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Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 6

Well that I wasn't expecting! Did Laurent kill that woman? What about Victoria? Or maybe it was someone else..

Interesting..

Can't wait for the next update :) Shame there wasn't any Jasper in it though!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

I have to admit I kind of saw that one coming as soon as I read that Laurent was with another woman. Still, awesome chapter!

Reviewer: chibi_estefy (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 5

I really like your fic, is really original =D!!!! Will be waiting for next chapter =D

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story! I just submitted chapter 6, hope you enjoy that one as well

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Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

aw this was really great... bless Jasper he sounds adorable!

I hope Alice gets better at her job! Would hate it if she got fired!

Can't wait till the next chapter!! :D

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you like the chapter and there will be an update sometime within the next week. Chapter 6 is being beta'd as we speak!

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 4

Woops, James spotted her!

Can't say I'm surprised, that heap of junk is pretty obvious!!

And everyone seems to ask about whether she has a job yet, I bet that gets on her nerves no end!

I wonder she gets to see Jasper! :D

Hope you update again soon :)

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

ooh Jasper's a cop... daaaamn. I bet hes a very hot cop. ;)

Poor Alice, not only has she got to drive around that old truck, but she can't use the equipment and it seems pretty boring to her too.

but hey, Jasper thinks shes cute.. could lead somewhere :D

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 2

Eric Yorkie and Jessica Stanley.. well I never.. ;)

So shes going to be following James, Victoria and Laurent around for a while.. wonder what will happen....

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like the start of this, its different.. i wonder what happened to her to leave her dependant on her parents.

Will keep reading :)

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 4

I like funny quirky Alice. She's not all perky and optimistic and that's good. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: CourtneyRose (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

nawh, cheer up Alice :)

its a really different read to her normal perky self, but i think i like it :)

keep writing!

Reviewer: kelliethehottie (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm loving the story so far. Reminds me of Stephanie Plum, but I love that you put Alice in the hot seat

Author's Response:
I did get the idea from the Plum novels. I wanted to add a Twilight twist to it. Glad to hear you're enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting, I look forward to more

Author's Response:
thanks for the review.

Reviewer: CourtneyRose (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 2

Neat idea :) I loved the bit about Edward and Bella

I can't wait for Alice to get her life back on track!

keep writing :)

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 2

This reminds me a bit of the Stephanie Plum novels.

Author's Response:
I got the idea from the Plum novels. I wanted to add a little bit of a Twilight twist to it.

Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting beginning - I look forward to seeing what you do with this story :)

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. I've already submitted the next chapter and it will be up in a few days!

Reviewer: sewthyme (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting Concept. Jasper better not be the cheating boyfriend. Waiting to read more.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I promise you Jasper is not the cheating boyfriend!

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