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Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
wow.....this a totally different kind of spin on New Moon........I really like it........Ihope that there is more 2 come
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
This is a great story. I hope you continue. :)
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
well its been forever since you updated! dont ditch this story, please!
Author's Response: I just found a new beta and have more chapters ready and hope to have an update again soon
Reviewer: thailighter (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
please, please dont give up on this story!!!! Its too good to waste!!!!! Please please please update i found this story months ago and when i realised you had stoped updating i had to do something.... Even if it it means begging you to update!
Author's Response: Hi, thank you for this and I promise you I have not given up on this story. I have 2 new chapters waiting, I just need to find a new beta to edit it (which doesn't seem to be going well) but I promise I have not given up on this story, it's my baby.
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
Very intriguing, I hope you continue it.
Author's Response: Thank you, I will continue
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, this is too good not to continue! I hope you're able to work a little more on this story!! BTW- great command of the english language.
Author's Response: Hi, thank you for the review and I will continue, as soon as I find a new beta
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
this is amazing!!!!!! luv it!!!!
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
Must i really repeat myself? i really do think that this story is headed somewhere great and i'm so proud that your grammar is getting better. I can't wait for Captivity to get validated because that too will be a great fic.
until next time :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much :D I'm glad you think so :D
Reviewer: MissAmi (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
I really like this story. I've always had a bit of a thing for stories where someone is taken away from their home and is in a strange place.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D Then I guess this is your kind of story, I'm glad :D
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
i loooove it. bu you need to update more often! its been months! Lol. upate please
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I know the updates are slow, but every time I write a new chapter, I seem to start over 20 times cause I don't like what I write, hence the long waits. I'll try and update faster though ;-)
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
So far so good, more please!
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'll update asap
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
Cool story! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks, and you're welcome :D
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
Great fic! I would love to see this Edward help her--and fall in love with her. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :D You will def. see Edward in the future, I promise :D
Reviewer: Rosalice-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
i like it. very original :)
i think bella should have started to accept that she was in this world and start living it, though. and will bella ever go back to her world in this story, or not?
Author's Response: Thanks, well, she isn't going to accept it very easily since she's made up her mind that she will go back to her own world. But I can't tell you if that will happen or not, that's a secret
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 3: Shopping Time
Really enjoying how this is all playing out.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you like it :D
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
Love the story, can't wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
If Bella is in some kind of alternate universe, did Izzy and her change places? Right now I have a lot of questions but I am looking forward to seeing them answered. Will we see the rest of the Cullens and Angela? Bella's nightmare was very scary and creepy.
Author's Response: I can't really answer the question about Izzy just yet, I haven't decided yet :) I can tell you that the 'Cullens' will al be in this story, and I think Angela as well. I like Angela.
Reviewer: pastel (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
The story sounds interesting so far. If only you could continue updating regularly.
Good luck with the story!
Author's Response: Thanks :D I'll update as soon as I finish the next chapter :)
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
Wow. intense...You have a great start, lets see what you do with it...or where they lead you! :)
More please!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am wondering myself where I will lead this story to, of course I know some things I want to happen, but mostly, I go with the flow and make sure it fits with the story, of course. I'll try and update asap
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
I love your story so far!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
:O wow this is so good! hope there's moresoon - and u know what? maybe you should just do wot feels right - after all it's ur story :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D And I'll do that, mostly I just go allong with the flow, just make it up as I write, I have no idea how this story will turn out, well, exept for the how and why Bella is where she is, other than that, just going with the flow :)
Reviewer: skg910 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well I definitely have to keep reading to figure out what the heck is going on! Great start!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: Minette (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
Awww... I feel so sad for Bella. I hope she gets through with her dilemma and get her happy ending.
This was really a depressing chapter :'[ but I still cant wait for more! :]
Update soon!
~Mine
p.s by the way, I also noticed that there was quite a number of grammatical and spelling errors... peace ^-^V
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll ud as soon as possible :D
ps. I didn't know there were so many errors, can't have been so bad if it got validated ;)
Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 2: Down The Abyss
In 1865 Lewis Caroll wrote a, now famous, book called "Alice in Wonderland", I'm sure you've heard of it. In 1871 he wrote a squeal "Through the Looking Glass, and what Alice Found There." In this book Alice stepped through a mirror (looking glass) and found herself in a world that was kind of mirror image of Wonderland, though few referances were made to the previous book.
Since then, the term "through the looking glass" has referenced then a character finds themselves in an alternative world or sistuation then the one they are used to. In the case of Bella here, she finds herself in a world in which many of the people she knew in her reality are present, but different, as is her location, and lifestyle.
So the question ment when I asked how she "fell through the looking glass" is, How did she end up in this alternaitive reality? and of course, reading this chapter the next question formed in my mind as well, Is Izzy, from this new world back where Bella came from? (assuming Option 3 is the truth).
That "Dream" at the end is scary as hell.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Ah, I see, thanks for explaining. I'm glad you think the dream is scary as hell. Oh, and Izzy is, well, euh, i'll figure out soon enough where Izzy is. I'll update as soon as possible :D
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