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Reviewer: Sarah1987 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2013 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story so much! Found it today and read all 6 chapters! Please keep updating! i put this as a favprite and can't wait to get an email that says you've updated!

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2013 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

I shouldn't be surprised that he didn't warn his family at all, but I was. Hahaha! I'm glad Esme was so welcoming, and that Bella met the family successfully. :)

Reviewer: Karmabites76 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 5

Loving this story!!!!!! <3

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

Thanks for the update, finally! Can't wait to hear more from these two, I'm lovin' 'em!  


Author's Response:

I'm very late., but thank you!

Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh dear gosh.

Okay, I admit. I read this because I used to have an obsession with Mcfly. Guilty as charged. But, dear god. This is the most awkward, funny and adorable story I've read in such a long time. This chapter, in particular. It's so funny, because I do exactly the same thing. You have a hermit reviewer here, so I can completely empathize with this Edward.

On to the next chapter, where I hope Edward retained his driving skills. ;)

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love the fact that you gave a recap from the last chapter. Thanks for doing that and it's nice to have you back. So E&B made a nice progress and Emmet will get his revenge. looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

So sorry this took me so long. Thank you!

Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

I forgot how much I missed Ecto-cooler until you mentioned it in your story! Lol nothing like sipping bright green punch out of a box! yummmm... Anywho I really love your story =)

Author's Response:

So sorry for my late reply. Thank you!

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 5

Ghoast busters beverqges.classic. well we may finally break thae shell.

Author's Response:

So sorry I took so long, but thank you!

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

Awwww... :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

grrrr. need another update 0.0

Author's Response:

It's coming soon, I hope! Just waiting for it to be validated. :)

Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 1


Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: iluvanyandalltwilight (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

Come on now! I've been waiting almost 3 months for an update on this story. Where is it. You've fallen off and that hurts me because I absolutly adore an indiferent and quirky stand up Bella. Please give me a chapter ssi I know this story hasn't fallen off. :( :( >3

Author's Response:

Sometimes, unfortunately, real life issues take precedence over hobbies. Though I wish I could spend every day working on this story, I can't. Just please understand that all authors have families and jobs/school and other priorities just like everyone else in the world, and we can't always update chapters when readers want us to. We very much appreciate readers who are understanding of that.

I am very happy you are enjoying it so much though! The next chapter is just waiting to be validated and will hopefully post soon! 

Reviewer: rugbystarturnedwriter (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 4

That was amazing. I cannot believe how much I wanna see the next chapter. Your Bella is far more awesome than the real one. In fact i love all your characters.

Emmett and Rosalie are my favourite so awesome to see them features lots ;)


Author's Response:

Well, thank you! I'm glad you like them! And Emmett and Rosalie will be around a lot more too! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

Carlise kind of seems like an a-hole going through a mid life crisis. 


I am glad that Edward is talking to Bella and giving her transport to and from school!  The more time those two spend together the better..

Author's Response:

You're kind of right about Carlisle. Heehee! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow, the social ineptitude is staggering. Awesome.

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's actually a really bright guy; he just doesn't realize it yet. Thanks!

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

poor guy.

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1


Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am enjoying your story very much.  I apologize ahead of time - I very rarely write a review - I'm not very good at them but, I always give a rating.  Please update soon - I'm looking forward to reading more about Ednerd - I can empathize with him.


Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm not very good at reviews either, but yours is great! Ednerd is very happy you are enjoying his story! :)

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh, he's so freaking sweet! I want to hug him and bake cookies for him.

Author's Response:

He wants me to tell you he likes chocolate chip. Peanut butter will do as well ;)


Thanks! :)

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

Yay, Edward! :)

Author's Response:

Yep, he's getting better. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm liking this so far. I was the cute little, slightly round dorky chick in high school. Until I started datingt he school's bad boy, that quickly shuffeled me into the WTF pile. So I get it, I totally get Ednerd. ~Jen

Author's Response:

I was that girl too, except the boys didn't want to date me, LOL! Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

edward's so cute when he's actng like a braindead zombie lol

Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks:)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love the "tickle your pickle" comment

Author's Response:

Heehee! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

oh, man.....I LOVE Ednerd. He is such a hot, smokin' MESS!  I just kinda wanna....hire someone to give him a blowjob so he'll relax!! (sorry, dirty...but really, only something EPIC will fix him.)  His inner thoughts about being squashed by lighting fixtures or probed by aliens made me snort.


Author's Response:

Haha! Something tells me he's not quite ready for that just yet, but you never know ;)

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

When he tries to stand from the lunch table, he will probably pass out due to all of his blood being in his southern hemisphere, leaving him lightheaded.

Poor boy. :)

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