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Reviewer: m244robp (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Thank you for this lovely break in my otherwise crummy work day. I wanted to read it last night, but felt it was too late.
I'm glad Jen has the opportunity to enjoy a true family Christmas. I liked how Papa P. introduced her as the new addition to the family. They really have taken a liking to Jen. Always a good thing, if I may say so myself.
Author's Response: thanks My dear!
I'm gald i could give you a little break! MWAH!
Yeah, she needs to see how a real family does teh holidays... hopefully it won't be TOO stressful different... but with ROb there...
And Mr. P...he is just awesome... i just want to hug him...
thanks my dear for the review and rating! you always take such good care of me!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: tgriffin (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Oh Steph - you did me in with this one! I have a degree in History and having Rob start on a little history speech about melted me! I am so lame...but it was HOT for a nerd like me!
Those 2 are quite randy aren't they? How many times can you get it on in the freezing cold at a Christmas tree farm!
Poor Jen - what a story about her mom and brother. The Pattinson family is so good for her. She deserves some love and happiness...she's such a sweetie!
And you went there with the wand, didn't you?! Heeheehee...
And thanks to Whitney for getting us a quick fix of ROBJEN! You rock girl!
Loved it Stpeh - thanks so much for writing this...we all need to escape with Rob every now and then!!!
~Tracy
Author's Response: I know right? mmmm.. like me a well schooled ROB!! LOL!
seriously... it was cold.. and still they managed a little one on one... clare needs to put these 2 in a time out! LOL!
Jen does deserve better... maybe fate was waiting for the right man... and the right family...sigh...
yeah... i went there... I have been dying to make a GOF comment....hehehehe
And Whitney is the greatest! there is no greater beta! I am so lucky to have her!
more escaping soon! thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: sam0204 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
This is my first review. I have been reading your story for a while. You are a great writer. You do angst very well and your vivid descriptions make the story feel realistic. Love the characters -- both Rob and Jen, and I think your supporting characters (Leroy, Mr. J, and Rob's family, etc.) are the best I've seen in this genre yet ahd round out the story really well. You also can write quite the hot sex scene! Your story has been one of my favorite ways to 'escape'. Thanks!
Author's Response: *blushing scarlet!*
thank you so much for all the kind words! They truly mean a lot to me. Hearing someone likes your work spurs you on... so you can be sure I'll be motivated to keep going! Thank you!
and thanks so much for reviewing!
more very soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: clumsy like bella (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
I've been reading for ages but have been rubbish and not reviewed, sorry. I'm really enjoying this story, you're a great writer! It's smoking hot, too - you manage to keep the intensity up without it becoming repetitive.
This chapter also gave me extra jollies - I live about ten minutes away from Guildford and will look at it through Jen's eyes next time I go past :)
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: *Jumping Up and Down!* oh you are so lucky to live there! I have fallen in love with the area from all the research....so beautiful and the old churhces... i am sucker for them... there are so many magical places there (and i am sure just as normal every day places...)LOL!
thank you so much for the review and rating! I am so glad you are enjoying the story!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
That was MAGICAL!! made my heart melt....the whole thing was just BEAUTIFUL. I would not have been able to resist him either...lol :D
Author's Response: Aww! thanks so much!
who could resist ROb? um... yeah... i don't think anyone.... hehehe
so glad you are enjoying!
more soon!
steph
Reviewer: EMCullen17 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
I can't tell you how much I love this story! I love the dynamics with the family--great little outing.
Can't wait for RPOV.
Author's Response: thanks so much! there are more family times to come... christmas is just around the corner!
and the RPOV... i can't wait either! heehe
thanks my dear!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Wow, another hottie. Can't believe how this story keeps sucking me in each chapter. RobJen getting naughty outside in the cold was HOT! Can't wait to see how they warm up, hee hee hee. Love it. Looking forward to the tree decorating and the girls day out. Please post soon. (BTW I live near Guildford and loved your description of the landscape etc!! Very accurate, have you been here?)
Really excited about the RPOV for this story, should be great, hopefully with lots of hot lemons! Can't wait to read it.
Author's Response: Thanks deary!
I have actually not been to Guildford... Google is a wonderful thing... but in researching for christmas tree farms i found the Santa Fir tree farm south of Guildford... and fell in love with Guildford as i searched... there is a church on a winding road that is somewhere in Guildford that i have fallen in love with in my image searches... that is the one Jen sees.... such a beautiful place... I WILL go there someday....
The RPOV will have as many lemons as this story...only in Robs perspective...hehehehe... oh that naughty boy!
thanks my dear!
more very soon!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: kbrendon (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
loved this chapter ;) made me feel like it was christmas all over again. I know what i want for christmas next year Rob. Please post the next chapter soon. As always love this story i find myself checking everyday to see if you have updated and it always brings a smile to my face when you do thanks
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
so glad you are enjoying! and it was like christmas without the clean up! hahahaha!
Will be submitting the next chapter today or tomorrow. so maybe we'll have it for the weekend?
thanks My dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
It's great to see Rob and Jen settling into Pattinson family life. Her story is heartbreaking enough already!
Sexy times are always good, they're like horny teenagers who can't keep their hands of eachother! Looking forward to some sex exploration between them.
I would like them to talk some more about their futures. It would be great fun to see their jawslacked reaction to Clare or even better Mr P. asking for grandchildren in the near future. Although that would be a charged question.
Looking forward to Nick groveling and public knowledge!
Author's Response: THANKS MY DEAR!
yeah... i don't think we will have too many more sad skeletons in Jen's closet... We have learned about just about everyone now...
she can only look ahead..and that's with Rob- so how sad could it possibly be....smiles....
thanks for enjoying their sexy times... really these two need to take a breather...hahaha...maybe by february!
more discussions about their future are definitely coming up...Christmas always brings those kind of discussions around, don't they? smirk
Oh and Nick.. you all are just dying to see nick squirm! hehehe... after the new year i promise.... (that just sounds weird...)
thanks for all your support my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
awwww that was such a sweet chapter.....and that place sounds sooo beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks so much my dear!
Doesn't it sound really cool! and it actually exists just south of Guildford!
thanks so much for the review!
steph
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Great Chapter...I am so curious why Clare and the sisters (love your name for them by the way) are so anxious to get her out of the house....What do Rob and Mr. P need to talk about? Hmmm...oh! It just hit me....maybe Nick? Can't wait!!! Look forward to the RPOV story....
Author's Response: Hmmmm. what indeed...father son talk? Rob's future? just some testosterone time under the hood of the stang? or maybe a lecture to keep it in his pants once in a while... hmmmm.....
heehee
we'll see....or maybe the girls want to grill JEN?
thanks my dear! I am excited about the RPOV story! can't wait to get it going!
thanks for the read and review!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Emrae Penne Degrah (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
it always stops when i want more....
Author's Response: oh I know... i'm so sorry... but i needed to break it up a bit... they idea of a 20k chapter was daunting...
but there is hope... always a fast turnaround!
more soon!
promise! thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Ok seriously I want that family! Who wouldn't?They're amazing. Jen has the saddest stories... she deserves some good stuff now.
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Ok seriously I want that family! Who wouldn't?They're amazing. Jen has the saddest stories... she deserves some good stuff now.
Author's Response: they are wonderful aren't they!? goodness... where's the hidden skeletons?
and yes.. Jen deserves some happy...Yay for Rob being there for her! I think happy times will be in her future!
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
I'm so excited that you're going to do RPOV! I've loved the snippets you've provided so far, and I'll be especially anxious to see the early days together and his POV when they're separated.
This chapter was so sweet, and Cedward's speech in the maze was adorable. Thanks, Steph!
Author's Response: thanks my dear!
yes the RPOV will be a parallel story to this... chapter for chapter for the most part (except where we already see RPOV here)
I may even throw in a Nick POV while Rob is in LA...hmmmmm.
so glad you liked this chapter, oh how i love CEDWARD... hehe.
thank you my dear!
more soon!
steph
Reviewer: blondieja (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Loved the tree farm!!!! It was great, Steph. I can only wait patiently for the next one. I love how you write Rob and Jen. It seems real. Some authors you read make you want to think, "no way" but I think you really capture their emotions.
Thanks for sharing....heres to some one-on-one time!!!!YAY!!!!!
-Jen
Author's Response: Thanks so much Jen!
i can only hope that how I portray ROBJEN comes across as genuine... so it means so much to me when you say it does..SO THANK YOU!
the next one may be up by end of the weekend? maybe?
and yes.. some more one on one time (snickers) is on its way!
thanks!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Love the tree hunting adventure!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
wouldn't that be awesome with his family!
we used to do it as kids (it wasn't nearly as sexy tho...no rob around...sigh)
and this tree farm actually exists in Surrey! very exciting!
thanks for the review and rating!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Loved it! I just love how to write his family. They are just too much fun.
And the sexin in the cold outdoors was hot!
You and Beautiful Distraction totally rock for getting this out so quick.
Author's Response: Beautiful Distraction is the best beta ever! she totally rocks!
I owe all my fast turnarounds to her...
so glad you like the family.. I heart them so...
and mmmm cold outdoor sexing.. can't wait for these 2 in a warmer climate... maybe a boat... or a beach... wow....
thanks for the review and rating my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Awesome chapter!! Loved the Harry Potter reference and Rob's answering "You know I did, Jen." OMG! This chapter was so great because I lughed my ass offf and we had some sadness- Jen's bro and wondering why her.. Plus warm fuzzy times with family.. Just wonderful..
2 fave parts- 1)Robs crack showing... ahahahah... and Jen's teasing... very cute- again LMAO 2)Rob in a beanie, jen on his lap, Rob's hand in her pants... GAH!! What a picture... sigh... (Making me shiver even thinking about it now..mmmm)
Author's Response: LOL! thanks my dearest!
sigh,, i have been dying to make a snarky HP reference! glad you liked it! and his response... he can defiinitely keep up with Jen!
Yeah... Jen has had a sucky life, but she has become the lovely girl she is by having it... And the Patti clan has welcomed her in so well, maybe she will actually be able to have something she never had before...
Rob in a beanie... jen on his lap... yeah... that would be nice... *faraway look begins*
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Aw, love ya bb! Just great!
Author's Response: heehee... I would have gone there Laura! but pine trees are itchy and scratchy.... heeheeheee
Love you more!
thanks for the review!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KalifDee (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Damn the cold! Up against a tree would have been FANTABULOUS!! lol. Too bad it wasn't Arbor Day they were celebrating!!
Love it as usual..duh!
For your RPOV are you doing the whole thing? I was just hoping for a few chaps!
Author's Response: hehe! yeah up against the tree was hoped for.. but it was like 40 degrees out there! I don't want Rob getting frost bite....coughcough
heehee..I was saving them till they got someplace warm....
Yes... I intended on the RPOV's to be just outtakes of particular chapters at first.. but it has blossomed into a parallel story... Complete chapters... the first 11 are currently written... phew...that only leaves... what? 40 more? omg... i need more coffee...
but yes it will be a full story... we may even get a Nick POV thrown in there...maybe....
Thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
There were too many out-loud guffaws in this one to capture them all, but I dearly loved the trip to the Tree Farm.
The plumber line was so funny I'm still chuckling just thinking about it. And the question about the wand - did she sign up for the straight-man part, because, really, Jen! But all of the double, triple, and quadruple entendres were excellent. I love how Liz and Victoria get under his skin. He's SUCH a classic little brother.
I wonder what the girls have in store for her, but more importantly, I wonder what business it is that the boys have to attend to that requires the girls to distract her. And the line about everyone putting down their balls! Hah! Hmmm... I'm just a curious sort. I am also very intrigued by the "Isle of Why" teaser. That's just delightful. I need you to erase the stuff I have from there now and replace it with a better vision of the New Year.
Thanks for the update, Steph. Fabulous as always. And, although it goes without saying, I guess our boy's pretty insatiable, huh? Too much! I love it.
Author's Response: LOL! yay! for loud guffawing! i gotta try to balance the angst filled sexing with a little humor... glad you liked it!
oh yes.. the plumber joke.. i bet he has a very nice plumbers crack... just saying....
I had to go there with the wand... just.had.to. LOL!
AHHHH... yes.. why would the girls need to take her out and leave the boys alone? hmmmm. something must be going on....
oh...Isle of Wight...it's in the distance...but it HAS been written.... I have an answer to the famous Isle of wight... yes i do...
sigh..yeah.. you'd think that 23 year old would tucker out.... really....
i'm not complaining.... i just would think...hehehe
thanks my dearest!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: CanadianCullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Hooray! 2 lemons where they could get caught by the fam at any time (naughty naughty!)...
"The list"...
Nutcrackers... (too funny!)
Rob with his 'wand' in the maze...
Another Dr. Who and Mr. Tennant reference...
Big smiles on my face at the end of this Chapter Steph!
Your updates still make my day!
*MWAH*!!!
Terri
Author's Response: HAHA! Thanks so much Terri!
I had a lot of fun (and coffee) for this one.... and I am really happy that Jen is starting to come into her own with the family...
Rob and his wand... i had to go there... i think now that she is feeling comfortable and they are really getting to know one another... we are going to start seeing real interactions.. joking... talking... even annoying little things... (like does Rob snore, or drool when he sleeps? hmmmm)
thanks my dear! glad you liked it! more again soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
I just spent 2 days reading this story and I LOVED it!! Very well written. I sympathized with the gut wrenching feelings that Jen went thru when she thought that Robert was "acting" and I teared up when they finally spoke on the telephone. The New York shopping trip was every woman's dream (well this woman anyways)... We stayed at the Hotel Roger Williams just this past December as well - how bizarre!?!?!??!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to see how Rob reacts to the guitar and how he handles the Nick situation....Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: WELCOME AND THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!
Goodness, I am always so impressed to hear of wonderful readers like you that do a marathon of this story! simply AMAAZING! so thank you!
and the roger williams?! that is weird! LOL!
Let's see... next chapter is inthe queue, althoung you may need to wait for a bit for the guitar and more Nick..but they are coming... I'm a bit of a wordy girl...so the next few chpaters will be still pre-christmas...but it just means we get more ROBJEN time with the PATTI CLAN! yea!
thank you so much for finding my story !
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
cant wait for the next update!!!! excellent chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
the next chapter should be up by the weekend! yea!
MWAH!
steph
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