Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Unchartered Territory
this is good!! you should continue!!
Reviewer: Missy96 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Unchartered Territory
more! more! more!!!!!
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The Chase
now that was good
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Abduction
now this is a twist i didn't see coming
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Details, Details, Details
wow its great that bella tells edward this
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:25 PM · On: The Countdown has begun
very well written
Reviewer: jace (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Unchartered Territory
This is really good! I'm wondering what it will be like after Jacob is turned. Good job!
Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Unchartered Territory
i like this Keep up with more chapters..i will be reading
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Unchartered Territory
Just found this story and I love it! Very different from any other post-Eclipse story I've read. Update soon!
Reviewer: kellbell0 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Unchartered Territory
oooo i like where this is going !!
Reviewer: Sumsums (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions
MORE
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions
oh my. damm Jacob great story
Author's Response: Thanks! Side note to all - I haven't abandoned the story, I'm just really swamped with school and my kids' busy schedules. I hope to get back to it soon. Thanks!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The Chase
hmm interesting, wingardium leveosar! lol
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Abduction
wtf!
Reviewer: iloveedward (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Vampires, Werewolves and Witches, Oh My
ewww.....
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions
That was good more please
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Confessions
Carlisle has such bad timing. Poor B&E. Are they ever gonna get to finish? I'm afraid to find out what the complication is with Jacob.
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The Flood
Yea!!!!! Smart wins the day!!! Now if she can just reach Captain Broodsalot in time, there may yet be a wedding.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The Flood
Thank God for Billy. That totally crushed Edward. I am dieing for the next chapter for Bella and Edward to talk about all this.
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Those Darn Kids
I love how you keep explaining things, and it keeps getting more puzzling. It's also WICKED HARD to read more and wait, but hey, it' the journey, right?
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 12:55 PM · On: The Countdown has begun
This story is such a blast! Love it! Very creative! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Those Darn Kids
Charlie's mythical creature speech was hilarious. He got half of it right. I just love Angela. That is exactly how I would expect her to respond if she ever found out.
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 8 - The Damn Breaks
Yes!! Tear up the wanna-blessed-be's!!! Take down the witches and batten the hatches, it's gonna be a whole new world of hijinks when Bella finds Jacob changed before her, and Edward finds Jacob changed AT ALL.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Vampires, Werewolves and Witches, Oh My
Ewww. This chapter needed a disgust warning. I just ate and now I don't know if dinner will stay down. Newton is definitley vile.
Reviewer: jcullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Is There a Doctor in the House?
is there more? that'd be great :)
Author's Response: Yes. I have about 15 chapters written already, but I handwrite them first and then type them up. Chapter 6 is typed up, I'm just tweaking it a little. I hope to submit it tonight. Thanks!
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