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Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Down the Street

Vampire and the spy...

Loved the chapter. I really hope she stays the way she is. I don't want her to get to comfortable with Edward... she needs to always be on her gaurd... right????

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Secrets to Keep

Great .... no AWESOME chapter.

Edward's lovey dovey crap could throw Bella off her game... just him being around could get her killed. He is a major distraction. Yummy, but a dangerous distraction.

He is going to follow her everywhere isn't he.

Author's Response:
Oh wow, I read you're comment and almost fell over laughing. You pretty much just hit the target on one of the problems that *might* arise in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Champagne on the Eve

This Bella is all business... I love it. Holding her own. Not falling apart. It is a freaking breath of fresh air.

I am a little worried that Edward is going to mess everything up for her. I mean her job, with his overprotecting nonsense.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Sweet Dreams

I love this Bella.

Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Libraries Can't Help With Everything

Very interesting... I really like it. I can't wait to see what happens. I am so glad I don't have to!!!!

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:00 PM · On: White Caps

I have to say that I'm glad this thing has been updated. It's just been far too long. Edward is great, with his sarcasm and his vampire arrogance. I just love the guy in this. He's taken some lumps, but that's expected after what he's done.

Bella is good, I like her confidence. Six knives, that had me in shock. You've built Bella up into a very big person. My sole advice is that at some point or another, cut Bella down a little bit. Because nobody is invincible and everybody falls at some point. Have her in a situation with a vampire and have her holding the short end of the stick, alone and helpless, just like with James.

Ta

Master of the boot

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:00 PM · On: White Caps

yay update! i love this story, ccan't wait for more =D

Reviewer: Chicke (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:25 PM · On: White Caps

great chapter keep up the good work!

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:21 PM · On: White Caps

i lke it so far. i like the idea of your story.

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:08 PM · On: White Caps

This is just getting good! I love how strong and independent Bella is, don't let her loose that just because she got Edward back! You should have some cool fight scenes with Bella and Edward fighting together and blowing everybody's mind! lol

Reviewer: MissWafflez (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Down the Street

This is such a great story Post soon : P

Reviewer: lucydeon (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Down the Street

Can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Down the Street

I have to say that this is absoloutely heart warming. The frozen maiden has thawed under spring's warmth. The imagery about colors really did the trick. Won't those bastards at Zeta be surprised at what vampires are really like. I can't wait to see them get schooled.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Down the Street

I love this story. It has all of the makings to be an epic adventure. I ove the chemisty and the tension between Edward and Bella. I can't wait to read more as this story develops. I think about it all of the time. I can't wait to read more!!!!

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Down the Street

omg yay an update! i love this story! tho i want to learn more on how bella defended herself from the vampires, like did she just go all ninja on their asses and shoot flames out of her ass? awesomeness i can hardly wait for the next chapter =D

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Down the Street

ooh this is good! deadly bella, ooh lala, lols.

Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Down the Street

This was much more cheerful than the last chapter. glad you're back.

Reviewer: LenaBean (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Down the Street

Ahhh, I am in love with this story and wish you would post faster! Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: tjm (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 06:21 PM · On: Secrets to Keep

Excellent job. I like deadly independent Bella. I don't like it that Edward doesn't like her that way. I think she described it accurately when she said that her promise would have kept her from living a full life.

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 09:15 AM · On: Secrets to Keep

This chapter left me feeling very sad. I can clearly see that Bella has changed. I just think that maybe she hasn't changed for the better. She's grown hard, I can see it and strangely it makes me sad.

I can't wait for the guys at Zeta to meet their first vampire. Boy will they be surprised.

TA

Master of teh Boot

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 08:43 PM · On: Secrets to Keep

i am really enjoying this. i love your idea. please update soon.

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 11:25 AM · On: Secrets to Keep

curses a cliffie! but damn i really enjoyed that chapter, was so sad when it ended XD...please update soon its oozing delight =D

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 10:41 AM · On: Secrets to Keep

Gah, what an ending. I hope you update real soon, like REALLY soon.

..:Taylor IS Jacob:..

Reviewer: RedRose15 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 10:34 AM · On: Secrets to Keep

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 10:01 AM · On: Secrets to Keep

Wow. Really, really excellent. I love the tension between Edward and Bella. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next!!!

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