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Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 32~~We're Going to the Chapel~~
Such a beautiful dress. And how ou described the gazebo decorations is so pretty and the correlation between Edward's eyes before and after was so creative. I think i pulled up the ring on your FFn profile last night, I love sappharies since my fav color is blue and could be more fitting for Bella. It is elegant and beautiful with out being ostentatious.
I forgot to tell you how much i was crushing on Emment a few chapters back when they were talking perks and drawbacks. When i read about the bachelor party it reminded me that he is such a guy's guy. Sex, Hunting, Sex, Food, Sex Videos Games, Sex, etc, SEX...always on the mind. That Boy. Also when ever I say Jacob, I picture it how Seinfeld would say Newman . *chuckle*
Okay have to sneak in some more chapters.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the colors and the ring...it's SO pretty...I love sapphires too...
So, crushing on Emmett...he's so cute!
Thanks for reading, lbritt!
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 31~~Capture the Flag~~
EEEEEEKKKKK a wedding !!!!!!! So excited!
Edward's proposal was so sweet. AWWWW.
Dam those Nomads for wanting to kill Edward. I like how he wants a change and Bella doesn't argue with it. Unlike in the actually book edward was all EMO about her being changed the whole time
Author's Response: Yep, this Bella wasn't going to argue...or bet against Alice's vision for the future...she wants her mate SAFE...
Glad you enjoyed the proposal too...
Thanks for reading, sweets!
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 28~~Perks~~
Where do i sign up to be a Vamp!?! You convinced me...no no no I don't need the drawbacks. Just point me in the right direction. *giggle*
Author's Response: We'll sign up together, okay?
You've made me laugh...thank you!
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~
I do enjoy this story. I have to stop every few chapters or so cuz i am sneaky reading at work (don't tell the bossman hehe) or i would have finished it by now. It has some nail biter moments, but they are not the total heart failure i have found in many fics recently. me likey alot
I really like that you have mostly everyone in canon to the original books. Which means Tanya was a 'threat' at first but she came around and let them be. Speaking of you mentioned James in the last Author's response and Jacob in your a/n, will they be making any appearances in this story?
Author's Response: Uh oh...bad girl! LOL
Glad you are enjoying my nearly canon, with a twist, story...and yes, can't have a LOT of angst. too much in real life...
Yes, Jacob will make an appearance...later!
I do have an M (NC17) rated story up here too...NSFW...lol...that is about NO ANGST...just fun loving times...because I am ALL about the HEA...
Thanks for reading GE!
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 25~~Company~~
That Tanya! I mean to tell you what, she can rub me the wrong way in alot of these fics. I see she is going to be doing that again here. Iguess we were due for some more drama soI will enjoy the ride for now.
Author's Response: Eh, Tanya...she was handled...LOL...she really IS hated in fics, isn't she? Almost as much as James!
Thanks, so much for reading, lbritt...and all of your lovely reviews!
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~
woo hoo. Operation Rescue is completed! Of course you have a touch of the crazy, you did write from the POV and came up with the hammer to the hand scene. I will forgive you for the torture since you did off Mamaa nutjob and have Nutjob jr in jail. Hmmm what other drama do you have in store for us. I guess i will go to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yep, I've got that touch of crazy thing...LOL
Glad you liked the RESCUE part of this chapter...writing the hammer part was difficult...I ate ICE CREAM...
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~
Srsly, Mama nutjob is whacked out of her mind. Drug, Gun, Chain...yeah that will make him come around *eye roll*
On a lighter side love they almost kissed. He is taking action on his feelings for her. Dam that stage hand for interrupting *shakes fists angrily*
I am so nervous for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Ah, but she was so much FUN to write!
Yep, ALMOST kissed...
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 13~~Taken~~
AAAAhhhhh how sweet they are realizing their feelings and emotions to one another. I was for sure Taken meant Mama Nut Job and Nut Job jr were going to 'take' him, but i like this much better. le sigh so sweet. Also like that he (and her) isn't all thinking SEX SEX SEX all the time. Alot of the fics recently have been nothing but that and it is a breath of fresh air for this to be chaste and slow burning.
Author's Response: Yes, that title "Taken"...has many meanings, doesn't it?
Loved your names for the stalkers!
Definitely a slow burn here...
Thanks for reading, lbritt!
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~
HHHMMM, *pointer tapping chin* i would have to say Mama Nut Job is missing from the scent since they seem to be joined at the hip. I like how you don't have them 'falling in love' as soon as they see each other that is gradual. I was so thinking he was going to say her name when she watched him sleep a chapter or 2 back. Alright going to get back to it
Author's Response: Excellent guess, lbritt!
Thanks, glad you like the pace of their getting to know each other...
Kathie
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~
Can we say PSYCHO kids? my goodness she and her 'Mama; are nutjobs, but pretty smart having him 'autograph' the marriage license. These girls are cuckoo for sure.
Author's Response: Pretty clever, right? LOL...never underestimate the sneakiness of fans...
Thanks for reading, lbritt!
Kathie
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:31 AM · On: FGB Auction Chapter
This was great! I enjoyed it bunches. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! So happy to hear that you liked it! Those prompts had me laughing...and wondering how it was going to work out...LOL
Kathie
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:26 AM · On: FGB Auction Chapter
Awesome ending! And everyone is happy!
Author's Response: Thank you, Bella Quinn!~ glad you enjoyed it...
Yep, have to have that HEA...only way I can write!
Thanks, also, for the lovely stars!
Kathie
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:19 AM · On: FGB Auction Chapter
so many prompts there, but they all made it in and flowed :)
I think I feel more sorry for Emmett and the guys stuck in the sewers though!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Daylen...those prompts made me laugh...glad you thought they worked!
Ick...the guys in the sewer...but they really had to go there...LOL
Have a great day...
Kathie
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 06:58 PM · On: FGB Auction Chapter
wow i loved it it was like a mini story lol gotta love mick i love him and he had reruns this summer of Moonlight and i watch them again i loved that show oh and i loved that he found his mate and i loved this ending it was very cute and centamental i loved it
oh and i absolutely loved the ring it was gorgeous i want it lol
and the square dancing was very cute i would of killed to see that actually happen lol
again i loved Guarding Edward and i love you as an author/writer right now i am reading Encore and Oleander just keeps thanking you for helping her out lol so that just tells you i like to follow your work doesn't it lol
well again i look forward to readin more from you
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, mbellaandedwardm! That ring is great, isnt' it? LOTS of $$$...whoa...
I do love Encore...leelan oleander is great...
Glad you enjoyed this little romp...
Kathie
Reviewer: meadowmate78 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~
ok my guess has something to do with the flowers...but I dont know!! Love thte story so far and plan on reading all of it tonight!
Author's Response: That's a guess I haven't heard before, meadowmate78!
Wow...all of it tonight? You are a brave reader!
Hope you enjoy it!
Thanks for reading and those lovely stars...
Kathie
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:58 PM · On: FGB Auction Chapter
YAY!!! I loved seeing EG get one last case in, and it was pretty cool that Mick got to join them. :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it, MrsGunsage! Those prompts made me laugh...and worry about how I was going to get them all into the story...LOL
Thanks for reading, and those lovely stars!
Kathie
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 02:22 PM · On: FGB Auction Chapter
The frame story of fiction meets fact meets fiction was quite clever. This was a fantastic epilogue of our favorite superheroes...I mean, vampires.
Such a wonderful surprise to see this update! [sigh] I miss this story!
Author's Response: Thank you, wantmoretwilightnow! That was lovely to read!
Glad you enjoyed our superheroes...vampires!
Thank you for the lovely stars too!
Kathie
Reviewer: sleeplessnight (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Epilogue 5.0 Carlisle
lol. i barley EVER review, but i found myself accadentally clicking on the review space. i just relized that i'm on my sisters acount!!!!!! lol!!!!!! i've been luvvin it so far. my sis said that the final epalog made her cry, so i KNOW i'm going 2 LOVE it. LOL!
P.S. sorry if my spelling is horrid. not in the writeing mode. i'm in the reading mode. LOL!!!!!!!
~GOD BLESS~ love, vampgurl777
Author's Response: Thanks for reading...even if it is on your sister's account....LOL
My youngest says she's NOT reading the "Final Epilogue"...says she's NOT going to cry...
Thank YOU for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~
lol. tell me if i'm right. is the missing thing her moms scent????? if i'm wrong, please don't laugh. lol
so far i LOVE it, but i don't like lauren. lol.
~GOD BLESS YOU!!!!!!!!!~
Author's Response: EXCELLENT guess, vampgurl777! I wouldn't laugh...
Hope that you enjoy the rest!
And I'll take that blessing...thank you!
Kathie
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:43 AM · On: The Final Epilogue
i want to cry with everything that has happened it is so sad this was a beautiful story and u shoulf feel very proud to have writen it i loved how the wolves and cullens and everybody became a family i love wat happened to the volturi this was the perfect endings and i loved how they went
u are a very brilliant author i love how much effort u put into this u r creative and detailed
love u as a author and i look forward to reading more from u i utterlly ejoyed reading this bc i loved all of the outcome with the couples and the wolves and volturi and cullens when i first started reading this i didn't expected it to turn out like this but i am glad again
and for the last time i loved this story
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm
Author's Response: Thank you, so much, mb...your reviews really made me smile...and your stars? Stellar!
The story didn't go where I thought it would either...I had thought 20 chapters...but then they got CHATTY...and I was led here instead...
I actually have the auction chapter in the line-up...should post soon...9k words! It's a fun little romp...and you can visit with them again...
Again, thank you!
Kathie
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Epilogue 8 Jacob and Vee
i love vee she is perfect for jake lol
loved this chapter again i love this story
Author's Response: Ah, Vee really is his match...
Although I loved writing Tessa...she's just so MEAN...LOL
Kathie
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Epilogue 7.0 Jasper
yessss!!!!!!!!!!! i loved this chapter it has to be one of my fav so far thank you for putting them all together and i love that vee will find out about everything *smiling* god i love this story
Author's Response: You are very welcome...Jasper appears to be a lot of people's favorite...maybe it was that visual of him in Blue leather...LOL
Kathie
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Epilogue 6.0 Esme
i love esme she is like the perfect mom i love that about her
Author's Response: Esme really enjoys being a mom in this story...and all those puppies to mother!
LOL...
Kathie
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Epilogue 4.0 Emmett's Christmas
i loved chistmas it was perfect the way u wrote it
god i love emmett he brightens up ur day doesn't her lol
Author's Response: I love Christmas too...and Emmett seems like such a Christmas kind of guy...
Thanks for reading!
Kathie
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Epilogue 3.0 Rosalie
i love that the wolves and the cullens are like a family in this story i wish SM would of done that
love the name of the studio i love how everything is coming together too it's perfect
Author's Response: Thank you...I wanted them to be closer...and fan fiction is the right place for that to happen!
Your lovely reviews have really made me smile...
Kathie
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