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Reviewer: sandstone (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2017 12:47 PM · On: Returning
Really good idea for a story....
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 05:59 AM · On: It was a Choice
i dont agree with the slap but the rest is very good
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 05:06 AM · On: The Dark Hour
more, more, MORE! please?
Reviewer: Melanie Carter (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 03:34 AM · On: Returning
Interesting start! I'm thoroughly intrigued! lol
Mel x
Reviewer: Boren9 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 09:10 AM · On: The Dark Hour
Took a peak at the first chapter then I was hooked! Can't wait to see what happens, though I see there has been no update in a while.
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:13 AM · On: The Dark Hour
This story is really intriguing and a great what-if situation, thank you for writing it! I just started reading this morning, can't wait for the next update :)
Reviewer: ScottishRose1028 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:48 PM · On: The Dark Hour
I just read your amazing story in one sitting and I just had to tell you how much I loved it! It's such a unique spin on the whole Twilight AU/AH universe, I've never read anything else like it. I've recommended it to friends on Facebook, and I am anxiously awaiting an update so that I can find out what happens next! You are very talented, I can't wait to read more! *hugs*
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:49 PM · On: The Dark Hour
wow - what a twist! I cant wait for more
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:31 AM · On: The Dark Hour
Talk about ironic. I hope that all of this makes Rosalie see that it's not worth it to become a human.
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:40 AM · On: In the Distance
"Good," he said and his smile returned. "Because there would definitely be something quite off about you, Bella, if you were not scared of me before but afraid of me now, in this state."
Excellent point, Edward! But I still think there's something wrong with Bella. ;-)
Oh, I see. He was taken after he'd returned from Italy.
Loved the description of Edward crying.
<< And we continued like that for almost an hour, creating memories of a childhood that he would never be able to recapture. >>
What a great idea.
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Waiting is Painful
Fascinating! They injected him with a chemical? I'm wondering how in the world they were able to keep Edward in captivity, unless he somehow willingly submitted to it? Very suspenseful. I should be working right now, gah!
Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Returning
Very cool concept for a story! I look forward to reading more about human Edward. I hope his family doesn't want to drink his blood! Jen
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:16 AM · On: The Dark Hour
Didn't see that one coming. I wondered why the scientist would bother to change the vampires instead of destoying them outright.
That Bella is becomng a bit too clingy. No wonder Edward is always running off. I know she is in love and concerned but sheesh!
Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 06:12 AM · On: The Dark Hour
This was a brilliant twist. Bella needs to tell her father that she is runnng off with Edward. They need to flee together and start a new life as a normal couple. Geez, I am freaking here. I love this story!
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:35 AM · On: The Dark Hour
Wow - crazy turn! And good for Bella - stick to your guns, girl and stay with Edward! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 09:39 AM · On: The Dark Hour
too cool, love where you're taking this, love the little "mention" of the unicorn too, LOL! More please!
Reviewer: Addicted2fanfics (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 04:21 AM · On: The Dark Hour
Amazing story, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 04:15 AM · On: The Dark Hour
Wow. Amazing revelations!
Henry is an unusual fellow. Is he legit?
Edward having desirable blood IS ironic and I'm sad but also relieved it's poisonous to vampires.
I'm glad the family is supporting Bella accompanying Edward. I wonder what Charlie will say and if Bella will indeed be in any danger.
It IS odd to have Edward on the Endangered Species list, as opposed to Bella!
Reviewer: Sosnowieca (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Ignorance and the Bliss
I love your story and am eagerly awaiting for you to poist more andmore chapters please dont leave us in such suspense :) You are a fantastic story teller
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Ignorance and the Bliss
I think this was the best written chapter so far. :) Well done! I adore ths story premise. I can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: melmarett (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Ignorance and the Bliss
Yeah RL can be a pain sometimes, but I have been waiting for this chapter to come along and you got a few giggles out of me during the carnival LOL
Keep the writing up!
Reviewer: bluedom (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Ignorance and the Bliss
I LOVE THIS STORY.
Seriously. It's so good! I have been toying with the idea of a vampire turned human Edward in one of my stories for a while. He's so cute as his clueless human self! The cling wrap.
Anyway,
I am the queen of not updating my stories for AGES at a time so I shouldn't plead you to, but I will anyway. Update!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Ignorance and the Bliss
great chapter - cant wait for more
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Ignorance and the Bliss
I was glad to see that the story updated - I am equally excited for and dreading the next chapter now... keep up the great work! :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Ignorance and the Bliss
I enjoyed this chapter so very much. It is so enjoyable to see them just be happy together. I am a little nervous about the foreboding of the next chapter. "The Dark Hour"??? Crap. I am a little bit freaking out.
I just discovered thi story and I am hopelessly devoted to it. It is brilliant!
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