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Reviewer: rlunghofer (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 17

Someone pleeeease continue this story! I am devastated you haven't finished this great story. You go girl. I hope this is just a hiatus.

Reviewer: rlunghofer (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 17

Someone pleeeease continue this story! I am devastated you haven't finished this great story. You go girl. I hope this is just a hiatus.

Reviewer: Liciapooh25 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 17

i love this story i am soo glad that the keys that bella lost weren't the ones to her and edwards house. poor jacob is gonna be in a big suprise when he fiinds out it's not to the new house. i hope edward tears jacob a new booty hole and mike's parents too because they desrve it. i agree with what one of the viewers said i hope all 3 boys kick jacob's ass execpt i hope they do to mike's parents too. omgosh and i can't believe mike was just like his parents and gambling everything as much as i hate to say this mike deserved what he got.

Reviewer: rdhjam5 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 17

LOVE this story. please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 17

Good luck with the rest of the story, it sounds like a doosy, just do me a favor let ALL 3 of the boys kick Jacobs ass hes gonna deserve it

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 13

FUCK! sorry, if I could I would so kill Mikes parents my biological birth parents tried that when I was like 2 I guess, some ppl are just sick.. good story though I love how quickly Edward made Bella recover and regroup its good for her

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Edward always the mushy tard..lmao

Reviewer: soofine11 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 17

PLEASE ADD!

Reviewer: melw1995 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 17

you defenitley have to write more to that!

Reviewer: soofine11 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 17

LOOVE THIS STROY!

Reviewer: soofine11 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 17

I Love this please add more

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 17

I love love love this story. Please please please update. I really want to know what happens with everything. Please update, I'm begging you!!!

Manda

Reviewer: carlisleistoohot (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh god they are so frickin' perfect its just oh god great job

Reviewer: mint_n_chip (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2008 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

please update this story!

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 17

It is now 2:22am

and i am loving this story lol

but.....sad sad sad

lol

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 16

OMG Were they hired to kill Mike? O my gosh. So crazy... AHHH

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 13

OMG WAS THAT MIKES DAD? AND IS JACOB A KIDNAPPER OMG OMG OMG?

BTW THIS IS A CRAZY CLIFFY At 125AM

AHHHH

IS james going to be in the story?

Reviewer: vjrick (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 17

I really loved reading this story, i noticed that it has been quite a while since you updated but i am really hoping that you are planning on finishing it. i want to know how it all turns out :)

Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 17

I just found your story and am really enjoying it! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: jliane (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2008 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

I loved this chapter :) Edward as a doctor is definitely enticing!

Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 17

oh, I'm sad that Rosalie isn't really pregnant, but it is for the better, I guess. That was some pretty hot doctor/ nurse lovin'. mmmmm..... I want more. But, now they need to get their butts home to Sydney before she is kidnapped.

Reviewer: dawningbeauty (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 6

"oh to be that fork" that was histerical. where in the world did you come up w/ that?

Reviewer: dawningbeauty (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2008 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

"Maybe he can help me reign in my emotions!"
omg that was gold. but MIKE? I guess it's a good thing you made him a good guy in this story. ppl often forget that he's not a bad guy in Twilight, Bella's just not interested. yes, I am one of those ppl...
love this story already & you can't know how glad I am that there are so many chapters already updated

Reviewer: Fanpyre (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2008 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 17

WOW i felt bad for rose n' em. and they were getting so excited.
well wen bella is a human and edward is a vamp htey are repressed. wen they're human they can't seem to control themselves.
tad graphic but otherwise it was great!
probably grpahic 4 me cuz i'm probably younger than most of ya guyz!

Reviewer: potterfriendz (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2008 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 17

Wow, brilliant chapter!!
I felt so bad for Rose and Emmett, especially after Rose had finally accepted the idea of having a baby. I'm happy that they had each other for the news, it would have been horrible to go through that alone.
Oh...the parents are following now, that doesn't sound promising. And the keys, that was an interesting tid bit of info.
Now that hospital scene or shall I say, the nurse's assessment. Woo, hee.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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