I'm so glad you're doing smut-takes from this one. I remember being so thoroughly happy that you'd given Alice and Jasper some lovin' in this chapter and that you even used Jasper's accent, but this is SO MUCH BETTER! I promise, promise that I am going to start reading Through The Looking Glass soon! As always, fave lines:
"The future, Mrs. Whitlock, is subject to changing decisions," (Love that he calls her Mrs. Whitlock AND that he teases her gift)
"So that's what we broke, hmm?"
Alice grinned. "It will get worse. Now kiss me?"
"Alice, I'm a man, standing before the most beautiful naked woman alive, who happens to be promising said man 'trouble'. If I didn't love you as much as I do..."
Alice beamed, leaning in to kiss him lightly. "Alright, alright. Come spoon me. We'll watch cartoons and you can grope me a little. Deal?"
(Love that they still sound young, like teenagers. Her offer to let him feel her up while they watch cartoons? Priceless!)
I always wonder why people write them so OLD at times. Alice and Jasper were both teenagers when turned. Alice definitely strikes me as the cartoons type - I can see her sitting with Emmett on a Saturday morning, being silly and singing the Spiderman theme at the top of their lungs to be obnoxious, while arguing who's better: Wonder Woman or Batman.