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Reviews For Solstice
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 03:32 PM · On: ...and one to grow on

Daaaaaaaaawwwwww

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 03:35 PM · On: Goodbyes

Stupid Jane...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 11:16 AM · On: Trevor and Jack

No matter how old she is in reality, Lily is still a child, and when a child is scared, it is true terror. Rosalie should understand that, now that she's not alone anymore, Lily's greatest terror is losing the ones she loves.

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 10:24 AM · On: The Game

I was so confused during this chapter 'cause you were using a bunch of baseball lingo and I don't watch baseball so I didn't know what you were talking about! I don't like being confused! But I absolutely love this story! Yay for Lily!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 07:18 PM · On: Strengthening Bonds

Where is Alice in all of this?

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 06:58 PM · On: New Bonds

Yay! Rose has a baby to protect now!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2012 03:48 PM · On: First Impressions (Part 1)

This story looks really interesting, but I don't want to read "Solstice" without reading "Lily Honeycutt" and I can't find the first installment in this series. So I'm going to do something I rarely ever do and continue reading this story without reading the first story. But could you please tell me where to find "Lily Honeycutt"?
P.S. did you get the las name "Honeycutt" from the Vampire Dairies? Because that's Matt's last name, as well, so...

Author's Response:

Thank you for posting the review. I have taken "Lily Honeycutt" off of the board because I'm creating a stand alone story about Lily. I will email it to you if you send me your email address. My email is tochunadu@gmail.com. Put Lily Honeycutt in the subject so I'll know it's you. But in return, I ask that you review every chapter of "Solstice" and "Lily", :) OK, maybe not 'every' chapter, but every few chapters. The reviews help with the new story. You know, to know what people like and dislike about what you've already written.

And no, the name didn't come from Vampire Diaries. Lily and Solstice where written before the show and I had never heard of the Vampire Diaries books before that. The name actually came from my great grandmother. Her name was Lillian and her maiden name was Honeycutt. Thank you for asking, though! ;)

Tonya

Reviewer: supervamp1234 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 01:32 PM · On: Goodbyes

bitch fight

Reviewer: bitme (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 01:48 PM · On: More Surprises

wow i have say this is one powerful story. love that way it has it's little twists and turns. and it great story. thank you for tell it.

Reviewer: shawnaownsyou (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Loss

It's so good! I would have revieweda couple chapters ago but i coudln't stop reading! I am fairly new to the world of fan fiction but this is def one of the best I have read.  Glad you created a few new characters, I love your Lilly and you really made me feel for her.  Thanks for all your hard work writing it.

Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 08:09 PM · On: New Bonds

omg! i was reading over it and i found a funny mistake, not the ones that make much of a difference, but are funny non-the-less.
it is in the part where lily tells jacob that she, bella and rose are going hunting.

Have you seen any deer today?

Northwest, about two miles, he thought.

Thanks Jacob!

“Jacob says that he saw deer about two miles northeast of here."

 oh no! they are going in the wrong direction. hehe, i just thought that was pretty funny, not sure why.

xx



Author's Response:

West... East... Eh, they'll find 'em. LOL

I fixed the mistake. Thanks for letting me know! :) 

ToN

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:29 AM · On: ...and one to grow on

Im so glad you finished it, I had originaly read till Trevor and Jack had showed up. Thank you for finishing Lily's story and giving her a family like no other.

Reviewer: crystal-pixie (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:29 AM · On: A New Life

ok i really like this so far. but bella and edward being her parents is a little creepy and unerving (no offense) but the story still rocks non-the-less. great job.

Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Room To Grow

I'm so delighted with this.  Fascinating to see your take on hybrid pregnancy and birth.  Great to watch the communication and relationship develop between Cory and his family before birth.

I'm also very intrigued by this whole business of Lily growing "up" -- I wondered throughout the story why an 80-year-old being was being treated like such a child by the people around her and being called "baby girl," but now it seems clear that regardless of her chronological age, she was indeed still a child until recently.

"Alice has seen some really great things. This little one is going to make a difference in a lot of lives." -- there you have the basis of a sequel.  Are you thinking about one?

Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Choices

One of the things I love about many of the Twilight stories, and this one in particular, is the acceptance of the idea that people can sleep together without having sexual relationship.  I've always thought it was a pity that we only get to sleep with our sexual partners, which means that we have to sleep alone when we dont have a partner.  I love that Edward and Bella sleep with Lily.  The world needs more cuddling and physical comfort and contact!

I zipped through the first Lily Honeycutt story last night and am thoroughly enjoying solstice today.  It was a little abrupt to move from Edward's absence (New Moon) to post-Breaking Dawn times - I woudn't mind a flash back or some other way of filling in those blanks -- both about what Lily was doing in her own life and how she was interacting, or watching, B & E duirng that time.

Reviewer: lalinda1236 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:24 PM · On: ...and one to grow on

this was an amazing amazing story usually i stumble upon those weird stories with new characters and get a little bit annoyed but this story was AMAZING TRULY I think maybe you should start a story about Cory's life that would be awesome!!!! thank you for your hard work in this story i loved it.. oh also maybe you should think about writing a story about Renesmee and Jacob having a child and what Renesmee's life would be like after she was a grown up and having a child with Jacob. I would love to know what kind of baby that would be part wolf part vampire and part human.... there's a few stories out there about Renesmee but none aren't as good as this one so I would love to read it from you oh and you are now on my fav author's list sorry about the long review i'm just very excited... can't wait consider what i said about writing about Renesmee and or Cory's life and let me know.... =)

-->Niober

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:17 PM · On: ...and one to grow on

OMG! I can't believe it's ended! i can't believe she grew as well - she changed so much - impossibl for vampires lol but perfect! Wish we had more of Cory! this was oo good - feels like could of actually happened! wish there was more but, alas, there is not! Hopefully we get more of our Lily fix in Lily Honeycutt - or is that too finished? Perhaps we could also have ANOTHER story in the series - Cory's story?? Brillaint work TochuNadu! Will definitely add you to my favourites so i can keep an eye out for more excellent work - another great thing is that this story isn't full of Lemon's :D great work :D Ten Stars, but they don't go higher :(

Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:36 AM · On: ...and one to grow on

Wow that was an awesome story. Thank you for sharing Lily Cullens life with us.

Reviewer: chan1013 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:58 AM · On: ...and one to grow on

Love it!!  Does Daniel stay 15 or does he mature to seventeen or eighteen?  What does Charlie think of Cory?  Great story I truly enjoyed reading about Lily and Daniel.  I especially loved the new Rosalie.  I loved Tanya's comment about Rose only protecting her hair!! So funny!  Thank you.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Daniel and Lily met when he was fourteen or fifteen. So he actually aged to 19 or 20 before he was changed. So he was already older when he was reintroduced to Lily.
Thank you so much for the reiview. I love hearing people's comments.
ToN

Reviewer: no_angel (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:04 PM · On: ...and one to grow on

What a wonderfully written and engaging story...I loved it! Thank you so much for sharing.

I definitely think you should carry on the story of Cornelius Anthony Cullen

One question though (apologies if you explained but I some how missed it). How comes Lily can read Bella's mind?

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! Seriously, they mean so much to me.
I think a story about Cory would be cool to write, but I haven't quite figured out how to incorporate all of the characters. I'll keep thinking! :)
The reasoning behind Lily being able to read Bella's mind was the fact that she's a hybrid, like Renesmee. And it just made for a more interesting story, especially in the beginning of "Lily Honeycutt". Not really an answer but that was my reasoning. ;)
ToN

Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:48 PM · On: ...and one to grow on

*Cries like a baby* Loved the story and I hate to see it end, but like all good things it must come to an end *Cries again* I really loved the story and was completely drawn in by Lilly! Kudos to you! XD

Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:02 PM · On: ...and one to grow on

very good!!! i wish there was more but it was good!! thank you

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:17 PM · On: ...and one to grow on

One to grow on?? I thought it was another kid!! darn it!

Reviewer: ali208 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 03:25 AM · On: ...and one to grow on

I absolutely loved the story, and I always thougth that maybe just maybe Lily and Rosalie were related. Very sad that the story is over, but maybe you could do a Cornelius Anthony Cullen story...... hint hint.

Reviewer: SingingSirenSongs (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:35 AM · On: ...and one to grow on

All I can say is wow.  I read both stories in 2 days and absolutley loved them.  I especially like the ending- Cory does sound fantastic and I like Lily's abilities.

 

Fantastic job writing wise! you should be proud!

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