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Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Why aren't people reviewing?  This was lovely. A very sweet description of two virgins finding each other.  This is the first time I've ever read in a story a description of a woman touching her own clitoris during intercourse -- good for you, girl!  I think I would have added a sentence at the end to underline what happened next -- the next day I heard Daniel was dead, or something like that.

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

not bad not bad at all.

 

Reviewer: juggalettels (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

It was sweet and innocent especially for a first time I havent read your story but it was a really good look at a truely in love virgins first time.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! Obviously it wasn't crucial to the story, but it did help to solidify the original impact it had on Rosalie in the story.
ToN

Reviewer: litlle_miss_vampire (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

i see why yoou couldn't put it in 'Solstice' but it's not bad at all i think maybe people don't know how to review seeing as what it's on...

Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

You just have talent in writing every style! although this is a big leap from the way Solstice and Lily are written its great. much more vivid dream then i thought but hey who cares? Great idea to make it a whole delteced scene. good work and i cant wait to see what comes next for Lily is Solstice!



Author's Response:

Yes, big leap... This is really different from 'Lily' and 'Solstice', I know, that's why I took it out...  it was just too much and it didn't fit. But it was written so I figured, 'Why not post it as a deleted scene?'. I'm glad you liked it!! And hey, I DID warn you it was NC-17 for a reason!! :) But now you truly understand why Rosalie reacted the way she did.
As always, thank you so much for your loyalty to the story... I love reading your reviews!
Mwah!! ToN

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