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Reviews For first light
Reviewer: sleeplessnight (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Learning Curve

i really love the way you described bellas gift =D lol even in the twilight books bella shared alot i think? lol anyway great chapter!!!

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Learning Curve

That was really fun, JxA pouncing! 

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Learning Curve

Wow, this gift is even more impressive!  I'm even more impressed that you thought of it; it's going to be fascinating to see what happens with it in the rest of the story.

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Learning Curve

Your love scenes make all others that I have read seem pale, raunchy, cheap, and unnattractive. Yours was sacred, beautiful and it felt savored rather than voyeured. I usually don't review until I get to the latest written chapter. But I couldn't resist. Your writing is artwork. It is poetry and symmetry, simmultaneously soaring and singing. You write beauty. You write grace. And you completely convey passion and love and wonderment in every playful line of your work. I am amazed and thrilled to read your stories.

 

~Mia



Author's Response:

I don't think I'll be able to get out of the house after reading this - my head and ego are puffing up like a balloon!  8-)

Thank you so much!  The love scenes are some of the hardest things for me to write, especially back when I wrote this.  Passion is what it's about, and E&B definitely have THAT!

Again thanks, your review is like poetry!

blondie

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