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Reviewer: Amore7808 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

I tend not to read fan fic involving Pattinson or Stewart.  I like this story though.  It's got the right amount of romance and sweetness without being over the top.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am so glad you have taken the time to read my story! I try to be very respectful of Rob, even with all the naughties... so thank you!

mWAH!

steph

Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

Love the visual of Rob boxing! Thanks - MWAH!



Author's Response:

mmmm. Boxing Rob for the weekend... glad to supply! 

thanks my dear!

xoxo

steph

Reviewer: lullabye (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

Oh I do love this story - you may just have to keep on writing and never bring it to an end.

I check every couple of days to see if there's a new chapter - and then read it immediately when there is. Twice.

You are fantastic. Please, please, please make Nick suffer - I know you plan to but still ... LoL. I am really excited about how Rob and Jen are going to 'Come Out'. Will there be a grand public display?? I suppose not, that doens't really fit in with Rob and his relationship with the press, still a girl can dream ...

Seriously, you are an inspiration and I am a fan. Okay, I'm a bigger fan of Rob but well, we both know what he looks like right?! LoL

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

Kat

 



Author's Response:

AW! Thanks so much! never bring it to an end.. so you are fine with bald and beer belly rob? hmmmm... 

hehehe! we'll see where it takes us... the end is still a ways away! haven't thought about it yet! OMG!

nick will suffer.. in many ways... and we will eventually find out why he did what he did...

the coming out... hmmmm. i think, regardless of how rob would like it to be, it will be grand on some scale (RObsessed would be the first to break it I am sure!)

thank you so much my dear... yeah Rob is way hotter than me... hahaha!

next chapter in the next week! probably about the same time.

thanks for the read and review!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

Great chapter!

Poor Rob, he must feel so betrayed! I think Jen handled it very well by telling him it's his decision and she will support it even though she has her own feelings.

LMAO at the jabs of the pattinson clan pointed at Rob's voraciousness! Is it time yet for them to explore sex a bit more? I can't wait for them to have secret dark desires for places or positions! I think they need to go shopping for lingerie together. Rob could use something sexy too!

Can't wait for outdoor sexy times! It would be fun if the paparazzi shot a pic of them in a comprimising position ;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks! yes.. it needs to be his own choice, Jen will def support him in what he chooses.. but it's ultimately his career.

I think we will find as Rob relaxes at home, and as Jen opens up more.. they will find a lot more to explore! hehehe

Rob in anything would be sexy i think.. but you want him in some silk boxers maybe? hehee

Some outdoor time coming! ummm....smirk...

thanks for the rad and review!

mwah!

steph

Reviewer: dorothybert (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

Enjoying this = thanks. RP does sometimes behave like a teenager and not a mature professional - I find some of his outbursts unconvincing (and I think Jen finding them offputting is quite realistic). BUt maybe RP is really like that and all the people around him are covering. How would I know???



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review and rate!

Yeah he can be such a little bugger sometimes.. lack of filter... and jen is so on top of them... as she grows more comfortable.. maybe she'll call him on it more!

so glad you are enjoying!

thanks so much!

steph

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

YAYYYYYY! Butt kicking Rob and holy moly at the garage action. *fanning herself* Staiasha gave me a heads up but WOW. I want me some garage nookie now!



Author's Response:

HEEHEE! yes the garage is not just for putting your cars in anymore! LOL!

glad you enjoyed it my dear!

thanks for the read and review!

xoxo

steph

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

Aaww, Rob is so sweet, I want him all to myself!



Author's Response:

HAHA! thanks! don't we all!

thanks for the read and review! MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

I can't come up with an epic poem at 1:30am, so you'll just have to settle for a plain 'ole review from me, lol.  I'm very glad that the conversation about Nick is out in the open, though I'm very interested in finding out what Rob plans on saying to him.  And I remember reading that about Rob and the punching bag, too.  Yum.

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

we'll see Nick at some point, but Jen is going to keep him busy!

heehe

mmmm punching bag!mmmm

thanks!

steph

 

Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

AWESOME CHICA!! truly amazing writing and leaving me on the edge of my seat!!! :::hugs:::



Author's Response:

Thanks my dear! glad you liked it!

thanks for the rating and review!

hugs back!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

Great chapter.....I LMAO about "Little Patty!" That, was freaking hilarious!



Author's Response:

Thanks! ahh  Little Patty... poor thing...

heehee!

thanks for the review and rating!

xoxo

steph

Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

Unghh... punching bag... garage... so hot!

Author's Response:

heehee!

thanks my dear! 

mwah!

steph

Reviewer: theatregirl (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

Ah those teasing sisters, how I love them.  And I'm so glad we got the angry garage sex!!!  It was really intense and fit the moment perfectly.  And just like everyone else I want to kick Nick's ass, but I really liked how you handeled Rob's reaction.  He's so passionate about Jen and I like that he really flipped out.

And again mmmmhhhmmm sweaty shirtless boxing . . . . . Yum!

Thanks P.P. Love ya!



Author's Response:

Gotta love big sisters! heehe

Angry Rob... we need to make him angry more often i think... grrrr.

yeah..nick needs some ass kicking... maybe the boxing will pay off?

thanks my dear!

I love you!

xoxox

steph

Reviewer: kbrendon (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

loved it! well worth the wait. the angry workout so hot. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! yeah... i like angry Rob.. may need to make him angry again... hmmmm

More soon!

thanks for the read and review! 

mwah!

steph

Reviewer: tgriffin (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

OH.MY!!!

Alright Steph, I now have punching bag Rob etched into my brain! Please, please let us take another trip to the garage...

That was just raw and hot! And Jen, getting "caught" by the whole fam - nice! The shouted comment of Rob not needing more than 5 minutes - I almost spewed out my tea! I don't think I'd last 30 seconds with that man...GAH!!!

So glad they started the Nick discussion - and it should take some time for Rob to come to a decision. I could totally see Jen's POV about this.

I loved it - I know , what a surprise!



Author's Response:

Oh yes.. the garage will make an encore...

Poor Jen... she is going to have a hell of a time balancing schmexing with rob and trying to be proper and demure...

and the sisters are really mean aren't they? hehehehehe

glad you understand Jen's pov on Nick... it's alot more complicated than just firing his ass..that would be too easy...man must suffer!

Thanks so much my dear! glad you liked it!

MWAH! steph

Reviewer: KalifDee (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

"You two need to get a room somewhere and work off that sexual tension. It's quite disgusting, really," she said, her eyes twinkling as she took in Rob's glare from across the bar.

Eeeee!! Do I detect a romp in a hotel soon!! I'm hoping you made that line cos of what I suggested last chap! LOL

 

Poor Rob. That fucker Nick needs to be castraded and then fed his own balls for breakfast.

Mmmmm sweaty workout Rob is yum and....please sir may I have some more! lol

You know I luv your chaps and will always rate high when RP is in play!

Hope you like what I sent awhile ago. I'm honored and humbled!

Dee!!



Author's Response:

LOL! they may need to locate someplace to work off the tension... yes...evil smirk...because as Rob feels more at home now... he may be a lot more open to...umm... trying things out... so to speak...

Oh yes...boxing Rob... I will say now that the garage makes a return visit for many reasons.. stay tuned!

thanks so much my dear! i got your goody! will be reading it tomorrow night! tonight go away from me!!! NOOOO! why can't i be off work tomorrow!

sigh..oh well..

thanks for the read and the rate my dear!

Mwah!

steph

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 26- Welcome Home

I have little words and big words, but first...

Ah, the 'Stang!  Bless your heart, the 'Stang!  I will never understand how that boy can be driving around America with a foreign sport car.  I hope his father gives him a Rosie-worthy slap upside the head every time he sees it.  Okay, rant over.

So great how the lack of a filter catches up to her.  It would certainly be appropriate that, since he tells reporters and strangers stuff he shouldn't, that he'd tell his family everything.  I love how you've shown Victoria, as she is indeed the mystery girl.  I also can't wait for you to read about Rob and his father in LOC, 'cuz then you'll get to have your own 'stang moment.  Holy shit.  That's all I'm saying because while it's written, it isn't posted.

Fantastic chapter.  I can see the house in my head - you've described it so beautifully.  And the homecoming was perfect.  The lemony goodness needed to wait.  Just the love was all we really needed to see.  Right there in front of God and country.  Perfection.

As much as I wish I could click Next, I have to go to bed.  Tomorrow I am going to get caught up, and then I will begin to tap my foot in the corner.  I'm not a pesterer, but I get... anxious.  So you try for a five chapter buffer?  Me too - I have five chaps between what's posted and where my betas are done.  I have twenty between what's posted and what's being written.  It's frustrating and I want to close the gap.  Help me learn patience.

Loved it, Steph!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Tanks my dear! 

Oh yes.. the 'Stang... i have a feeling Rob just doesn't appreciate waht Jen and Mr. P do... but then again.. maybe that will bring Mr. P and Jen together in a nice father daughtery sort of way...or father/ gril who is better versed at son sort of way...

I love the mystery that is Victoria... so she was a ball to write...

Oh can't wait for that LOC chapter now...heehe

Glad you could see the house.. it is his home after all and has special meaning to him...

and thank you for the apprecaition of the ending.. no lemons necessary for these two... at least not yet.....

yep..good place to end it... warm fuzzy feelings... so happy you have gotten so far. Yep just a few more chapters then you will be grumbling at me to update faster! LOL!

thanks my dear!

you are my fab eveil twin and Vegas will never be the same...

MWAH!

steph

 

Reviewer: kjoyp (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk

I loved this chap.   I'm so glad they finally told Rob about Nick.  I liked the way Rob blew off steam and the hot sex after.  Very very hot.  And the drive out to get the tree.  so yeah, all around, great chap.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks my dear! 

I am so glad its out there now too... not resolved yet... but at least out there...

and yes... Christmas tree is next! PATTI STYLE!

thanks for the read and review!

more soon!

steph

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman

Claudia.  Tall with auburn hair.  Really.  You are a very naughty girl.  Okay, back to the story...


Now I  have to go make frosting for the cupcakes - chocolate malted cake with chocolate malted frosting and malted milk balls.  My five-year-old has very refined tastes, no?

Okay, the shopping trip was divine.  The spa was magnificent, and I want someone who can give me a Brazilian and make me giggle in the same WEEK, never mind the same visit.  I always fall asleep during a massage.  One of the things I learned in theatre was the value of a good massage and the ability to give one.

You were getting me a little angsty at the end, there, and as a frequent traveler, I laughed at the optimism of these two, with him leaving Chicago and her leaving New York, in December near the holidays - and still expecting him to arrive first.  I have grown out haircuts at O'Hare.  I suspected that he'd either be meeting her right at the gate having not cleared customs himself, or he'd still be in the air.  But Richard's cool.  Hopefully he'll have a 'Stang to take her home.

Poor Rob.  I hope blue balls aren't affected by changes in cabin pressure.  That would suck.



Author's Response:

HAHAA! cabin pressure can do all sorts of things to the body...I wonder what the solitary Mile High Club is called?

oh girl.... Richard and a stang? giggles and freaks out a lot!

i can't tal anymore... the blue balls still has me tittering...

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Oooh... a personal shopper, unlimited funding, and a spa day.  Sounds like fun!  Of course, Nick's money was Rob's money, so I'd still like to see Nick avoiding some itching.  But I digress.

Lizzy was a delight.  Rob needs to not be meeting her at the airport with his parents.  As much as I can't wait to meet Richard and Clare, they have some reconnecting to do that mumsy and dad don't need to be a part of.  If'n you know what I mean.

I can't wait to see how the shopping goes.  My last job in the city I worked around the corner from Bloomingdale's.  It was a very dangerous thing.  I accidentally bought a cashmere scarf and gloves which I still wear and adore to this day.  I don't like shopping in general, but the trip she's about to have I could definitely get into.  Especially the spa day.  I think of my spa mani-pedi as a two-hour vacation without the hassle of a security line.  Every three weeks like clockwork.  Aaahhhhh.



Author's Response:

how did I miss answering this review?!

hahah! oh yes a personal shopper would be the only way i could ever get thru a day like that! LOL!

hehe. I understand your point on Nicks money being Rob's money.. Nick will still see some pain...

I LOVE LIZZY! have i said that before? well, in case i hadn't ...

hope you enjoy the shopping.. NEw York has changed so much since i was last there (*cough cough* 1985...cough cough)

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph 

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 23-Rescue Me

Oh, hallelujah!  There'd have been no living with me if this angst had gone on another chapter.  You give great angst.  Now knock it off.

I'm glad that it was Lizzy.  I do think Clare would have just wiped me out.  And Nick... I go back to my earlier statement - raging case of scabies.  Did I mention he should get that in August?  In New York City.  During a blackout, so he has no air conditioning.  Wow.  If that were my manager, he'd be my ex-manager.  Just sayin'.

Mmmhmmm... time to click the Next button.  But first I think I need a beer.  You're freakin' killing me.  But now you're headed to my neck of the woods.  NYC, here we come!  Yee hah!



Author's Response:

I can't do angst for too long..It's cruel and unusual... but thank you for liking it!

I love Lizzy...we have had this discussion before, right? I LOVE LIZZY! what a great sis!

AND BWHAHA! at Nick getting scabies in August.. with a side dish of ringworm?

manager to ex manager... well...we'll see now won't we...

Grab a beer and I think I'll need to as well... Now i am worried about New York... eeeek! I hope i do it justice...( I haven't been there since the mid 80's... OMG... that is just sad!) *** checking expedia for trips to NY**... after my begas excursion of course !

 

MWAH!

steph

 

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone

Oh.

My.

God.

*thud*



Author's Response:

*scrambling the jets*

DANGER DANGER! Something is wrong with my connection! I only got 4 words for this review! Oh NO! where did my witty and snarky beer loving evil twin go?!! 

heehee.... I am the evil one... i think this is one of my favorite chapters.. don't ask me why.. i like me the suffering angst...

and i am so glad you got to this with a NEXT button ahead of you... and you thought the last one needed it...

I promise... answers next...

MWAH! And I heart you!

steph

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 21-Goodbyes

You know I'm genetically incapable of a blurb, and I'll certainly try not to write a book (well, not here, anyway).  I'd like to say I saw it coming in the glint in Nick's eye, but since I have a starry-eyed view of the power of Pattinson, I still thought he'd get in a text or something.  Not total radio silence.

Yet again I am happy that I came to your fic late so that I am not finishing this chapter and contemplating long stretches of time without an update.  Like seven or eight minutes would be a long stretch of time.  The weeks to which you allude in your author's note are simply mocking, right?  You didn't really do that, did you?  Ah, the value of the anonymity of fanfic world, that you could still safely start your car and go to work in the morning, secure in the knowledge that hundreds or thousands would not know precisely which car to wire for explosion...

And the build!  You knew what was happening.  You felt it.  But still kept paging, one screen at a time, hoping against hope that the next one would have... a text.  A call.  A picture.  Something.  Anything.

But alas.  Nothing.  FicNick should contract a raging case of scabies.  That's all I'm sayin'.



Author's Response:

I am going to answer your reviews in reverse...i apologize...

oh the power Of Pattinson... sometimes it isn't what it seems... has it become tarnished somehow now for you? i hope not...

Yes.. i am glad you got  to this late as well. and no... i think i left the masses waiting about 4 or 5 days for this one...I love to read angst... but HATE to wait for resolution when i read... so I try to be very diligent to get angst filled chapters updated as soon as possible.. i try to stay about 4 chapters ahead of the posts... although currently i am only 3 and stressing...

but i update weekly...so my dear readers don't have to wait... too long... and LOL! about wiring the car... i think i had suggested something like hiding in an undisclosed location at some point... yeah... cause there are way s for ya'll to track me down... I mean... how many lostluggages do you know of outside of an airport...

thanks on the build... i wrote this sequence of chapters in one night, wired on caffeine and listening to lots of Snow Patrol. so I was inspired. i am glad the build worked for you!

FicNick... I like that... so now I have Nick the Prick and Fic Nick... heehee... poor RL Nick... he's probably developing some unknown paranoia from all the eveil vibes we are throwing him...

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 20-So Little Time

Just when I was saying to myself "You fool, he's going to be not touching you enough in less than 12 hours!" Rob had a breakdown.  We're simpatico, Mr. P and I.  Not at all what I expected... so much better than I expected or hoped for.  Really well done.  Of course, the schmexin' was quite hot, but the nod to LOTR, the reaction when he ripped the VF... hysterical.  So unbelievably funny that my little one came in to find out why I was laughing.  How do you explain that to an-almost-five-year old?

I said "Mommy's friend wrote something funny."  Thanks for writing something funny, Mommy's friend.

Steph, you captured it perfectly.  And you also helped me understand why I've been circling the drain on my last chapter for so long.  This particular thing - this temporary parting - is really freakin' hard.  Thanks for showing me what true voice and feelings should be.  Awesome.

Off to the Next... even though I'm petulantly pissy about it.



Author's Response:

heehee...nobody touches my precious.... 

oh the breakdown. poor Rob... so many feelings...and so intense that man is... sigh...

I know all too well about the explaining to the little what mommy could be guffawing over so heartily... my spawn has finally given up asking... it happens too regularly now...

thankyou so much about your thoughts on their parting... yeah.. you'd think it wouldn't be that bad.. but really, it is... there is just so much unknown that could happen, and to depend on someone-to want to see them constantly to fill that void.. to be able to just go and see them.. that all vanishes... sigh... 

it's ok to be petulantly pissy over it... i'd be that way as well... 

mwah ! you are awesome to be reading and rating!

steph

Reviewer: girlnextdoor (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 28- An Evening at the Pattinson's

....ANXIOUSLY awaiting MORE.....YOU ROCK!



Author's Response:

Thanks my dear! 

There should be a new chahpter up in the next day or two...

thanks for the read and review!

mwah!

steph

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 19-The Last Day

Look at that!  We chat about the KStew question and there it is.  It's magic, I tell ya!  I'm very angsty right now... I didn't like going back to the mainland either, although I can only imagine what he's going to find at her house, since she didn't know she'd need to de-Rob.  For heaven's sake, I'm a married mother of two and there's some stuff I'd want to hide if he showed up at my place.  You know, looking to borrow a cup of sugar.  Or a phone to call for a tow.  Or a cool drink on a hot summer day.  Because my neighborhood is like a magnet for superstars lost in suburbia.

Hey, a girl can dream, right?

I keep sighing like the stupid guy allegedly thinking about a cat in the restaurant.  I know what's coming and suddenly the lure of the little red Next link isn't so enticing.  Waahhhh.

I have to go bake birthday cakes (well, a cake and cupcakes).  I'll be back shortly.  Love the story, hate the part of the arc we're currently in, understand why we need to be there but reserve the right to be suitably petulant anyway.  Here's to "welcome to my condo" nookie to take my mind off it!

*mwah*

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