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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 22
Another awesome chapter! So did Sharon meet the wolves? or was it vamps? I'm not really carring what happens to her...I feel bad for her kids seeing as she is their mother.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 21
Very descriptive writing you had me as nervous as Ness! lol I wonder what she is thinking now? Where is Jake? Please don't let him get hurt because of her....
Dixie
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 21
Atta girl, Nessie, just walk right out there and ask him to grab you! My God, I want to scream at this silly, headstrong, stupid little girl! I know she's very bright, but there are moments in this story, she's dumb as a rock!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 20
The Cullens have been suckered into leaving Nessie home alone. She, in her teenaged arrogance isn't mature enough to realize what could happen, and thus is set up the disaster to come!. Sure as hell, the Ghost walker as they call Albert, will have kidnapped Ness by the time the family can return! Damnation! Then the fat's in the fire!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 20
Very interesting.... I see Ness is being her usual bratty self...
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 19
Sharon is such a snake...grrrrr and her son is a brat! lol
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 18
Ok, I'm confussed is Tanya dead already or was that Alice's vision? I can't believe that the Cullen's are using Tanya as bait...well I guess I can, I don't like them much in this story.
So, Ness is unprotected....That is probably his plan so he can take her and make Bella give herself up to save her. Please don't let Jake get hurt...
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
I'm kind of seeing where this is going, and just want you to know, I'm not one damn bit happy about it!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 17
Boy, am I glad Alice has seen Sharon's true purpose, and Walsh's involvement. They are going to have to do some intense planning, to get around those two. It's a pity Sharon can't be trusted with the truth of Phil's death. She either wouldn't believe it, or would cause trouble with the information. Now would be a good time for Alice or Edward to learn what Phillip has been telling his cousins.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 17
Boy, am I glad Alice has seen Sharon's true purpose, and Walsh's involvement. They are going to have to do some intense planning, to get around those two. It's a pity Sharon can't be trusted with the truth of Phil's death. She either wouldn't believe it, or would cause trouble with the information. Now would be a good time for Alice or Edward to learn what Phillip has been telling his cousins.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 17
Poor Renee, she should have listened to Charlie and she wouldn't be so shocked! Man, their getting hit from all side's, vampire's and humans!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 15
Why wouldn't the adults moniter a child who knows the secrets? Do they have a death wish, or just don't bother to think how little kids' minds work? This is not boding well for the vampires and wolves!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 16
OMG what a conniving bitch, this is not good! It makes for a great story though! lol
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 15
This isn't good...Brian is going to tell his mother what Phillip said and then she is going to start thinking about her brother's death....
Brian is a bully. Julia seems sweet. :)
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 14
I'm getting a bad feeling that it's going to take Ness losing Jake to realize that she is indeed in love with him.....I hope that's not the case.....I don't want to see any of the wolves hurt...
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh my, so he wants these vamps to kill the wolves, then he takes Ness to get Bella? This does not sound good....
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 14
I really hope Ness doesn't have to lose him to realize what she has with Jacob. I still say, the girl just doesn't know what she feels.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 13
So Ambrose is recruiting a gang to get rid of the Quileute wolves! As for his plan to lure Bella to him, we all know where that will lead. Right to Renesmee, no doubt! I see this is about to get ugly!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 12
It seems to me that Ness isn't quite grown up yet, or she wouldn't have these doubts about Jacob. I do wish that Bella wasn't quite as anti-Jake, and Renee wasn't quite so pro-Jake. It only seems to confuse Nessie.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
Why does Ness think that loving Jacob will take away her chance for adventure? I don't get how she can use him for sex and then not expect him to want more?
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 11
What's up with that? Renee should trust Charlie's instints. He is a cop, and a good one, for a reason.
Reviewer: Zakaira (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
There is a formatting error with this chapter- not on your part, but on the part of twilighted not recognizing whatever format your file was coded in. I've run into similar problems before: sometimes re-copying and pasting your text solves it, sometimes resaving on another computer or switching between .doc and .xdoc and then repasting solves it, and sometimes nothing works except clicking on the HTML link and manually switching the code...
I hope you can resolve this problem and I look forward to reading this chapter :)
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 11
You would think that Renee could put a little faith in Charlie's cop radar. He knows something is up, he's just not sure what. I'm thinking Sharon has plans to take Phil away, if she can. You just wait. Renee! All hell could break loose any time now!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 10
I feel so bad for Jacob...the Cullen's are just rude...not very likeable in this story...this is a really interesting story though! lol
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2012 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 10
Jacob can't help himself, he's always going to worry about Nessie, it's a part of the imprint. This development has assured that the Cullens will be on the peninsula for some time. Bella wants to handle this problem on her own, but will do so much better if her family backs her up!
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