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Reviewer: VampGirlInLoveWithJared (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 8

Cool!!!!! Next one *puppy-dog face*

Reviewer: kadds (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

Loved it so far! You have to continue on(: 

Reviewer: Unconnected (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 8

great story - can't wait to hear more.

Reviewer: Rosalie Lillian Potter (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 8

great story, I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: sistergrimm (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 8

very intruiging

 

Reviewer: cranberryblue (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh my god, That made me laugh so much.

"On the count of three..."

I'm actually crying now, maybe i'm just weird but it was hysterical.

I love night world and I love twilight-- cool idea combining the two, it works well and i didn't think it would.

Kudos.

 

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 8

 very interesting... keep it coming

Reviewer: Lovely-Lethal (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 8

Ok, so I realised that I didn't review when I finished reading this chapter a while ago, which was stupid of me. I've actually got some fun news - if that's what I can call them. A few days ago I decided it was time to buy some new books and since my money are quickly running out I decided to buy a book with tre stories in it.. Guess who the author of the books are? I didn't realise it until I came out of the shop and sat down at a café right away and started to read. I bought the second book with Dark Angel, The Chosen and Soulmate in it, and I loved it right away!! I'm longing 'til I get some more money 'cause then I'm gonna go to the same bookshop nad see if the got the first (and third) book in yet. :)

Anyway, I get the story a little better now and I really hope you'll update soon! :) Love it.

Reviewer: twirocker (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

I afraid to say That i keep finding mistakes in your book/storie.

1)Vampires dont need to blink.

2)Vampies dont cry

3)Jacob goes to a school in La Push.

Twirocker

 

Reviewer: twirocker (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

I gave you a reveiw aproxx.2 mins ago.

I have foung onouther mistake.

Vampires dont eat. They can eat but they don't like it because it tastes diskusting and they can't digest it the have to force it to come out some outher way.

twirocker

 

Reviewer: twirocker (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 2

I've only read two chapters and I Love it.

But I have picked up a mistake.

Vampires dont sleep.

Great book!

Twirocker.

Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

Update soon. Please.

Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

This story is amazing.

Reviewer: mtgirl (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! Awesome story.  I haven't reviewed yet because I wanted to keep reading to find out what happens next.  The fight scenes are awesome and I love bad ass Bella.  I can't wait until she meets Edward.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hi could you email me at readergoof@comcast.net I have some questions about the banner that I wouldnt want to spoil the story

thanks Bec

Reviewer: Passio_nate (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 8

I'll review.

But only because you said please.. =P

Your story truly is wonderful. I have yet to read The Night World, but if it holds any resemblence to this, i'll be sure to give it a try.

I love your confident, strong and fatal Bella. She makes me feel all giddy.

Don't make us wait too long. ;)

Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 8

Good chapter. Nice action sequents very enjoyable to read. Character wise Jacob and Bella dont make a very good team both to impulsive. It was good to have Bella finally use her brains and decide to see first if shes actually fighting an enemy or loosing an ally I found it incredibly short-sighted for someone supposedly that has been fighting so long has so much experience to make such an amaturish mistake. Still I prefer to chalk it up to exhaustion and the loss of too many ally's and friends in this fight against evil.. Good work I look forward to the next chapter very much.

Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 8

wow that was an interesting twist on twilight fanfic. i kind of want to read the night world now. i loved every chapter and read it all in one sitting. sorry for not having reviewed every chapter, but i had to keep on reading to get more fill. this story is great and can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: elektrik_lady (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 8

More!!! Jeez!! This is fantastic!!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 8

here's my thread. check out my banners and let me know

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=5683

Reviewer: chartwilightmom (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 8

Interesting way that the story is progressing. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 8

Just as good as when I reviewed it.  LiLa must have had a real pleasure reading this one. 

As I said, for somebody that really doesn't specialize in fight scenes you did a friggin formidable job with this. 

Really, I don't usually get to see many Twilight battle scnes so this was a real treat for me. 

I personally liked how there was that spark of mutual respect between Jasper and Bella.  Given their personalities, I think that was very in character for them. 

Always a pleasure to read, my dear chellik.  Do well in school and grow strong.

Ta

Master of the Boot

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

wow! the imagery in this scene was incredible. update soon, please!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

LOL thats going to be an interesting explanation of the different worlds huh?

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