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Reviewer: Peonies (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmm..I urge you to finish this story..I really find it very interesting..I'd Love to know how it ends!! :)
Reviewer: vampOtto (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
i like the idea of this story, i haven't heard of the other book though, update soon :)
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
I hhaven't heard of the book or movie or whatever it is that you've combined with twilight,
but i like the idea and i hope you update (y)
CC: Break your writing up a bit, use more description.
x x Cassie
Author's Response: Cassie,
Thanks for the heads-up about breaking up the paragraphs! I didn't realise that they were as blocked as it looked ok in word (and I'll admit I only glanced at it for the briefest of seconds before submitting it!)
The next chapter will be up soon - just tweaking a few small areas and so I'll definitely break it up!!
Thank you for reviewing.
Charli
xx
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love it! Very creative......Please update soon. I anxiously look forward to reading more!
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