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Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Peter and Wendy
hahahahahahahahahaha the lychee thing was hilarious. it would be like a local boy to be witty enought to "help a brother out". GOD you are SUPER good. heck even with the noxema girl thing. man o man i should go to bed. it's like three o clock in the morning.
kay shoots den sistah i goin go moemoe lyk dat(haha i felt like talking pidgin)
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Sugar and Spice
hey cholos? okay i have decided you are from hawaii. plus with the mention of .79 suave shampoo? that is a staple in every hawaii household. oh and that hill is a bitch to climb but way faster than walking from the parking lot.
BUT omg the little moments you have between the two of them is soo adorable. the whole him tapping her twice to see if he's there. what a great relationship development gesture. you are EPIC!
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Malasadas and Lukewarm Coffee
omg omg that was sooo sweet. he waited for her for three hours.
but back to talking about how accurate you are. you have no clue how enjoyable this story is for me. the little things like how hawaiians believe in special abilities, malasadas, and etc. God i am just soo in love with this! oh i'm portugese thus the taling too much and leaving a comment after every chapter i read.
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Mermaids and Lost Boys
oo i love how everything comes together. it's soooooooooooo good. she's royal, so royale
Reviewer: maikingie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
no no no it cant possibly end there? how can a chapter so good just end THERE? ACK!!! I can't wait till then next chapter, i have to know what happens! do they finally get to see each other? i cant wait till alice sees bella. ack i cant wait!!!
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Leap Of Faith
haha yeah jumping off waimea is the shits. oh and that is soo true about the crowds.. it's ridiculous. and the mentioning of a local girl nalani was super awesome. i'm so stoked with you right now!
i love how you brought bella into the mix as well.
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:39 AM · On: When Vision and Reality Meet
ha that was pretty damn cool. you have explained everything accurately. it's either you research really well, you live in hawaii, or you vacation here a lot. as a hawaiian i can appreciate that a lot. no joke :)
Reviewer: maikingie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Truth Or Dare
awesome awesome chapter. i thought the same thing of new moon...shoot its what i would have done. the ending was sad but needed to happen. i like the way bella did it...this way they didnt have any parting words. loved this chapter.
Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet he remembered yay
Reviewer: maikingie (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Peter and Wendy
omg...this story is so fun! i can feel the sun and surf and the connection between them. totally love it. the fruit stand boy had me cracking up! whoo hoo i want me some lychee kisses too!!!
Reviewer: 8th-cullen-is-here (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
you will never understand how many times you got me to cry in the last 3 or so chapters omg i hope everything works out for the better because after all that i dont think i could handle the heart break of them not being together....awsome story though
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
sooooo confused now srry but im lost
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:35 AM · On: When Vision and Reality Meet
I just love this story, I hope they get together soon, the suspense is killing me. Thanks for the quick update.
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
Seriously? You can't be serious about not updating right now!!!!!! I am starting to feel hope but can't help but be worried about their initial reunion and her subsequent move to Florida. I love the how Emmett is stepping in to help his brother knowing that he isn't capable of handling the interaction well. Please update soon! I so want things to turn around for them.
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
omg! i have no words for this chapter! absolutely amazing! i wanted to scream noooo! at the end..because it was over and it was soooo good!!
please continue as soon as possible. loved it!!!!
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
I am so in love with your story. Waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Reviewer: beraroma (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
Quick. Post another one.
Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
This story just gets better and better! Thank you for this.
Reviewer: bryav (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
I love this story. It's the only one that has ever made me cry! Thank you for updating so quickly. I can't wait to read what is next!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
Figures. Grand entrances and exits weren't meant for librarians. Quiet retreats were - lol
yay she knows he loves her!! and I was shocked that he ran from her throwing up in the woods!! naughty edward!!!
Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
You're killing me with these cliffhangers, but the quick update times totally make up for that (seriously, you've had to have written ahead - and if you really are cranking these chapters out that fast, then kudos to you; so much respect for that).
This whole fic's been one emotional rollercoaster, but this chapter especially. Gorgeous work on it. I love her power-tie heels, and the bonding moment between Emmett and Alice was gorgeous. And the mural? Good Lord, woman. This fic is just building and building; can't wait to see how you resolve this whole mess (and I mean 'mess' in the most endearing way, honest ;D). <333
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Red Power Tie Heels
THIS IS ALL SO DEPPRESSING FOR ME AND CANT WAIT TELL SHE
SEES EDWARDS
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Let's Make A Deal
Wow! I can say I have been in pain the last 5 chapters. Awesome story. I love the angst. I can't wait to see what happens with them next. Please update soon.
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Let's Make A Deal
So I totally love Emmett now. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: WinniePony (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Let's Make A Deal
I like how you did that, with Edward lying to himself. It's kinda how I always pictured NM; like deep down he knew that leaving wouldn't protect her, but he had to try. Good chapter. =D
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