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Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2012 05:05 PM · On: One-shot
Such a sweet story. I love reading about Charlie and his perceptions.
Reviewer: enzosprite (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 10:38 PM · On: One-shot
Excellent story, really loved how all the characters were written. You got Charlie's character down pat.
Reviewer: Wolfskind (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 07:11 AM · On: One-shot
Thank you for this beautiful story. I love the quite peaceful feelings they have while fishing. You have wrote Charlies thoughts and feelings about everything that happend really good.I like your writing style.
The best is the happy ending for Charlie and Sue
Write more you are really good
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! The contest focused on Charlie, but I didn't want it only to be about his relationship with Bella. How his relationship with Sue developed seemed a good topic to explore. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: such a tween (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 08:29 PM · On: One-shot
I LOVED IT! Awesome job! Maybe you could consider taking on how Charlie finds out the whole truth? Seems like he would have to find out eventually.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I love Charlie, so I'm sure I'll come back to him at some point.
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 11:32 AM · On: One-shot
Loved it. Great piece of work.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: madovabreakindawn (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 12:27 AM · On: One-shot
Hey!!!
It's really great...
I loved your writing and wish you all the best for all future endeavours.
I'd like to read more from you.
This one was really nice and refreshing.
Love ya :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm posting my stories as fast as the validation betas can review them, and I'm working on some more projects, so keep an eye out for me. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Illyra (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 09:28 PM · On: One-shot
Aww! It´s beautiful. Your characterisation of Charlie absolutely spot on. I love the line with the birds, flying and penguins. Thank you for this one-shot.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I love Charlie, so this was especially fun to write. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
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