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Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
I still liked it & I'm not going anywhere!
Author's Response: Thanks dear! that's what i needed to hear today !
more soon!
thanks for all your tremendous support!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 41-At Home with Mr. Pattinson
They are wonderful together. Sigh...
I will catch up tomorrow. I have ignored all of my other updates for days. I am obsessed with this story!
Author's Response: haha! thanks my dear!
you are awesome! thanks for taking the time to read it all the way through!
I just updated ch 42, so you are in a great place!
enjoy the other updates!
thanks for finding NTE!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
I loved the chapter, bb. I think your portrayal of Kristen was probably, in all likelihood, fairly accurate (particularly the awkward part). I figured she would be showing up sometime in the story. Any chance we can get her together with Leroy? That boy needs some luuuuve!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: hahah! thanks Sarah!
She is an interesting character study to be sure. she'll be around for a few chapters, so we'll get to learn more about her (from Jen's perspective of getting to know her at least)
hahah. Poor Leroy... he's so smitten for Jen... it might be hard to dissuade him... hehe
thanks my dear and thanks for the rating! you rock!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Notebookgirl72 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Awww, Steph! I can see that subject weighs heavily on you but you handled it beautifully! I just have one thing to say about the whole thing, if people can't get through their heads that this is just fiction then they need to move along and not read it! You have nothing to defend as far as I'm concerned.
Author's Response: thanks my dear. i am glad you enjoyed it. i love you guys for all the support you have stated.
It's all about making this guy happy. however it seems to happen... HAPPY ROB. my mantra.
thanks so much!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 40-Happy Boxing Day
Boxing Day was intense! Poor Jen. Her brother reminds me of my ex. A lot! I am so glad Rob was there to help her work out her frustrations.
Author's Response: Gosh I am sorry! yeah her brother is a Tool. i wouldn't wish that person on ANYONE! his name isn't Robb is it? LOL!
yes, thank goodness for Rob and his fine frustration easing abilities.
We haven't seen the last of Brother Robb though. I am a firm believer in keeping up with family, regardless of their idiocy!
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
honestly i'm not lurking... heehee!
steph
Reviewer: hisbella (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Great chapter. I have to comment on your a/n...well said. You are right. He's just a guy with a very public job. I agree and happily join you as a member of "Team Happy Rob." He deserves it. I can't wait for Bel Ami!!!!!! Love me some Rob in period clothing, a top hat and cane.
Author's Response: thanks my dear. just a guy. absolutely Go Team Happy Rob!
oh Bel Ami Rob...you haunt me so... your NTE chapters will be rather intense i think.... darn top hat and cane! Kryptonite i tell you!
thanks my dear !
more soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Steph,
Totally loved the reference to Marion Ravenwood! Love Indiana!
I think you did a great job with this chapter and the portrayal of the characters. I totally get lost in this story and I imagine him with Jen too. We don't know what goes on with Rob and Kristen and "are they, or aren't they", really who cares. If he's happy that's all that matters. I think the press should give it a rest for God's Sake! They hound him so and I don't think it's healthy. Poor guy can't even pee in peace!
I understand where you are and I have loved this story since the beginning. I am definately in for the long haul.
I think you do a great job writing him as you think he may really be. I imagine him as just this myself.
So, with that, keep up the great work and I always can't wait for more.
MWAH!
Hugs,
Louise XXOO
Author's Response: thanks Louise!
YAY! someone notice Marion! yippee! thru all the Kstew someone noticed Marion!
yeah...indy would be my freebie with my hubs (Rob bumped Harrison off a long time ago, but Indiana Jones circa Raiders days.... sorry Rob, I can't say no to that!) hahaha!
It really bugs me that his press time is not better spent with better questions pertaining to his acting, and the constant hounding breaks my heart. I could go on forever- but really, that is why this story came to be .... HE needed and ESCAPE.
i giggle a bit a the peeing in peace, only because i wrote a little something of that lack of privacy in a later chapter of OTT... it's sad but true.
Thanks for supporting me my dear! it really means alot. Everyone's kind words have spurred me on... I'm in it for the long haul too...
Bel Ami here I come!
heehee!
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 39-It's Christmas Time
I do believe this is the best chapter of any story I have read so far...and I have read quite a few. Let's see, so far I have saved 40 as favorites. I will save this one as soon as I catch up.
I love how well they play, and play, together. I love how nice Aunt Diane turned out to be. I love the promise they made to each other. So much to love! Amazing!
Author's Response: thanks so much my dear! this was one of the harder chapters to write, as it was so important to me to get it right. Christmas is such a special time, and add to that the fear of rejection, poor Jen. but she handled everything.
thank you for adding me as favorite. it means a lot to me.
and heehee, they do play well oh and play well together don't they? Aunt Diane really loves her nephew to bits. i like that she is feisty. We have to remember to protect our family. she's just really overzealous. We'll see her again...
the promise. too early for a proposal, but not too early to pledge. so simple yet poignant. there's even a story behind the ring. but we don't find that out until we see it from Rob's POV....oh i am sneaky....
thanks my dear !
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: CanadianCullen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Steph - This chapter lived up to what I hoped it would be and more! I think you've done a wonderful job of portraying Kristen, and weaving RobJen into real life! Their first fight! And going to bed angry! It was one of those moments in life where you just know that your partner is being a jackass, but you know you are too, and you're just too pissed off to apologize :)
And about KStew - I think the fact that Kristen is so Young is a huge part of what comes across in the media - and she's under a ton of pressure. The girl gets nothing but flack, whether sometimes deserved or not. I think you've portrayed her fairly, but in your own way, just like the rest of your characters! Nobody worried about you making Nick out to be a d**che :)
Anyhow, here's to hoping Jen gets a new pair of Laboutins sometime soon - maybe another shopping trip with Lizzy!
I <3 you lady!
- Terri
Author's Response: heeheehee... Poor Nick. if his mother read this she'd have my hide.... but then again... Rob isn't "with" Nick....EWWWW!
thanks my dear. i agree on all counts. she is young, she has a lot of growing to do, so does Rob. and we'll get to see more of why my Kris is my Kris in the next couple of chapters.
oh those stupid fights... this was a good one... it only took them 5 weeks to have a fight! yay! but the make up was worth it...
oooh! another shopping trip! maybe with Kristen! she owes Jen! hahahaha evil!
love you more my dearest! and Canadians Rule, just saying!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Emrae Penne Degrah (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
lol. a/n loved it. twas great. can't wait to read more.
ps. i know this is all fictional, and that's what makes it interesting. i particularlly don't care what rob's life is. in my opinion you only borrowed his name and face. not much else. (sorry if that offends you) love the story. :)
Author's Response: BWHAHAHA! doesn't offend me in the least... it's how i get through the naughty parts! (my mantra...it's not rob pattinson... it's just an incredibly awesome facsimile of him....who acts and looks and dresses and smells just like the real guy...) hahaha!
thanks my dear!
more very soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 38-Twas the Night Before Christmas
Well, this was a great chapter. I am glad you added depth to Rob's family with the aunts and the grandmother. Tomorrow will by interesting. I love how strong Jen is.
Author's Response: thanks my dear!
She's coming into her own. And the extended family is just another step towards coming out.
christmas will definitely be interesting!
thanks my dear! this has been so exciting watching you go thru!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: tgriffin (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
I remember the day those pics came out and we all had a moment together. I knew you would handle it beautifully, and - surprise, surprise - you did!
I thought you did a great job with Kristen, because in many ways I see her as the opposite of Rob in terms of how she deals with the intense fascination with her life. I think what you did was make her be the one who questions people and their motivations and forces them to prove themselves, where Rob just seems to go with the flow a bit more, and puts himself out there in ways that could come back to bite him in the ass later. And no matter what their relationship is in RL, I loved that you showed the affection and respect that so obviously exists between them...I'm so proud of you for not letting those pics keep you down, and instead used them to create a really great piece of this story. And you know what I loved the most was the fact that I could totally see both of their sides of the story...just really well done Steph!
And Jen...she was BADASS walking into that pub like she owned it!...OK yes, she almost had a meltdown, but good for her for getting it together!
Hated them going to sleep angry and hurting...but realistic as well, the idea that you could be hurting so much that the words escape you...but the morning after was beautiful!
Just adored this...and you!
Lots of Love!
~Tracy
Author's Response: HAHAHA! Thanks Tracy!
that day was so tough! everyone's cloud was so intense! I am so glad you enjoyed this take on it. It took the support of my lovely Tri-O's to get me thru!
I'm glad you enjoyed my perception of Kris. I think she is definitely more intense than Rob. and maybe some of that is the fact she has to fight the constant shadow of Rob and the hatred of his screaming adoring fans- not all of them, but there are some out there.
HEHEHE BADASS Jen. I think she needs kevlar undies when dealing with Rob outside of the comfort of their home. Oh, Jen, get used to the embarrassment and awkward Rob moments... hehehe
glad you felt the anger and bed time angst. Really, if anyone gets anything out of this chapter my advice is to NEVER go to bed angry. and morning shower time with Rob can't hurt !hehehe
thanks my dearest!
I love you more!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 37-Home Again
I don't think this review went through the first time, so here it goes again.
I am glad they are home. Their second night in their home was wonderful. It seems like they have been together so much longer!
Now I can't wait for Christmas Eve!
Author's Response: Their relationship is pretty strong, and it does feel like they have been together for so long !They have to keep reminding themselves of this i think.
love that they have a place of their own to escape to and be themselves. however that needs to be. They need that time to make this relationship really grow.
thanks my dear !
OH you are so close! i'm so excited!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: eryka12 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Steph: I just wanted to say that I for one WILL be staying with the fic. I love how you've handled to story so far, and the reactions of the characters in this chapter seemed real. I am on Team Happy Rob as well, I figure since he's not likely to kick aside the kiddie toys in order to come knocking on my front door, he should be with whomever makes him happy. I like to joke that the recent pics are ruining my Egyptian river cruise!!
Can't wait for the next chapters, I look forward to them with fan-girl anticipation.
Eryka
Author's Response: Thanks Eryka!
It means a lot to hear from all of you on this. and to hear that you all enjoy my take on the characters, it makes me feel so lucky to have so many loving and supporting readers. Thank you. it means the world to me. It keeps me going.
Thanks for sticking with me. And i promise- Bel Ami NTE will be worth waiting for. Dear Jiminy Cricket Rob! the WALKING STICK!
thanks my dear!
more soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Ok, for starters, FANBLOODYTASTIC chapter! :) I love me some RobJen!
With regards to the issues you brought up in your author notes....I'm seriously saddened that the way you have portrayed ANYONE in this story would cause you to lose readers of this magnificant story. Ok, so Rob has his daft, ass-y moments; Kristen is a bit of a bitch and Jen gives it right back to her.... This is a RL story and absolutely no-one in this world is perfect. If anyone thinks for a moment that these people whom the characters are based upon don't have less than nice moments then they are seriously deluded.
I'm so much more comfortable reading a story about Rob and a fictional girl. I don't want to read about Robsten for the most part. It's not because I'm against the idea of them...but somehow I feel like when it's based upon two REAL people and their life behind private doors, well I feel like I'm intruding.
I get that this is not what NTE is about :) It's about a fantastic and interesting young man who deserves like the rest of us, to meet the love of his life. He just so happens to be famous in RL. The journey he has taken with Jen in NTE has never been smooth and their interactions with one another and with others (smooth or otherwise) form part of the storyline. I too would want nothing more than to see Rob have his own real NTE :)
Gosh, can I crap on and never really get to my point!? *LOL* Just point out the naysayers and I'll go bash them over the head with an oversized blow-up hammer shall I? :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much my dear!
I agree. These people are everyday people when the cameras are turned off. they may be eccentric, weird, farting belching sort of people behind closed doors... hehehe. there will be no farting Rob's in my fic, really... hehehe
but they are real and faulty and fragile...just like you and i.
I could never write something about ROBSTEN not knocking the ones that do. I take my hats off to them. It's hard enough to get my head around one of them, and the idea of Rob and a Jen makes it that much more ficititious for me.
NTE is all about finding love. finding yourself, and finding the ability to make it in this crazy world when the world doesn't want you to make it. I truly hope one day Rob finds his NTE.
hahaha! thanks my dear for the support. I love you guys more than words can say. You make this story worth writing.
so thanks!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Seriously Steph, I have to say that was one of my favorite chapters so far because it was so real. It was very well written and I think you portrayed each character perfectly. I know it must be hard to write real people but I don't think it could have been done better without personally knowing each character.
Author's Response: oh my goodness, thank you so much my dear! really you don't know how much that means to me! this was a very hard chapter to write. having to battle Jen and me and the real world. so thank you. I can only guess at them, and i can only hope i portray them with respect and caring.
Thanks so much! you made my day!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Snarky Kristen. Yes, I think it is difficult for many of us, Jen included, to remember sometimes that KStew is still only a teenager. We see this exceptional actress who has lived an amazing life especially over the last few years, lots of experiences, etc. But when the day is done and all has been said, she is still just a teenage girl---full of her own insecurities, lonlieness, etc. She's snarky, awkward, etc and just difficult to know how to take. But I do like how Jen handled her---both outside the pub when she didn't take any S_it from Kristen and the next morning when Jen held out the olive branch. Maturity! Maybe KStew learned a little bit about being more mature through the whole situation
Now, about Rob. What a dumbass. Why would he throw Jen into a situation like that without warning her? So completely something I think he would do. Again, I think that is one of those maturity issues! I would have been more than a little pissed at him. But Jen handled herself beautifully! She is very gracious and confident whether she realizes it or not. Maybe Rob learned a lesson that some surprises are not GOOD surprises!
Another wonderful, emotionally charged chapter. Loved it. Got mad, got my feelings hurt for Jen, felt despair that they went to bed angry with each other, proud of Jen for being the adult and going to breakfast, felt relief and peace when she and Kristen came to an understanding, but still shaking my head at how thoughtless the whole situation was of Rob. Men!
Author's Response: thanks! yep..she's still a little girl in so many ways (and add to that a valley girl from Cali- hey i can say it- i lived there for her ENTIRE life...hahaha) Jen took it well. and yeah, Jen knows when to fight, and when to be the diplomat- most of the time! hahaha!
Rob and Kris might learn something from this older woman. how to handle things better, take on responsibilities better... who knows.
Rob has a lot to learn about relationships. It's not like being with your mates. You still have to go home and sleep with this person next to you. and if you hurt them, that makes for uncomfortable times. Jen will only be able to take that for so long. And when they come out, he needs to be ready i think more than she will. Her grace and confidence will show through on that red carpet ( I am suddenly thinking of Sandra Bullock once more-and how well she has handled her life as her personal life crumbles) men don't get it. It takes a strong woman to deal with them, and maybe by Rob being so young, he'll learn.
Thanks my dear !
your words continue to inspire me!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Hey Steph...another FABULOUS chapter.
OK so I am for Robsten...but I agree with you...him being happy is the most important thing. I am a Robsten fan because in reality they are both just eccentric enough to be right for each other.
But I LOVED this chap...I loved how Jen treated Kristen and I thought Kristen's character was dead on. My best friends in the fanfic world are Kristen haters and I find myself constantly defending her. Being older, I remember when Jodi Foster was starting out in Hollywood and Kristen is so like her...all the girl needs is a chance to grow into the celebrity and maybe some coaching along the way. But like Rob......I think she is here to stay and we have only seen the beginning of their Hollywood careers.
Thanks again for another rockin' chapter - as always can not wait for more!!!
Tami
Author's Response: Thanks so much Tami!
It truly means so much to hear from all the "camps". Always and forever Happy Rob for me.
I liken Kris to Jodi as well. she needs time to grow. She has years of her career ahead of here, same with Rob.
So glad you liked my version of her, truly i worry about portraying all of them just right. And Kris has a lot going for her, and against her. We'll see alot of that as JenStews relationship develops...ok. i giggled at that one... Jen and Kris will learn alot about one another in the next couple of chapters.
Thanks so much my dear! really it means a lot to hear from you. This was a scary chapter for me.
thanks!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Well as always I loved this chapter:) But I felt so bad for Jen. I've been her before and its not a comfortable situation to be in. The part where he is trying to make excuses for Kristen just killed me!!
I'm so glad that it all worked out in the end though and that Kristen was just a little jealous..loved that part!
can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
yeah, to be thrown into meeting so many people who could judge you poorly! And Kristen to boot! silly Rob!
More soon! we have more to do in Ventnor!
thanks!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Good chapter but honestly, I loved your A/N more. Very honest & heartfelt. This is FF folks, so a certain amount of taking free license with Rob as a character is expected. This story is one of the few "Rob" stories that I follow because I do think it's respectful & careful in it's portrayal of him as well as his family. As I'm writing this, I think this is probably one of your more realistic chapters. Nice job. Can't wait for the next update. I've also really enjoyed your outtakes.
Author's Response: thank you my dear.
It really means a lot to me to see your words here. I truly try to represent the characters to the best of my heartfelt ability. It's FF absolutely, but it is also bleeding those lines where people grey them out. But it needs to be reiterated that this is FIction Rob and Kristen. Kristen gets a bad enough rap in the world. I refuse to be cruel and paint her as a truly heartless witch. If anything, I like Kristen more after writing her in these chapters.
Thanks for the love on the outtakes. i am enjoying them immensely.
Next chapter coming soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: mollybloom (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Relax...it's fiction...it's fun.
I love this fic.
:)molly
but I must point out that kristen could not be "drug" from outside....she would be dragged.
Sorry...words are my job.
Author's Response: HAHA!
thanks my dear!
*and here goes steph rushing to fix her grammar* heehee... i love it, I do, honestly. Because i suck at it!
and MS Word just doesn't help.... HAHA!
thanks my dear! yep..it's fiction..and i love writing it for you guys!
thanks so much!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Intaglio (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
OMG if Rob gets Jen in a top hat and he has on leather gloves and a cane I will be ded. Lol
Author's Response: LALALALALALA.... i've written some of Bel Ami NTE... can't help it... WALKING STICK.... i'm a goner for the walking stick...and tails...and top hat... and the wedding ring.... and the.... oh what? oh sorry Rob... he told me i was babbling...
sorry... GLAD YOU LIKED IT!
MORE SOON!
*whispers* walking stick... s'all I'm sayin!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Took a while to review this. Story first. Rob really blindsided Jen. Eager to step outside the inner circle and comfort zone of his family. Now let's meet his close friends. No prep, just here you go. And oh, by the way here is Kristen. Way to go fella. Both of these women have issues about their age and fitting in. And I'm sorry, the crack about looking good for her age is just too snarky. Grey hair. Please. Did Jen overreact? Advance notice about the "meet and greet" would have provided emotional prep time. Drinking and bruised egos make for a bad cocktail and a recipe for disaster. And guess what? Jen walked out, and poor Kristen puked. How much were those boots?
They all knew about meeting Jen. Now, let's watch her perform. Rob screwed up. If it was so important for Jen and Kris to get along he should have given Jen a heads up. Like with Nick. Even though that did not turn out well, at least Jen knew how to handle herself. And in the end both the girls were able to salvage a common ground because of Jen's maturity and the ability to raise the bar of peaceful negotiations. I think she is going to have to fix a lot of ROb's enthusastic errors in judgement concerning their relationship and real life. And Jen is going to have to realize that not everyone is going to accept her. And age will have nothing to do with it.
As for your A/N. Wow. I know I am reading a piece of fiction. Doesn't everyone else? If they don't like RPF. THey shouldn't read it. You constantly put in disclaimers. I personally love this story. Makes me wonder if some people have read Conceited Control. Now that is a way different Rob. FICTION. I'll now get off my soapbox.
Love ya Stef.
Linda
Author's Response: He's such a boy sometimes, just throwing her in there. "But their my friends, they'll like her! " oh rob you should know better... youshould take a lessen from your own POV... well, we'll see that eventually.... i digress...
Yeah, Kris and Jen have major issues- opposite spectrum of ageism. maybe they can help one another out?
Yep. Jen is gonna have to be brave. it won't be about age. It will be about Rob being with someone.Undoubtedly. if the world in general has issues with Kristen (not everyone- don't slam me people!) then she better learn quick that she will have some enemies...and some fans.
yep...FICTION all of it... well the pictures are real. who took them? who cares.... yep...disclaimers are silly, but then again, I don't want Rob or Kristen coming at me with a lawsuit- really guys- i won nothing... you can have my Little Ashes DVD if you want...i've seen it.
I love Conceited Control- BECAUSE it is such a different rob... love it. so yeah... fiction... not real... rob and jen... not real...
thanks Linda. i hate soapboxing. but it happens... sigh...
more soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Well, i wasn't expecting that, any of it! As far as the story goes, it was good to see Rob introducing Jen to some of his friends. As far as the A/N goes; I just don't care. i am reading this as a work of fiction and i am not bothered what real life Rob may or may not be doing or with whom. Saying that though, I am sooooo looking forward to reading what you do with the Bel Ami filming. Rob in period costume....to die for! And since I am a Period Costumier myself, it is like having my two passions all rolled into one! I am so lucky!
BTW did you know the legal age for drinking here is 18? Just thought I'd mention it.
As usual, looking for ward to the next chapter......
Author's Response: HAHA! and that is the sad difference between "Our PAtz" and "R PATTZ" here in the states. I don't mean that as a jibe. I LOVE that the Uk as a whole just doesn't care. How I wish Rob had that here in the states. it disgusts me to think of the pressure he feels here with all the stupid questions. But at home, it really isn't an issue. I wish we behaved better here...
and now i shall get the angry reviews that not all americans think that way.... It's the press folks... I hate the american press, I hate what it manipulates.... I hate that ROb can't be asked about things like "What did it take for you to prepare for your role?" no we get "so are you and KStew..." ok...mini soapbox over... sorry Joss...I love you... in short... for not caring.
I am just for Happy Rob. I hate having to explain myself over how i write Kristen, but undoubtedly i will get the review of "i can't belive you wrote her like that!" so thus the soapbox.
And oh yes,. I can't wait till Bel Ami... just saying...
Yes, I know the legal drinking age is 18 in Britain. haha, unfortunately, Kris is American, and i am sure SOMEONE will say- "YOU HAD HER DRUNK! SHE"S UNDERAGE!" *rolls eyes at sudden disclaimer i must throw in* Jen will mention the drinking age thing in the next chapter, as she thinks about her mother bear qualities towards this young teenager... hahahha
fiction folks...that's my mantra. I love that you get it.
thanks my dear! next chapter, i promise- no soapbox...
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: hissmiles (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 42 The Isle of Wight
Nice interlacing of the storyline and the true facts! I thought that Jen's conversation with the boys was uncharacteristically cocky though.... That comment about the beers' and men's heads was over the top - not at all what I'd expect her to say to practically strangers. She could seem a showoff out of nervousness, but that... I don't know...and she wasn't even drunk yet... just my opinion..
On the other hand, I did not think she was overly bitchy to KStew - was she supposed to suck it? But I would never be able to give Rob the cold shoulder - but then again I know I'm a weakling!
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: thanks hun!
yeah, she was definitely nervous, and being around a bunch of young brit boys don't help. I see your observations though. I can understand.
I didn't want her to be too bitchy to Kris, she truly wanted to get to know Kris, but again, jen worrying about age and how people view her gets in the way.
oh Rob and the cold shoulder, blame the whiskey- stupid girl. I wouldn't be able to either.
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
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