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Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just. Plain. Beautiful.

Reviewer: wickedlovely (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

"Because it was always supposed to be just like this."

Absolutely love that line! Very beautifully written story. :)

Reviewer: darcy (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic. This is how it is meant to be. Oh how I hope BD has a scene like this one, but I'm fearful that it may not. I'll be so disappointed. I'll guess I'll just have to reread this story. This is exactly how the characters would act. Edward would be fearful and self-loathing. Bella would be confident and concerned more about Edward. What a perfect "change" scene!

Reviewer: Jenny (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was beautiful and it rang so true for our tortured Edward.

Reviewer: Christine Roberts (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!!! This was incredible. It was really poetic and well-written. The way it was written, it was just... beautiful. Great job!

Reviewer: bethaboo (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

this was so beautifully written, I almost cried.  Seriously.  And I too will beat something hard (ok, soft) many, many, many times if he does not turn her.  argh, will this waiting never end!

Author's Response: Thank you! I honestly can't believe how anxious I am about Breaking Dawn. It's bordering on embarrassing :)

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