Had a great time reading this! Thanks.

 

Author's Response:

thanks so much! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Oh,  thank heavens I made it past the IOW!  Phew!

Sooo... very nice that they found their own bubble.  You know what a fan I am of the bubble, although it can't last.  I definitely think Jen will feel restless, and she's not going to be satisfied doing nothing.  If she doesn't pick up after him, pack for him, do laundry for them both... then what is she going to do?  She could play cello all day.  Maybe she should have kept the spam.  It would have given her something to do.

She's going to need to go home and deal with the pieces of her life she left behind.  If she freelances or gets a job writing, that will be something, but she's lost right now.  And with him going back to work it will only get worse.

Fired ficNick?  Hmmm... I don't know that that will last.  I wonder how long before he gets a call from Stephanie.  He needs a manager.  Not that he can't change managers, but it's generally recommended that you not fire one until you have the other lined up.  He has a lot of commitments in process, and the timing of this could have been better.  Now, I for one am a big fan of kicking the shit out of Nick, and you have just made me start salivating over this chapter in OTT.  Because I want to see the shitkicking through Rob's eyes.  But I think the firing was probably not a great idea at that moment.

That being said, I'm a fan of the eventual firing.  You have to be able to trust your manager, and ficNick lied to him, stole his property, and lied to Jen.  No trust coming from that.  How do you let that person run your life, manage your money, control your calendar, etc.?  You can't.

So sad to have missed the ass-kicking, though.  Really entertaining that he sent Mack to keep her busy, too.  Which leads me to wonder... where did this ass-kicking take place?  Hmmm...

Well, I'm breathing a sigh of relief over the end of the stewing, and now I'm going back in the cave, I think.  Thanks, ET.  Wonderful job, yet again.  Yeah!  Love you!

Author's Response:

Yay for no more IOW!

yep...bubbles are nice...but they thin and then BURST.... right?

oh how i wish i could submit the next 4 chappy's RIGHT NOW!

yes she definitely needs something to do... she has left so much behind that needs taking care of, she needs to wrap up her feelings for losing Mike, and she needs to jump in to her life with Rob... she just doesn't see herself as the stay at home type... as lovely as that is with Rob... she has gone past the being alone now... it worked when she had no one... now she needs something more...

oh..and she had lots of time in that hotel room and at the airport to right click and lick.... js... you can acquire quite a collection from an afternoon... hehehhe

she will be making plans to wrap up things back 'Home' for sure...

ah nick... what can i say about it? hmmmmm... i concur with all your points... obviously... and as you know i love my pictures as inspiration.... rob may be a bit premature in his actions... and maybe he can't fire nick outright... who really employs Nick? hmmmm... and does he have a contract... yes, Rob maybe should have thought of that before fists of fury... seeing red over something to be sure since jen all but had Rob convinced keeping him around was the right thing.... hmmmmm oh yes OTT will be soooo much fun....

can i just say "yes...they have fun here and here and here,...there's some crying... there's some miscommunication.... and some more fun there and there... oh and then voila! OTT chapter 45.... sigh... maybe not... 

the eventual firing... hehehe... you'll see....

oh Mack... you know i love him, right? and he will be so much fin to have around... 

where was said ass kicking you ask? well, Jen had her Jam session on... so she could have boogied right by them in her bad ass self... which is maybe why the ass kicking occured... hehehhe

thanks my dearest ET. this took me forever to respond to.. RL is being silly tonight and now I'm behind on your story! gah! 

dammit rob... you sucked another night outta me... 

love you my dear. thank you for all your support and love... i heart you...

MWAH!

steph

Thumping Nick Frenkel = multimillion pound/dollar law suit ??

Jen needs a project.. to hunt down and renovate a weekend retreat in the English or French countryside, where the gang can have BBQs and mess around on quad bikes in private.. and an outbuilding to convert into a recording studio..

 

Author's Response:

LOL! this is very tru... of course stealing property from Rob and sabatoging his personal life...hmmmm

 

omg... i love your idea.... gah that would be awesome.... now THAT's a cool way to keep house!

thanks my dear! 

gah now i am dreaming of gentle rolling hills and a cottage... 

sigh...

love ya! 

steph

I LOVE your story!!! And OTT and YOUR Rob has me in stitches every time! But Jen pregnant (like you were hinting at)?? I don't know. It sounds so .... cliché. No offense! But why have to be every HEA end in marriage and children and beautiful sunsets on a beach and.....(ok, I'm getting out of hand now). I think I'm just ... undecided. So YES, it would be fantastic! Wonderful, happy, romantic, and lets be realistic, we are all reading this to escape reality just a little bit, and life is just so....BAH sometimes. See? Undecided!! But! Is he ready for something like that?? Can't handle laundry, abuses his microwave with poor unexpecting carrots and can't tidy up after himself, but wants to be a young father....hmmmmm. And I don't know if the world could handle another Pattinson. Imagine the possibilities! A little Rob Jr. in the arms of his father!! SWOON!!

OK! Enough! Actually I wanted to tell you what a fantastic job you are doing. I'm reading your story for a long while now, and I normally don't like RPFs that much, but yours captivated me from the beginning (like chapter 2 or 3), and I think you've got Rob right (if you understand what I'm meaning??). And I hope I got to read your story still for a long time (*hinthint*).

And last but not least, as I have to write to all of my (very, very) few reviews: since english is not my mother language, I apologize for any mistakes in writing or grammer in this review! (whoever finds them, can keep them ;P ). You have to ask, if you don't understand my sentences!

Love, Kathy

Author's Response:

LOL! Oh Kathy how I adore you!

it DOES sound a bit cliche now doesn't it? hehehe. Of course i have neither confirmed nor denied that she is...hehehehe... and while i plan on an HEA... (because really you all would hunt me down and kill me if i made you read 60 plus chapters and not end HEA, just saying) I do plan on it being not so the marriage/children/beach ending... chuckle chuckle chuckle.. i have some surprises... 

And ROB is DEFINITELY NOT ready for little robbies... but oh my gah... what a picture that would be eh? ...........sorry drifted off there for a moment....

thank you so much for reading my story. It truly means so much to me that people find this story an escape, an enjoyable read, and a diversion from what Rl throws at us. i hope to represent Rob as best i can, in a respectful and honest view. so thank you.

and your English was just fine... I tend to speak pirate in my writing... ARRGHHH me writing... so i traslate fairly well.

thanks my dear... I hope to write this for a while yet.. 15 chapters is a very conservative estimate... if i think about it too hard i grow faint thinking about all the corresponding OTT chapters... LOL

more soon! 

MWAH!

steph

Yes! Nick deserved to get fired. I bet he started badmouthing Jen right? Question, the comment about her boobs looking perkier, the throwing up? Could it be a miricle has happened and she is pregnant? That would be great in my opinion, just when they are dreading telling his family it will never happen for them they find out she is PG. As for keeping them secret to avoid harming his career, I never thought that would happen, the age difference isn't that big, look at Ashton Kutcher and Demi Moore for heaven's sake. Who cares if they all her a cougar. You know what I would say? Grrrrrrr! Do you have any plans on "outing" them any time soon? It doesn't seem to me like your Rob would be able to handle keeping it under wraps for much longer.

Author's Response:

Oh That Nick...what could he have done after jen had Rob so ready to take him back?! must have been bad,yeah? hehehehe

ah the perky boobs, the throwing up.... it seems the general consensus is preggers... we'll have to see... i know... i am evil...

the outing.... it really shouldn't be an issue.. but i think forces of evil (cough cough summit) have other plans.. Robsten sells... good or bad it does... and someone has puppet strings on Robs management. of course with Nick gone... what might that mean.... hmmmmm. but Jen needs to deal with her issues too. absolutely Demi and Ashton had some rough times.. but i think Ashton is doing better than demi now...hmmmm

i do have plans for the outting... will it be soon... maybe in the next 15-20 chapters... GASP! i know evil again... but i have definite plans for it... and Rob is bursting at the seams... we'll see...

thanks so much my dear! more soon...

 

MWAH!

steph

Cool he hit Nick

Author's Response:

heehee..yes...yes he did! 

thanks my dear! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

as usual...LOVED it

Author's Response:

thanks my dear! 

more soon! 

MWAH!

steph

Wow!  This an MOTU are my very favorites stories....to say nothing of Over the Threashold, but that's to be expected...  You have a gift for writing and I love this story... many others have guessed and I ALSO think Jen is preggers.  Won't that be a shock???  Little blonde Pattinson boys... Awwwhhhh! 

I love how you respond to all your reviews.  Thanks for writing this.  Oh, how do I sign up for alerts?

 

Author's Response:

WOW! i am having a little fan girl moment on you for listing me with MOTU... thank you! 

jen...pregnant... we shall see... i know i am cruel... i won't leave us hanging...

I believe very strongly in responding to everyone's reviews. You all take the time to read and leave some love, it is only right for me to respond... It brings me great joy to have this link with my readers. so thank you for taking the time to review! it means the world to me!

signing up for alerts:

on the bar above- click Account Info

Click on Edit Preferences

check the box by "contact when favorites are updated"

this will send an alert to your email you signed up with. viola! and if you haven't already, add this story and/or me to your favorites by click on the Add Story/Author to favorites button. be sure to hit submit when it takes you to the next page or it won't take... 

hope that helps!

thanks so much! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Wow, didn't exactly see that one coming!  Please get OTT updated quickly so we aren't completely left hanging.  I have a sneaking suspicion that Jen may in fact be pregnant.  At least that has ben my thought since she first had the sick fit.  The dream of the little blonde boy isn't helping my thoughts.  Love both sides of this story and do a little happy dance each time I get an update email.  My co-workers are beginning to think they need to call the men in the white coats.  I don't think I want to know what my hubby (his name is Rob by the way.) thinks of my little addiction

Author's Response:

HEEHEE. so glad i can keep you guys on your toes! yay! LOL! i can't wait to get OTT up to this point... omg it's going to take forever!!!!! LOL!

hmmm...Jen pregnant.... hmmmm.

LOLat the coworkers... hey..they have Farmville... we have this... whatever keeps us happy....

thanks so much my dear! more very soon! and welcome to the forum! i saw you posted! 

MWAH!

steph

Thank you for the quick update! Great chapter as always!

I gather they're now somewhere around mid-January and Rob is gearing up to start working on Bel Ami. And Jen has changed her Google background back from penguins to wet Rob! And she's gearing up to find something to do while Rob's working. I wonder what response she will get to her emails.

It was lovely how Rob played for Jen on his new piano. Their talk about Mike afterwards was a bit strained and didn't quite reach it's purpose. Jen was supposedly trying to tell Rob how she felt about Mike in relation to how she feels about Rob now. In reality what she did was share a very fond memory, albeit a painfull one, about her and Mike with Rob. She didn't tell Rob at all how that related to him nor how she felt about him. And then he also shares with her how he too fell in love with her at first sight, awww! He knows she loves him, but I can imagine the story still made him feel like he would always be second best. And since his self-esteem isn't that great to begin with, Jen really needs to start thinking more about the impact of her words and realising that he is young and inexperienced and therefore needs a lot of positive reinforcement.

You're leaving a lot of subtle pregnancy hints in this chapter, the throwing up, glowing, perkier breasts, wayward emotions. But from earlier in the story when Jen said she wasn't able to have children anymore, I gathered she had a hysterectomy after the accident. How does she know she can't have any children anymore? Cause if all the parts are still present inside her body there's always a chance, a possibility, even if it's a very tiny one, that she can still have a child.  Maybe you can clear this up in a coming chapter.  I'm kinda hoping she's not pregnant and can't get pregnant, because I would like to see them make the conscious decision to settle down and expand their family through adoption or surrogate. It's a very emotional process which makes for great writing/reading material.

The clothes washing and house keeping parts were comical and Rob really needs to grow up and not expect things to be picked up after him like his mother or assistant would do! Maybe Jen really needs to teach him a lesson. She could dress herself in one of those very sexy maid costumes and not let him touch her while she cleans up his mess!

I love Mike "Macktruck" Dean, he's very quiet, but lovely and just what Rob needs to feel safer. Loved how Jen handled him and stunned him into silence with her dancing queen and smoothie! I wonder how long it will take Rob to get Jen a bodyguard as well.

So Nick is fired, what will that mean for the future? When will the make their relationship public? Will Jen go with Rob to the set? Will she be self-doubtfull or jealous when finding out about the very elaborate sex-scenes with Uma and Christina?

I think it's high time for Jen and Mr P. to go on an excursion of sorts to find her a car and have a dad-daughter talk. She really needs some parental guidance to settle a bit in her new life. And Mr P. seems to really care for her and know his son like no other. Maybe he can give her an insight about the working of Rob's mind and his incredible protectiveness.

Also I can only assume Jen has to go back to the US anytime soon, at the very least to handle some affairs concerning her house and shop. She has not been working since she went to the UK and at the very least she has to close down her business. Besides her bookshop is also a internetshop, surely she has to attend to her orders?  Probably also pack up more of her stuff and have it shipped of to London. How will they handle that separation?

You mentioned in reply that you have a very definate deadline for this story. What is it? Is it a personal or storywise deadline?

Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Author's Response:

OMG Nancy! This has got to be the BEST review ever! Long and thick and so full of goodness... does that sound naughty? *shrugs*

phew where to start...

Let's see...this chapter ends around January 7th...so yes, he is gearing up for Bel Ami...

OMG I think you are the only one to catch the deeper meaning to her conversation about Mike... and Rob's frailties... he may not have shown it...yet... but she will have to say goodbye to Mike, and reassure Rob that he is indeed much more. she knows it, but she needs to say it...she needs to reinforce most definitely...

Jen and the pregnancy. I have kept her female issues vague. but we will see more on this in the next four or five chapters.. and I full heartedly believe in surrogacy and adoption... Jen needs to work out her feeling of being broken, she needs to let the family know and more importantly, she needs to know for sure that Rob is alright with not necessarily passing on his genes with her.

the honeymoon is waning, and she definitely is seeing things that frustrates her... maid outfit...heeheehee... that would be funny!

Jen needs some time with Mr. P.absolutely... a good heart to heart...oh i just want to update the next 4 chapters right now!  so much you have hit on! so much to accomplish!

she does have to go back to the States to deal with everything.. it's wearing on her.. and until she settles that... she is going to feel a bit in limbo... she has ALOT to take care of back there... how will they handle the separation is right...

let's see.. the deadline... not necessarily personal... more storywise... but also looking at it in that i'd like to end it in a great place... not to stretched out... 15 is a really rough estimate.. and if the christmas chapters was any indication (gee it thought it would fall around 32-it ended up 39!) we have plenty more to go... i have a definite ending for the story...just gotta get there...

sigh... wow... do you think our review and response will take up one whole page... that'd be awesome...

thank you so much Nancy for all your support and love... you guys make this story possible. i love the feedback..

I can't WAIT to post the next few chapters now... 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

I liked Mack! Can't wait to see more of him. I wonder, will Rob be jealous of Jens friendship with Mack? 'Cause it seemed like Mack kind of had a thing for Jen. And what's up with the throwing up, please. She is pregnant, is'nt she? It could happen, you know. Please! Love this, update soon :)

Author's Response:

YAY TEAM MACK! he'll be around a lot more... cuz well, he's Rob's shadow...hehehe

jealous of Mack? hmmm... maybe, although i'll tell you right now that Mack is married... so we're safe... But mack and Jen will definitely become friends.

throwing up... stress maybe? she has a lot to deal with... preggers? i shall let the story unfold... i'm cruel i know...

thanks so much my dear! more very soon! i am dying to get to the telethon! and then Bel Ami!

thanks!

mwah!

steph

OMG!!! the best chapter yet. I love the fact that rob can't do laundry. Having rob fire nick at the end of the chapter has all of us on the edge of our seats. Update soon can't wait.

Author's Response:

thanks my dear!

poor Rob... fill with water...add detergent in specified cup, add clothes..close door... that simple.... so cute...

Oh Nick... more in the next chapter...promise!

thanks so much my dear!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Alright Steph!

Evil cliffie girl.... I'm calling it right now. Jen.is.pregnant! 

Clare saw it, Liz see it, mentioning you know.. the change in her boobs.. Firing Nick? Hmmm that threw me for a loop. This will be interesting...Please, for the love of God...No more angst! With how Rob and Jen need each other I can't see that happening..(at least I'm hoping so) 15 more chapters you say?  Oh, she's definitely preggo....then I bet they are going public... Sorry... Trying to envision what I'D like to see. But, it's your amazing story.. Thank you so much for your reliable updates on both stories. since you update so often, I'm not too upset with the evil cliffie. LOL!

 

Author's Response:

LOL! i know evil cliffy... but we'll see what is up with evil Nick next up...I can't promise the no more angst... there might be some... 

*preparing my bunker again*

heehee... 15 chapters is definitely a ROUGH guestimate... and with my wordy butt, it'll probably be more than that... but i grow faint with the thoughts of 2 60 plus chapter stories... oh my! 

thank you for appreciating the updates... i try as an impatient reader to keep up on it... i know what its like to have to wait... and wait... 

and truthfully  i am jsut so excited to get to the next chapter, it's hard to hold back!

thanks my dear! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph