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Reviewer: gemgem (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Preface & Chapter 1
please write more this is really good
Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Preface & Chapter 1
Friedrich Nietzche.... And it was a good story. I'd liked to have known what James was thinking when he saw Alice in the clearing... Or when he was trying to kill Bella. God, I was so upset when they didn't have Alice's story in the movie... Or when Edward was trying to tell Bella about his and Alice's powers and totally skipped Jazz's. :( Anyway you should update soon 'cause I'm interested.
Author's Response: It is Nietzche, good job on guessing that! James' thoughts will be in one of the chapters that are known as "Interludes." The interludes are chapters written in the past, and they are purposefully out of chronological order.
I hated it when he glossed over Jasper's talent too. :(
Reviewer: palsyjohn (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Preface & Chapter 1
It's off to a good start, a little short, but I like it. Keep it going!
Author's Response: I'm glad. Thanks for the support n' review.
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