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Reviewer: cloue (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2015 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beginings

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Reviewer: MoonRabbit (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 15: Prize to be Won

Where is part 2?

Reviewer: dipsylou (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2014 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: Prize to be Won


Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 15: Prize to be Won

Really strange.  I did not think of Carlisle being with someone other than Esme.

Thanks - Xanath

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Battle and the Aftermath

Whoa, ahem, that battle scene was more intense than I remeber it on FFN. XD This story is even better the second time through, it totally deserves to be on Twilighted.


your fan from FFN

Author's Response:

PlainLittleJane? Thanks for finding me here! It's great to hear that you're still enjoying the story. I should update on FFN sometime this week, so stay posted. :)


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 7: A Human Christmas


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Confrontation

Great Chapter!!!!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 4: A Chat with my Uncle

Awesome Chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.


Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 3: Hoquiam

Great Chapter!1

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Storm and the Stranger

Gret Chapter!!!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beginings

Nice Beginning!

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Eternity

Reading this I realized that you wrote the dialog in the style of the time it was set in.  It is an interesting story and I look forward to reading more.

Thank You - Xanath

Author's Response:

I appreciate your interest, Xanath. It's also great to hear that my research of 1800's speech has paid off! Thank you.


Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: Eternity

Please read my review for Chapter 4. I posted it just a few minutes ago. It is important and very relevant.

Check the continuity of the chapter numbers as well. You will see two Chapter 4's listed, NO Chapter 3. There is no chapter 3. The chapters posted are both the same chapter in the 3rd and fourth positoin in order.

Just thought you might like to know.

Disney Vampire

BTW LOVE the story!

Author's Response:

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Hey Disneyvampire,

Thank you for catching that. It was an easy fix but I have NO idea how it happened. I guess Chapter 3 was somehow thrown into “limbo” inside Chapter 4, and had to be “kicked” out... or something. (Which is sad because 3 was a very important chapter.) I'm so sorry – the chapters should be in order now.

And thank you for your interest in my story! I'm on Chapter 45 on, so I plan to slowly upload the chapters to Twilighted as well. I hope to see you around!


Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2012 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 4: A Chat with my Uncle

Do you realize that this chapter is EXACTLY the same as Chapter 3, BUT the title is different in the title line for Chapter three. The title line  says "Ch. 3" "Hoquiam",  but the chapter number is labled  with Chgapter 4. There is N O Chapter 3

They, Ch 3 and Ch 4 are the same identical chapter. and are both are both labled Chapter 4. There is no Chapter 3. "Hoquiam" does not exist.

You might want to correct this. as it is very confusing that there is no Chapter 3 for this story.

Thought you might like to know....

I am anxious to follow the story, but am concerned that I am missing a whole chapter that you intended to put between Ch 2 and Ch 4.

It is a good story and very, very interesting, not the boring usual plotlines I see over and ove again. This is original and creative and fun to read.. I like it a lot! More! And give us Chaper 3  "Hoquiam"

Disney Vampire

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