's flight out with his frustration... but i think Jen couldn't stand seeing him feel like he was to blame....but yes...it was a hard thing to decide to write...they'll talk more of it in London....
Rob's plane was delayed with weather... I'll say that much...i don't want all of you worryinghe got arrested/papped/cold feet/etc..heeheehee
I promise, He WILL be in the next chapter....
HAHAHA! on your thoughts about Jen's reaction to being there with the FAM alone... yep...I'm cruel... I love to make her awkward!
And their time together? sure to be a blast! adn how are they goign to keep their hands to themselves under MA PAT's roof?
The media reaction....oh yes.... and don't think the recent UK pics are going to stop me...HAHAHHAA!
thanks my dear for all your thoughts!
next one up soon!
steph
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Bwwaahahhaa @ the dent Jen put on Nick's bank balance :)
*sniffles* So gutted that Rob wasn't there to meet Jen at Heathrow, but glad that Richard is there to meet her.
Author's Response: yeah..big dent...heheheehee...
sorry about Rob... I just can't resist making her meet the PATTI clan...alone! heeheehee
thanks my dear!
steph
Reviewer: bitteliten (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Good gracious, what a shopping trip! I am green with envy.
Was not expecting an update today, so thank you for the wonderful surprise. I can't wait to hear the reason for Rob not meeting her at the gate! Snow? Twihard-mob? Hehe.
Author's Response: HAHAHA! twihard-mob! heeheee....no it is definitely weather issues...
yes the shopping was fun! even for me who gets lightheaded at anything extravagent.
I promise... Rob is coming (snicker)
thanks my dear!
another update soon (haha- yeah this one turned around super quick didn't it?)
steph
Reviewer: lillred (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
you are awesome...seriously
Author's Response: Thank you lillred! you made me just giggle like a little girl *looks around to see if she woke up the spawn or hub...nope safe...*
thanks my dear! you guys are the awesome ones for coming with me on the this journey!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Great Chapter! Aw man! Rob was delayed! Can't wait for more...
Author's Response: I know! I am so sorry! But i will make up for it hopefully in PATTINSON clan and Jen time... heehee... cuz i can't wait for Jen to meet Clare...without Rob or Liz! heehee
thanks my dear! will be updating again soon... I have a little proofing and then in it goes!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: theatregirl (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Oh Alice and shopping and La Perla, Oh my! Thanks for the hotness, you always roll it out! I can't wait for the reunion and I love so much how art imitates life, and life art. You got so lucky that there was an actual storm. Weird how this keep happening, how are you doing it? Witchcraft? I hope so! Love ya!
Author's Response: BWHAHAHA!
i use my little crystal ball and farmers almanac! HAHHA!
thanks my dear! oh yes.. reunion is coming (snicker)
thanks my darling P.G.
always yours....
P.P.
Reviewer: kbrendon (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
love the shopping trip. Please post the next chapter soon ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked the shopping. It is so out of my realm I was nervous!
i will post the next chapter soon! i have some proofing to do on it... but should be in pretty quick!
thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Such a fun chap!!! Loved Tracy/Alice, too funny! You had me sooo anxious with the snow at the airport. I was biting my lip nervously while reading it. But you did great with the shopping at Saks... just under $40k is pretty freakin' sweet for one day in NYC! I wish I had an LA publisist that had to make it up to me too! Or maybe just carte blanch at Louboutin ;).
Author's Response: Sigh... yes to have no limits! that would be awesome and I'm not even a shopaholic! she spent about $12k just on shoes...which isn't much really when you see some of the Louboutins were 1500 to 2k a pair!
thanks my dear!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
now thats what i call shopping!!!! love it, looking forward to the reunion, although maybe not with his pappa........;)
Author's Response: HAHAHA! no not with his papa...
Reunion is next... i needed Jen to spend some time with the PATTI's on her own... heeheee
the shopping was fun... i learned ALOT!
thanks my dear!
xoxo steph
Reviewer: Mischiefmaker17 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Loved it! Love how she's spending all of nick's money. The wanker deserves it! And I love how rob is still his paranoid self, freaking out that she's isn't answering the phone. So does this mean there will be a Rob/Jen face to face reunion next chapter? Please? You can't possibly torture us any more....
Author's Response: HAHAHA! yes here will be a Rob/Jen face to face next chapter...YEA!
i just needed to get Jen in the house ALONE with the PATTI clan... MWHAHAHAHA! i love to torture that girl...
Yeah its not over with Nick...Jen has plans... and rob is so cute to freak... sigh....
thanks my dear! will update again soon!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: leesed (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
evil evil... I hope an update will come soon!! On another note I love your references to The Office and the Beautiful Bastard. That is one of my favorite stories and I am so sad to be unable to read it anymore but your references are awesome and keep me hoping that it will come back soon. Anyway cant wait for the reunion!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHA! this one was super quick i know..i will update again soon...just maybe not this soon...we'll see!
I love love love the Office... there is no way i couldn't mention it... it's just GAH! i was sad to see it go too.. I am hoping it comes back as welll.. it's just one of those stories you can read over and over and over again!
reunion is coming up next I swear! i just needed to get Jen some alone time with the PATTI clan! heeheehee
thanks my dear!
steph
Reviewer: ruthhazelton (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
ooooo - I was getting ready to shut down for the night and decided to check Other one last time to see if anything had been updated, This is so cool - 2 updates in 2 days. If I'm the Ruth doing the Brazilian - thanks I think.....waxing isn't my favorite thing in the world - however - (and this will probably freak you out) I subscribe to several magazines - the one I look forward to each month (other than People) is Allure which immediately gets opened up to their Directory of Spa Services and the service of the month (for example waxing) and selected cities and their services. I used to spend several hours a week on Allure's website reading their directory services and if anything new had been added. I haven't been on their site for at least 3 months - not since I started reading Twilighted fan fiction. I'm trying not to laugh. Loved Tracy (Alice). Why is everyone obsessed with Louboutin shoes. It seems every novel and assorted fan fiction stories now mention the shoes - not necessarily to buy but to go in on their website and salivate. They probably don't carry size 5 and I have trick ankles anyway. I just knew one of them wouldn't reach London in time. I dont imagine airport security has gotten easier since the real Christmas Day which hasn't happened in this yet right? Am glad she told him the phone loss was deliberate. He'll love the fact that the approximate $39,000 - not counting the hotel services - got charged to Nick - talk about payback. Woo hoo. Still love the phone calls/texting. LOOKING for forward to the next chapter. I have to stop - I am having a senior moment and can't remember what else I was going to say.
Author's Response: HAHAHA! yes but you get sick pleasure in waxing hairy italian men! hahahaha!
I don't quite know wht the deal is CL shoes.. it is in EVERY thing I seem to read... part of the joke too is Jen has no clue.. but she gets some nice CL boots... i have to say i like the boots i saw.. just wouldn't dish out $2000.00 for them....
yep...Not christmas yet..but security is what it is...and no we haven't reached christmas day.. so they don't ahve to go thru the new nonsense they have instituted....
Yes...she couldn't hide it anymore... not with him blaming himself.. but its not over yet.. they will have to talk once he is home.. He will find out everything... heehee yeah $39,000.. love it!
thanks so much my dear! more soon! and i promise Rob arrives will be in the next chapter!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
I wish I had a personal shopper...and I too love some beautiful CL shoes. Oh, and I love your use of "Claudia." *smirk*
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: i wish i had a personal shopper too! and i have fallen for CL boots... i'm a boot wearing/jeans girl... if only I had $2000.00 for a pair...
you liked claudia? heheeeheee *smirk*
i try....
thanks so much for the rating and review!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
Gah!!! The anticipation.... dies- no Rob?! :( I was on my seat edge.. I knew the chapter was going to be over soon, but I thought maybe we woud catch a glimpse.. alas- no...sigh. Good tie in with current events- there really was a terrible winter storm. Ohine sex with Rob? Yes, please... goos chapter smile dthe whole time- even at the end when I pouted!
Author's Response: HAHAHA! I'm sorry! i know! I warned you guys! hahahaha1 Don't you just hate when you look over at the little tabby thing that shows you how close you are to the end of the chapter.. and you're like: NOOOO! I am so close...don't end it there!
Gah! I just did it to you guys! I'm sorry...heehee
Yes.. I was actually planning the snow storm(at least in chicago for rob), then the great Blizzard of 2009 came biowing thru! I love how things can just slip right in like that to get us wrapped up even more!
Glad to keep you smiling!
i promise... Rob is in the next chapter! I swear!
thanks my dear!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
I was sitting here holding my breath as she got off the plane..and then no Rob. But I'm kind of curious how the ride home is going to be with Daddy Pattinson!!! And the shopping..that sounded like so much fun. And who better to go wtih..but an "Alice"!!
I was so excited to see that you posted so soon! I can't wait for the next one..obviously!!!!!
Author's Response: I know! I am so cruel.. i am sorry. It's for a reason... Jen gets to meet the PATTI clan...sans her rob buffer! oh my!
and the ride home with Mr. P! oh i can't wait for you guys to meet them all!
shopping and Alice... you just can't go wrong! I loved writing tracy!
More soon! maybe not quite this fast... but very soon!
and I promise.... Rob is in the next chappy!
thanks so much!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York
Steph~
Wow, girl, you did a great job with this chapter *sigh*. Love all the texting back and forth and the naughty pics! So Great!
I can't wait for shopping and London.....*clapping hands*. I wish I could make Nick suffer myself *smirk*.
Please update soon..................I just can not wait any longer!!!
Hugs,
Louise
Author's Response: thanks so much my dear! i loved writing the texting!
and there will be much NIck suffering! heehee
pssssst....louise... guess what? I just updated the next chapter! heeheehee... no waiting required! how awesome is that?!
thanks my dear!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
You...you....you Rob-blocker! *sigh*
Loved the shopping trip so much, and Tracy was a hoot! The texts were great, of course.....and I'm so glad Jen opened up to Rob. It was starting to feel like the issue dragged down everything else with it.
Thanks so much for the super-fast update!
Author's Response: BWHAHAHAHA! ROB-BLOCKER!
omg I about died! that is hilarious! I know I'm sorry. he is DEF in the next chapter! I promise! I just needed some time alone with the PATTI clan and Jen... cuz i like to make it awkward for her, don't I? heehee
Glad you liked the shopping and tracy.. i was so out of my element!
Yeah.. Jen isn't going to hid anymore.. and that issue was going to tear Rob up.. why let him suffer anymore...they WILL discuss it further in LONDON...
thanks so much my dear!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: tgriffin (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
I have to say that Jen's inner monologue on that plane was HILARIOUS! I know I have thought the same things on several occasions, and it wasn't even like I was heading over to London to see the Pretty in person!!!
The shopping trip was spectacular - loved Tralice, as I am fondly calling her! I'm so glad she spent Nick's money mercilessly...he deserves a lot worse. Glad she came clean with Rob too, and I hope she tells him exactly what Nick texted - that was beyond cruel.
And Richard meeting her at the airport...too cute! Did you see him on Ellen, waving with both hands to the crowd? You can see where Rob gets the charm!
Wonderful update, and so quick. Thanks to everyone who had something to do with that! I sure needed it tonight - Rob Drought 2010 is killing me!
Love ya Steph!
~Tracy
Author's Response: i really love Jen's inner snark... it makes me giggle sometimes!
So glad you liked Tralice! hhahahaha! My fave line " oh i just want to lick him... oh I made you laugh again!"
It's not over with Nick... Jen has some plans....
And coming clean with Rob... that discussion is in their future for sure.. She's not going to hide anymore...
oh Mr. P- I simply love him.. I just wan tto hug him and squeeze his cheeriful cheeks... I can't wait for you guys to meet the "fam"
super fast update due to my super great beta! I am glad it got you thru the night!
thanks so much my dear!
love ya!
steph
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
I was so excited to see this update again!!! I can't tell you how much I love your story!
Loved the shopping and the spa, it's like every woman's dream!!! I hope Nick feels like he got a kick in the balls when he sees the bill!
You even managed to throw in a little,hot, sexy phone sex! Yum!
Can't wait for their reunion.
Author's Response: I know right! i love my beta! she works so hard!
Heehee... Nick is gonna feel it somewhere!
Phone sex.. mmmmm... hearing Rob's voice over the phone... talking naughties.... DIE!
I guarantee there is real and physical Rob next chapter!
thanks my dear for reading and rating and reviewing!
you guys are just awesome!
xoxo
steph
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