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Reviews For The One
Reviewer: luckyladyfla (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 06:14 AM · On: Epilogue

Thank you so much for this beautiful story!! It had every emotion in it!!!

Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 06:39 AM · On: Epilogue

My apologies, Jane was meant to be Clare.  For some odd reason, his mother's name has always been Jane to me.

Reviewer: RPattz Freak (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ahhh got to read the next chapter but real life is getting in the way. Ugh! I need to make dinner for the family:(

Reviewer: RPattz Freak (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

Lol, Lizzy the fangirl...You changed the sheets right? On to the date <3

Reviewer: RPattz Freak (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 3

"I'm Robert." SWOON...

Reviewer: RPattz Freak (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hmmm, she wants to please Nick...moving on!

Reviewer: RPattz Freak (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm anxious to dig in and learn more. I think this is going to be good! (A shout out to holdmeransom for the rec) Also we (you and I)began following each other on Twitter today too...I'm Jude0522 on twitter btw. (On here I'm RPattz Freak...which I TOTALLY am!) Anyway, enough of me blabbering...on to chapter two!  

Reviewer: RPattz Freak (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm anxious to dig in and learn more. I think this is going to be good! (A shout out to holdmeransom for the rec) Also we (you and I)began following each other on Twitter today too...I'm Jude0522 on twitter btw. (On here I'm RPattz Freak...which I TOTALLY am!) Anyway, enough of me blabbering...on to chapter two!  

Reviewer: sjs2672 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 23

Wow!  I really think this was inevitable (the confrontation), but I can't imagine how hard it must have been to write.  There is way too much unsaid between Becca and Rob for them to move forward without getting all that "stuff" out there.  I think you wrote this perfectly and I really can't wait to read the next chapter. PS - I really like Kelley too.  She's more than what Becca thinks she is.



Author's Response:

Oh dear, thank  you.  I really enjoyed creating Kelly.

This was one of the most difficult chapters to write in this story.  I was bawling when the whole time.  Thank you again for going on with me story.

Reviewer: Laurie45 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 30

Whohoooooo!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for going on.  I do hope you enjoy this all the way to the end.  Thank you again.

Reviewer: Laurie45 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 28

Oh My God----- I don't eve know what to say---!!

Author's Response:

Eeep!  I hope the means something good.

Reviewer: Laurie45 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 27

I understand that they have to lern a lot abut themselves, but c'mooon!! I don't know if i like this that much u know...... let's just wait and see right?

Author's Response:

Hi there!  Welcome to The One.  It excites me when I see new reviews on this story.  I hope you keep going to see!  

Reviewer: sjs2672 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 13

Ok, you impressed me.  That was quite possibly the most tasteful, yet romantic love scene I have ever read in fanfic.  So much better than the ultra graphic trend because it lets the emotions and the tenderness of that moment come through.  Very well done indeed. *****



Author's Response:

Hello!  Welcome to The One!  I really do love hearing from new voices.  Thank you so much for your lovely review and compliment.  I do hope you continue to enjoy this story. 

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Epilogue

That was a perfect ending!!! :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for spending the past two days catching up.  I really do appreciate it.  I am glad you enjoyed The One.  If you're up to it, I have a new story that was just validated.  Care to join Rob on a "royal" adventure?

Seriously, thank you so much for allowing me to entertain you.

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 34

Awwwwww, cuteness!!!!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 33

Gah!!! Cliffie!!!

 

One perk of being behind is not having to wait.. lol

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 32

Awesome, as always!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 31

Good on Robert!!!

 

Damn Jim...

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 30

Awesomeness!!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 29

Kinda feel bad for Kristen...

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 28

Poor Kristen!

 

Now, I must finish the rest tomorrow, as I have my own brit waiting for me to come to bed... lol

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 27

Awesome, as always!!!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 26

Wow.....

 

In life, everyone always seems to want to put their noses in a situation when it isn't warranted, and then stay the hell out when it's needed..

 

Funny, no?

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 25

I am embarrasingly behind on reading....

 

BAD!!!

 

So, I am now catching up. :-)

Reviewer: lmjohn (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 34

YAY!! Great story and I loved the happily ever after....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for spending the weekend with my story.  Welcome to The One.  I am glad you enjoyed it.  It was a joy to write.

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