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Reviews For She's Royal
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

GREAT story!

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Can't I Destroy the World With You?

WOW!!!!!

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Edward's Lullaby

wow...ur writing just gets better and better with each chapter...sitting here balling my eyes out...very powerful chapter

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Truth Or Dare

my hearts breaking...sooo beautifully written

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

Totally delightful story.  Ran the gambit of emotions.  Tears flowed through multiple chapters.  Laugh outburst with Emmett.  Tender smiles during the Edward and Bella together times.  Great original idea.

Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

This was Really good! As I mentioned in my other reviews..I cried..a lot..Crying now at the happily ever after. It was beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.

Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Red Power Tie Heels

AWWWWWWWWWW I can't stand it..its so beautiful...The pain and the suffering have been so real but now the releif is starting to come. THANK GOD

Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Edward's Lullaby

omg poor Edward *sniffle*

Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Truth Or Dare

wow...im in tears. I can't wait to see if it will get better. But this chapter broke my heart and for some sick reason i love that.

Reviewer: VampGrl347 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Malasadas and Lukewarm Coffee

Aww. That's so nice that he waited for her that long.

I wouldn't have (:

j/k X-]

Reviewer: merciduvenin (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:52 AM · On: When Vision and Reality Meet

Wow. This story is epic. It had me in tears from chapter eight to about chapter 16 and then I had to shed some tears at the end because I was so happy! :')
I can't begin to describe how beautiful your writing is <3

 

but, I may be able to put it into a picture... :)
--> http://merciduvenin.deviantart.com/art/She-s-Royal-129020878

I hope you like it as much as I love your story! :')
-Chloe :3

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

Excellent!!

Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

 Very nice story! Thanks for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Anne (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Destiny, p. 2

This story was such a beautiful ride.  The way you took the gifts of Alice and Edward an Bella and wove them throughout into this unique version was fascinating and the arc of their story - the initial courtship and period of separation to allow them to grow - was captivating and so well-done.  A wonderful, wonderful read - thank you for sharing this.

Reviewer: septentrion (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Destiny, p. 2

Thanks for that wonderful story.

Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

Over all ready???BooHoo!  Loved your story!

Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

Thank you for a wonderful story!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

Aww, I'm glad these wacky kids worked it out!! Wonder if Bella's super power will eventually reveal itself?? Maybe her and Virginward can take over the world - in a friendly, benevolent way. :)

Great story!! Glad I found it. :)

What is that artwork on your banner? it's GORGEOUS!!!!!

I'll keep an eye out for your new story too!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

It's been such a great story!!

I find myself kind of wishing for something like a one-shot, set in the future, where B&E are painting that mural and perhaps having flashbacks of the last nine years as they work on the painting and play with the little one :)

My imagination can have that to play with for now hehe

I love Bella's methods for helping Edward deal with the overload of people's thoughts at the wedding and life in general. And I can totally see Emmett being Professor X :)

Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

I just love this story and how it's turning out. I'll be sorry to see it end!

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

I reallly enjoyed your story and look forward to reading whatever you decide to do next.  Thank you for a good read.

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

Edward soon became his partner in Costco double-dipping sample crime.

I still have moments where I feel like I'm talking to E.T. trapped inside the body of Aberchrombie model, which is jarring in and of itself."

"Great, who do you guys think you are? Some fustrated X-men trying to form an alliance with other giftted mutants? Tell Professor Grandma Xavier there's a new X in town and I'm coming for her crown. Or wheelchair."

LOL LOL LOL

sad this story is finished!!!

Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Destiny, p. 2

Ben and Edward eased into a true friendship.

Ben would tease him about his pretty boy look.

"Your hair, it's truly is one of the natural wonders of the world. Or else the result of hair products that cost more than my car."

Edward made fun of his penny pincher ways.

"Take Angela out to dinner without a coupon in your hand for once. Dammnit, man!"

*cracking up at that*  Oh, witty banter.  You never get old.  <333

I gotta say I love your Emmett.  Em's always been my favorite Cullen, and you capture him brillaintly; he's got the goofball, but he's got that hidden serious side/intelligence that shines through in the crackiest of ways - like casting the family for Ocean's 11.  xD  (That was brilliant, by the way; I love Jasper's whining over not being able to be Pitt.  <3)  Alice is right; Em is totally their Professor X (and I love his wheelchair crack; I was wondering if he would - it's just such an Emmett thing to say  xD).  <333  Also: I leaped forward to hug him, marveling at how much our family had been through in the last year - but came out stronger for it.  -  Loved that.

Edward and Bella's knife game had me cracking up, too; I love that it's still going on eight months later, and with butter knives, even!  And the garage sale ring!  That...that is brilliant.  That is so brilliant, especially when you elaborated on why it was the perfect ring for Bella.  Very nice bit there.

And a perfect way to end it.  My eyes are pricking right now, but it's a good kind of tearing.  Beautiful fic, beautiful ride.  I'm definitely keeping an eye out for any future work from you, m'dear.  <3

Reviewer: bryav (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Destiny, p. 2

I loved this story so much and was always thrilled to see that you updated.  Thanks for sharing this and I can't wait for your next story.  Keep 'em coming!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Destiny

Thank you, baby Jebus!! I swear, this story  gave me hives. And hives on my hives!! All the angst, that horrible year alone, leaving Bella like that, her barely surviving, his sad, sad, sad letter writing, the mermaid mural....so much pain apart! and that dreadful ending...and then the freakin' car crash...I need a valium or a cig or a beer! and I dont drink or smoke or pop pills! Look what I've been reduced to!! 8) 

Whew. Seriously love the story, and look forward to a happy ending. Please, don't leave us hanging long, or let anybody do anything stoooopid. :)

I think Edward being a pediatrician is a stroke of genius...he won't have to deal with the voices all day...he'll just get to heal the kiddies and float happily along and then go home to Lady Bella :)))))  aaaah, happy happy.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the lovely reviews. Yes, Edward needed a bitchslap somewhere around chapter 11 I think. lol

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