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Reviewer: vixensly (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 03:13 AM · On: Clubbing
I like this story. I always like badass Bella, but I've never really been into non-cannon couples.. However, this JxB thing is pretty hot. Please write more!
Reviewer: glee (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 02:05 AM · On: Clubbing
brilliant
Reviewer: glee (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Clubbing
really good
Reviewer: dragonchic (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Clubbing
If you are curious here are my suggestions of how it could go.
You can either have Bella end up with Jasper, and bring Tanya in for Edward, though I don’t think that many people would like that.
You could have Alice confess that she has feelings for Jasper; he realizes that he feels the same and that leaves Bella open for Edward.
You could go along with a three way relationship between Bella Edward and Jasper, as far as I’ve seen that’s never been written about, but I have limited experience.
Or you could possibly combined; having a three way relationship or some sort of fling situation, and then have Alice step in revealing her feelings, leaving Bella for Edward.
I hope my ideas help in someway.. and don't confuse you more
Plz don’t give up
Reviewer: dragonchic (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Reinventing Bella
I know that it’s been forever, but please tell me that you’re still working on this story. I have to know what happens next!
Author's Response: I am planning to finish it, but I'm stuck! I don't know what's going to happen next. I've tried to get some feedback from folks as to what they'd like to see, but I get zip. Any suggestions? If I knew where it was going, I could write it...this is what happens when I start a story without a hard plot!
Thanks for the review. It's good to know somebody is still interested even though I've been thoroughly FAIL at updating.
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Reinventing Bella
Here is the link to your story in the forum
http://twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=8370
Author's Response: OMG, you are awesome! Thanks so much for doing this!
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Reinventing Bella
Hi, how are you?
I made a section in the forum for your story. :)
I hope it hadn;t been done yet. If so, I can delete it. :)
Did you want me to add your banner to it?
Ange
Reviewer: mariec625 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Clubbing
I love it! Please please please don't give up on this story!
Author's Response: I haven't really given up, just have lost my inspiration momentarily. I'm working on it slowly. Thanks for the review. It makes me feel good to know people are still reading it.
Reviewer: bugshavefeelings (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Truth or Dare
You should really post this over on FanFic. I'd imagine you'd get a bunch more reviews :). I'm only on chapter 3 right now, but saw that you needed a beta... did you find one yet? If not, I'd love to help you out. Your writing is really well done just a few grammar errors here and there. My email adress is reighn292 at yahoo dot com.
I hope you continue the story, just realize that a story only needs to be read by one author and then recommended for you to get a crazy amount of readers. Be patient daniele son :)
Author's Response: I had it on FF, but wasn't getting much response there, so I took it down...I may put it back up, though.
As for a beta, I did find one, but she has been a no show lately. If you're interested, I'd love the help. I'm actually rather stuck right now - which is why I haven't updated in a while. Send me an email (swalls@astate.edu) and we'll talk.
And I WISH somebody would recommend this story! I would die a happy person if they did. I don't even think there's a forum topic about it yet - and I'm too proud to do it myself. :)
Thanks for the input! I look forward to hearing what you think of the other chapters.
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Reinventing Bella
Please update soon :)
Reviewer: wazzgud (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Clubbing
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssse update.
Author's Response: I'm trying! I promise! Between work, family and school time is limited.
Reviewer: luxa (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Clubbing
Awesome chapter! Does this mean Slutward is going to be persistent and extremely annoying now? Kinda hope so cuz i really want to see how jasper reacts to that! too bad he would probably never punch edward...that would be interesting
Reviewer: savwhitlock (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Reinventing Bella
Really enjoying reading this story. I think "Ballsy Bella" is a different take on her character.
Keep writing =) for me
Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Clubbing
hey hey now-time to update, is it not!?!:):)
i am totally into tis story, and i cant wait to find out what goes down between jazz and bells:):)
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Reinventing Bella
Hey I am really enjoying your story. It is good to see a different Bella. Hope you update soon. :)
Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Clubbing
WOW! that dance with eddie and jazz was soo hoT! omg! wow ,, loved the chapter cant wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter of my other story right now, and then this will be next. Just hold tight! Thanks for the rating as well.
Reviewer: WickedMind1901 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Truth or Dare
Be discouraged no more! Love the tackiness, Lol. JK
Love the show, Hon!
Reviewer: WickedMind1901 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Country Roads
Group sex minus the sex! Lol, love the story!
Slutward, love the nickname!
I like Ballsy Bella too!
Reviewer: EllieCullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Clubbing
I LOVE JASPER!!!
Haha, great chapter. I want to know what Jazz said to Slutward!
Author's Response: I'll probably do an outtake from Jasper's POV for the conversation between him and Edward. I'm trying to keep the story from Bella's POV. But, I think he probably gave Ed an earfull!
Reviewer: EllieCullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Seeing God
Really love the story so far. : )
But I don't want Bella to get with Edward! EVER.
I love Jasper too much.
Reviewer: Applefromatree (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Clubbing
I like this story a lot so far :)
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Clubbing
I would so love to be Bella! And while just dancing? Wow!
Please update this awesome story soon!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Seeing God
I'm pretty surprised. I usually think of Renee as the irresponsible, but intuitive mother and Phil as the kind, responsible one.
Anyway, great chapter!
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Clubbing
Woohoo. I especially love the way this chapter ended. I can't wait till you update again. I have a feeling this story is going to be a wild ride!
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Clubbing
Woohoo. I especially love the way this chapter ended. I can't wait till you update again. I have a feeling this story is going to be a wild ride!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was a little worried about this chapter since it took a considerably different course than I had intended. I'm rather excited about this one again so I'm hoping I can get the next chapter written over the next couple of days and posted by Monday at the latest. I expect there will be some wild riding going on :)
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