Reviewer: One way (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 17: Safe But Never Sound
That was really cool. A few typos but no biggie! Thanks again
Reviewer: One way (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 6: Emotion Overload
The story is wonderful, I'm missing sleep reading it!
Reviewer: One way (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 6: Emotion Overload
The story is wonderful, I'm missing sleep reading it!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2013 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 17: Safe But Never Sound
Jasper has a snarky streak, like a couple of other vampires we all know, it just doesn't always show itself! He may never be totally content or happy, but as long as he has his Alice, Jasper can deal with most anything! Thanks for this peek into a fascinating character! Hope to see you do it again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It really does mean a lot!
There is definitely a fun side of Jasper that no one gets to see. I really wanted to bring that out.
I wish I could write more chapters. There are some one-shots if you will that I would love to take a stab at but right now there is literally no time!
Thanks a million!
-TJE
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2013 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 16: Bloodied and Broken
Of course Jasper never forgot the sounds of battle! Something you do for a century or better gets to be a habit, right? Handy to have that much experience in a fight, too! Had to chuckle at Emmett, even in a life and death situation, he can't help but make a smart-mouth remark!
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 16: Bloodied and Broken
stupendous
Author's Response: Hi Walternet!!!
Thanks so much for the string of comments!!! I really appreciate it! It means so much to me that you are reading and loving it! It's the best kind of motivation!
Keep it coming!
-TJE
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 15: Duped
poor Jazz
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: Night Terrors
love it
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 13: Smoke and Mirrors
great chapter
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 12 : Hidden (angelicwish)
great details
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 11: Flight
well done
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 10: Calm before the Storm (TB)
you are doing a magnificent job
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 9:Memories
mind blowingly great
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 8: Changed
terrific
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 7 : Square One
wow
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 6: Emotion Overload
fantabulous
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 5: Bound
awesome
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 4: Torn Apart
superb
Reviewer: Walternet (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2013 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 3: Sadistic Pleasure
lol... this is fantastic... please, don't hurt me... :D
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2013 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 15: Duped
I can't wait to see your take on Edward's arrival at the airport and then how all hell breaks loose.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2013 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 15: Duped
Kind of feel sorry for Jasper! He knew something was wrong, but was sure that Bella would have no reason to put herself in danger to protect someone else! The perils of not having all the facts in hand! It didn't hurt either, that Bella figured out just how to shield her emotions. Evidently that was easier done than hiding her decision from Alice's gift! Still kind of dumb on Bella's part, not asking to talk to her mom as proof James had her!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 14: Night Terrors
When I watch my Twilight dvd I always yell at Bella to just wait for the rest of them to get there and that James is lying to her! Stubborn girl, insisting on being a martyr!
Author's Response: HI!
I think we all take turns screaming at Bella through the book and the movie. Sometimes you can see where she is coming from but other times you just want to smack her upside the head!!!
Thanks so much for all the reviews! It means a lot to read people's comments as they go along through the story! And your play-by-play was pretty great!
Thanks and keep the reviews coming!
- TJE
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Smoke and Mirrors
Jasper has such a need to keep busy and protect his Alice! He has done a great job of mastering his thirst for Bella's blood!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 12 : Hidden (angelicwish)
Jasper is fairly surprised, for a vampire, at how all their lives have changed because of this human girl!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2013 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 11: Flight
Here we go, down the rabbit hole, boys and girls! It's kind of like dominoes, start one tipping and the rest follow and we all know it doesn't end happily, at least not right away.
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