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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 8
Love the story. The thought of a month's worth of wedding events, oh my goodness, would be quite tiring and tedious. Unless of course you have someone to be with you through it all. I liked the plane flight and how easy they felt together. Now only more so after their evening together. Lunch tomorrow. Edward is wasting no time at all. He senses this is the woman for him and he's going all out. someone needs to castrate Mike so he can't do that to anyone else every again. What a sleaze. Excited about where the story will continue from here. Truly love at first sight on Edward's part and definitely feelings on Bella's side as well. With Rose and Alice plotting for them to be together, Edward and Bella have no choice at all. The plan will succeed. I hope she can cram Edward down Mike's throat to totally tell him how little he really meant to her.
Congratulations on the move. It is always so time consuming to pack and then unpack especially across country with children as well. I remember from a child's perspective about it all. My dad was in the navy so we moved a lot. Wishing you luck in your new home. Update when you get a chance. Looking forward to new chapters.
Reviewer: eternalprincess (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 8
I really like this story line and would love to see what else you could do with it! I know it's been a REALLY long time since you've updated but PLEASE don't forget about this story it is just TOO good!!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 8
I love this story. Squee! Can't wait to read more. Thanks so much for sharing this story and your talent!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
Yee-ha! Go get her Edward!!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, I just knew it! I had a feeling that she'd walk in on Mike. Sure, pass up Edward for the douche Mike, that totally stinks! Ugh.
Love the story hon!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 2
I freakin love this story! I'm hooked bad. Really cool idea, strangers on a plane. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 8
Ok-and how long are you really going to keep us waiting for next update? More, pleeeaaase ...
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2008 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 8
Still eagerly waiting for next chapter. Your story is so beautifully written and the plot is gorgeous, so looking forward to Edward and Bella falling head over heel for each other! Hope you will be done with your moving soon and can post some more wonderful fanfic!
Reviewer: -le jen- (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 8
OK. waiting patiently. i need a update like a mac needs his cheese.
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 8
Lola, lola, lola... you've been holding out on me... Why did I have to learn from someone else that you were writing a fanfic?? For shame. And why haven't you updated in a month? Are you okay? Do you need help brainstorming? Cuz I can do that with you, if you want.
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2008 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
Please update soon, we have been waiting for almost a month now - PLEEEAAASE!!!
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awwww. Yey! Edward gets to help Bella heal!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Your story is just wonderful, please update soon! I enjoyed it so very much!
Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
update soon please!!!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hmmm..Only Alice! Good chapter!
Reviewer: TwiFics (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 8
although I was bummed that we didn't see Edward and Bella this chapter- it was fun to hear Alice's perspective! lol can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 8
Just found your story today and caught up. I am hooked. Its sad that Bella had to get her heart trampled like that. The meeting on the plane was perfect. I am excited to see what Alice and Rose have planned.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 8
Just found your story today and caught up. I am hooked. Its sad that Bella had to get her heart trampled like that. The meeting on the plane was perfect. I am excited to see what Alice and Rose have planned.
Reviewer: darcy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 8
You are doing a super job of illustrating the whirlwind of their attraction for each other. Edward's POV is particularly powerful as he is just swept away is this tide of emotion. Rose and Alice are endearing.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 8
Let their plans unfold!! I would never bet against Alice... :)
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
you have alice down to a T. great chapter!!! WELCOME TO THE MIDWEST/HEARTLAND! i am from Nebraska! and funnily enough like half my family lives is UT! but yeah anyway amazing chapter!! gotta love alice!
Reviewer: adamss (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 7
OMG THAT IS SOOOO GD PLZ WRITE MORE PLZ PLZ PLZ...... I WANNA KNO WOT HAPPENS!!!!!! U HAV TO CONTINUE WRITING THAT !!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!!!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wonderful chapter! I love how they're progressing... Edward is impatient, and Bella clearly feels something for him, but her heart was just broken. And protective Alice... gotta love her!! :)
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 7
How sweet! I hope he makes her his too before going back to chicago so maybe she'll got with him! chicago needs photographers right??
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
awww! i love this story! once again wonderful chapter! keep it up!
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