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Reviewer: captaincurly (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2015 05:02 PM · On: Choices
Thanks for the story. I read this story a while back and didn't realize it until I was a couple of chapters in. Anyway, I continued on because I remembered how much I enjoyed it the first time. Thanks again for sharing!
Reviewer: SalazarEmrys (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2013 11:09 PM · On: Aloneness
BloodY fUcKinG hElL ! FanFuKinGtAstiCE story CHaP ! I like the Fucking Language , dirty thoughts and Dirty talk huh ! Great staaaaart dude, i know it.s kinda late to review buttttttt , atleast i did , hah , ty
Reviewer: SangiraChica (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2013 09:19 AM · On: Choices
Very well written. Love Bella that stands up for herself and leads with both her head and her heart.
Reviewer: SCWillson (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2013 12:02 PM · On: Choices
Best story I've read yet on Twilighted, and that is truly saying something. Having Edward repair a badly broken Bella was a brilliant twist; in many ways more interesting than the original story.
Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:02 PM · On: Choices
I have read all 47 chapters this far straight through......LOVED every one of them. Keep up your wonderful writing ;-)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 01:13 PM · On: Choices
Have enjoyed the story of Bella and Edward through all their trials and tribulations. From Edward trying to deal Bella's blood siren call through to her being transformed into a vampire. A story of laughter and a story of tears, a ride for all types of emotions throughout. Thanks for the ride. Especially the ending where Bella gets both Edward and his life and gets her father, Charlie too.
Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 12:50 PM · On: Aloneness
I love Bella's potty mouth :P
Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 08:36 PM · On: Conflicted
ok i love this story but we are in chapter 33 and she still dosent know. i know u didnt want to outright tell her but how much longer are we going to have to wait???
Author's Response: It begins in chapter 37.
Reviewer: Kaktas (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 03:36 PM · On: Choices
Hi,
Thanks for sharing your story with us. I have enjoyed reading it and I am glad it was finished before I started because i was reading it every spare minute I had and I am so glad I didn't have to wait between chapters.
Thanks,
Kaktas Bill
Reviewer: carolinagirl2011 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 07:19 PM · On: Choices
Loved the story!! Thanks for writing it.
Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Aloneness
bitter, much?? poor Bella! sounds to me like she's the one that needs to get the stick out of her ass!
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 02:36 PM · On: Triumph
I wonder if the reason for the long awkward silence was because Alice was trying to see her future but couldn't, hence the reason she could not see her face in the future images.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 01:13 PM · On: Fracture
Wonder if the dead brunette in Alice's visions really is Bella.
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 12:57 PM · On: Aloneness
death by castration. That last one had me smiling for two days.
That had me smiling, too. I absolutely love your new Bella; she's just fabulous. Thanks so much for writing.
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 03:30 AM · On: Choices
What an incredible story! Thanks for sharing it. I have read a lot of stories where when she is changed, the story lacks the luster of the rest of the chapters. This story was amazing! You kept me interested until the end. Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. This story is so dear to my heart. It's wonderful to have someone read it again and take me through it as they review. I'm so glad that it held your attention and that you enjoyed it.
Thank you again for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me.
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 03:26 AM · On: Salvation
Wow! I think I need a cigarette...oh, wait, I don't smoke. Maybe chocolate would suffice. Loved the HOT shower sex!
Author's Response: Tee hee... So glad you liked it. Chocolate sounds good to me!
Thanks for the review and for sharing your enthusiasm with me.
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 11:23 AM · On: Connection
I thought this was a beautiful chapter. His reverence for her was just...I can't find the words. I just loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I'm glad his reverence came through. He loves her so much and it's all so new to him. He has to take the time to figure things out for himself but he'd do anything for her.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Rubicon
Another great chapter! I have a biology degree as well and very much appreciated the nerdom. I don't remember my biology classes being this sexy!
Author's Response: Well it's lovely to meet another biologist, especially one who appreciates nerdom :D Wouldn't it be awesome if all bio classes had their own Edward and Bella as teaching aids? We'd all learn so much more easily and enjoyably. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Reminders
Oh my god that was intense! And sexy! Loving it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Bella was still fighting Edward with her words when it's so obvious she can't really resist him. I wouldn't be able to. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 10:28 AM · On: Shift
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this chapter!!!! Edward makes me swoon! LOL
Author's Response: Shift is one of my favourite chapters in the story. It's like watching Edward come back to life. Honestly, he makes me swoon, too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's a joy to come back and revisit this story.
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 11:18 AM · On: Attachments
I love the emotion in this chapter. It just feels so real. I enjoyed the struggle with which she tries to convince herself of not being attatched to anyone.
Author's Response: I'm glad it felt real. That's what I intended. You start to get a glimpse inside Bella's head and the pain that she lives in, in this chapter. I think everyone, at one point or another in life, wants to convince himself/herself that if they just don't believe something is true, it won't be. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 11:53 PM · On: Escape
Wow! You really know how to tell a story. Loving it so far!
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. And thanks for taking a moment to tell me. I appreciate the effort!
Reviewer: corrina318 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 12:53 AM · On: Choices
Thank you for sharing a wonderful story with us. I was hooked from the first chapter.
I thought there for a mintue we might lose Bella and I was sad.
Author's Response: This story was a labour of love. It was my pleasure to share it. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for talking the time to read it and for leaving a review.
Reviewer: corrina318 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 10:58 AM · On: Shift
I really like the end of the chapter, How Edward relized he loved Bella
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. It was one of my favourite moments in the story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: miasmiclouds (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Choices
I just found your story and read it over two days. It's mesmerising, so often well-written--the thoughts, emotions, and actions of the charcaters shine through in so many ways. Thank you for sharing with us.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. What a nice thing to say. I still love this story; it's very near and dear to my heart. I love it when someone stumbles upon it and enjoys it. Thanks for letting me know.
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