Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 02:35 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
omg, i need more chapters to read asap please?!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 01:54 AM · On: 3. Beginnings - Edward
oh no! dont hurt the poor little kid
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 10:56 PM · On: 2. Dawn - Bella
this story is soooooo good!!!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 10:27 AM · On: 1. Compromise - Bella
it makes me nervous that youre going to rip them apart because you reunited them so quickly, haha. you write really well. the characters sound like themselves. im so excited to read this whole story!
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 06:38 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
i really like this!!
wat happend to Ruby?!?!?
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 03:23 PM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
So, what's with the leukemia? I feel like I am missing something. I liked the chapter just a bit confused.
Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:31 PM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
Please continue the story. Looking forward to the rest of it.
Reviewer: HanaEmi (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 08:16 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
for once, I actually like a story where Bella has a child. The boy is just adorable. And you've managed to make the whole Bella/Jacob/Edward triangle not painful to read. You make it so I like Jacob and Edward at the same time.
It's interesting to see a reunion where all three of them are grown up and there is no great angst. Have to admit, I kinda wanted Bella to feel some anger towards him. All those years apart because Edward wanted it that way without really checking up on her wellbeing. (How does he not notice that she only weighed 92 pounds) However, you made that time spent apart worthwhile for Bella. First story I've felt that. Love it!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 03:04 PM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
Okay, now I'm even more confused and concerned. What's happening with Reuben and his relationship with Jacob? What's worse right now is that I can't keep reading! It sucks to have caught up and now have to wait for an update! I'm so anxious to know what's going to happen!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:28 PM · On: 3. Beginnings - Edward
I knew that you were up to something! However I didn't think it would be something so "human". Now I not worried anymore - I'm scared! I love that little guy.
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 01:44 PM · On: 2. Dawn - Bella
I loved the kiss and that Edward didn't back away. Love the connection and love between Bella and Jacob.
I'm a bit worried about Reuben. Feels like you're setting something up with the illness that didn't smell normal and the imaginary friend...
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 12:33 PM · On: 2: Dusk - Edward
I love this story! Your writing is so beautiful. Can't wait to read Jacob's reaction to the reunion!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 11:57 AM · On: 1. Compromise - Bella
God, that was intense! I'm all choked up here. That was an incredible reunion.
Love Bella's son! He's absolutely adorable and hilarious!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Sacrifice - Edward
I have to say that this was the closest to a perfect first chapter I've ever read!
At first it was kind of heart breaking to read about all of the Cullens' heartaches.
Then it got really adorable. Edward - a schoolteacher! I didn't think he could get any more desirable. I was wrong. A man who is good with children and is genuinly amused by the way they think is simply irresistable!
At the end I got excited and nervous. Bella is on her way! Did she know Edward is "Mr. Darcy"? Is she angry with him? Is she still sad? Have to keep reading - now!
Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 07:35 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
That adorable little boy is so sweet, you better not make him die! I think it's rather interesting that he knows some things that are gooing to happen before they do. I do have to wonder why he is mad at Jacob. This is such a wonderful story so far and I eagerly wait the next insatllment of this wonderful story.
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 11:05 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
It was great! Hurry up and get the next chapter up!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:13 PM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
worth the wait.... but.. please please please update!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 10:04 AM · On: 1. Compromise - Bella
that was the most beautiful worded reunion i've read! and i've read alot of them.
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:37 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
I am very confused by the events timing. I was left with leukemia and now we are back somewhere else. I am not sure it works very well, particularly because you update so erratically. Frankly, I cannot re-read all the chapters every time because by the time you update I have forgotten what happened before.
Are you going to update more frequently now?
Author's Response: Okay, so each chapter has two parts. Edward's and also Bella's. So each chapter is actually a pair. It's the same part - the point on the timeline is the same - but the perspectives are different. But this last chapter was very long on Bella's bit, so i didn't post all of it at once, which makes it extra confusing.
i want to update frequently, but this is one of things that gets pushed to the side when things get hectic.
Thanks for reading though :)
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 12:39 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
I'm looknig forward to reading the second half of this chapter. I was happy to see an update in my box.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:02 PM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
OOh. I just started reading this in one sitting as it appears noone is updating due to holidays and I need a fix. I'm so glad I did this story is so well written and very different. I love all your characterisations esp a mture JAke. I never thought I would like him but I do. Can't wait for more. Seasons greetings and all.
Reviewer: twilightvamps (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:57 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
thank you so muc for updating. loved the chapter, love the story!
Reviewer: RaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 12:53 AM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
WOW.. a lot to process here.. excellently written. I'm wary of the foreshadowing possibilities in the last sentence..
Reviewer: blondie9779 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 11:53 PM · On: 3: Endings (Part 1) - Bella
I forgot how much I like your story! I re-read the whole thing this morning before reading the update. Thank you so much for updating! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 10:55 AM · On: 1. Compromise - Bella
This chapter was beautiful. Their reunion was so emotionally moving. Has Jacob imprinted on someone else I wonder?
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