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Reviews For Alternate Ending to Eclipse Chapter 11 (Wager) - One Shot

Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good writing, wish there was more. Would LOVE to see what happens next. But at the same time, I have to say its a little bit like the idea of your parents having sex...totally natural, reasonable but just SO NOT RIGHT. Thanks. That was fun!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

hmmmm is there a chapter of edwards reaction to this ummm shall we say oral favor or the fact that jacob gave bella her first orgasm? hahahaaa i have to know if there is!!

Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

it a very good!!! i think u should just write ur own story in stead of rewriting chapters from the book. if u don't mind plz uses a pov insead of 3rd person. it would b a lot easier to follow

Author's Response:
I'd love to write an original story, but I have no idea what to write it about. I'll mull it over for a while. Meanwhile, if you or anybody have any recommendations, just lket me know!

Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: ginger26 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Where is the second part of this story?? Man, you can't leave us on the edge here! I would love to read EPOV as Bella tells him (or he sniffs it out of her!)

Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Keep the Jacob/Bella moments coming! Love them! Thanks!

Reviewer: Nian (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I liked it a lot! Did you ever think about what would have happened if Bella chose Jake in the end in Elipse?

Reviewer: vivienne (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sorry........ I just dont like it. Its not that is not well written. Just Cant imagine Bella and Jacob that way.

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was great! :)

Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good! I love Jacob!

Reviewer: jedishelly1 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hot!

Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

mmmmm....interesting......hotttt tooo!!!

I don..;'t know what all you've written yet because I just found this story and I haven't searched all your stuff yet, but...if you haven't written it already have you thought aobut writing the scene in the tent where Jacob is thinking about Bella and E is telling him to shup up his thoughts. Sans this transaction of course. What he would be imagining if he hadn't done this?..

Just an idea. Well written. Thanks

Leesh

Author's Response:

Oh! That's a good idea! I'll have to look into that! Thanks!

Reviewer: JennyD13 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

I kind of figured this would be my less popular fan fic! Tee Hee!

In my defence, this was before I new about Nessie!

And I'm totally SWITZERLAND! ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: miss twilight (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Jacob should die in a bottemless pit of doom !

TEAM EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ahhhhhhhhh! Bella!

good job.

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